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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sravani899

wow soumya mere jaan

what a update dear really loved it alot dear
thanks for the update dear
really sooooooooo cute and sweet
loved the way dev turned into positive dear
and special jappiz soumya as he doent want to come between maneet
amd nice that he doent want to do furture damage
and maneet and small cat fight i mean cov is really nice
ha dev maan is in love not only neck deep but he had drowned in love and made me drown in his love ha ha
"tumhe CA nahi lawyer banna chahiye geet. Trust me, saare cases tum hi jeet jaoge
"haaan?"
"doosro ko bolne ka mauka hi nahi doge, tuo tum hi jeetoge na!"
"dekho, tum baar baar mujhse yeh sawal mat karo. Ab mujhe ghoorne bandh karo...... yes maan she had learn that ghoorne from u dear
daadima and maan cov is really hillarious dear
loved the way she handles the situation and solves the problem
"par daadima, main tuo use manate manate tag gaya". abhi kya hua maan aage aage dekho hota hai kya i mean shaadi ke baat ha ha ha
yes daadima she is perfect to maan and not only u daadima we the ff members have already given the certificate with special note of x-ratedness if u want check the ff ha ha ha
"oh! Really bro? Liar! You had to run behind her for half hour!" dev u r bro is a good liar if needed ask me i will give u a list of proofs ok ha ha ha
ye lo dev started teasing maan ha ha ha right do it dev go dev go
u know soumya after brij and maan combination in geet serial i like the most is maan and devs pulling leg section dear thank u alot soumya dear really dear u r fab and wonderful writer yaar
not only daadima even i cant control my laugh imagining maans expression yaar
wow cool daadima gifts oh wow
heart shaped earrings wow nice selection yaar
"outhouse mein dinner ho gayi hogi ya phir planning chal rahi hogi"
"Maan Singh Khurana wahi karta hai jo who chahta hai!" said maan haughtily.typical msk yaar
ofcourse fled to geet's thoughts he had other work or what ha ha
Yes, he found the solution to his problem so great to know dear
soumya mere jaan u r fab and really great yaar
its supeb and really good and awsome dear
its pleasure reading ur ff dear
and with lots of lots of
and loads and loads of
sravs









sravs,

i did not comment on ur previous posts... i'm sure u dont mind..!!!! i',m sorry... but u know i read themm......... i told u in the pm's....



see, i compensated..!!! and thanks for leaving ur comments so soon...love ya gal..!!!!

so glad u liked the convo between maan-daadi and dev, and also geet and maan...!!!!! 😛


thanks sweetu...!!!!! muaz muaz muaz...!!!

i'm going to keep this short, cos i already got ur comments in the PM and i already replied to the,m.......!!!!


lil_desi_goddes thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww.. MSK is a true sweetheart! please do continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
this is a great ff. pls continue soon. i luved dev in the last part. he's so sweet and understanding. he noes how deadly his wife is and is readily keeping her away from maaneet. dadi is tooooooo cute. luv her in this ff and he r little teasing sessions.

p.s. could u pls add me to your pm list? thnx (:
Edited by aangelis - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
AHHH!!! 😍
like Pari would say "DREAAMMYYY!!" 😆
i just loved this yaar!
the new Dev is actually very lovable! wwopppss! i never thought id say that but here, Dev is trying to build his brother's happiness and Geet's! which is good..
i loved how you made him watch over Maaneet haaaiii!! 😍

please update soon!!! 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
great update
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
im so glad dev is goin away
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
great parts, aww im soo glad that you made dev all understanding and caring, that he will do something to improve his own relationship with nt and make sure nothing bad happens between maan and geet so sweet
and lol obv the scenes of maan and geet were tooooo good 😃
cant wait for more
do continue soon
Maheen xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
Really nice part!!
Thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update
loved it
agar dev nay geet ko use na kia hota tou i wud had luved the teasing session
update soon
btw fatima is my second name
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Posted: 15 years ago

hy soumya.

lovley update yaar.

love dev's +vity and his teasing session.

He wanted to shout out to them, "Bro! teen ghante se khade ho kar baath kar rahe hai, kahi bait tuo jaaeye!"

maneet are superb

Maan, meri baton se aapko problem hai?theek hai, main nahi bolungi ab! Main jaa rahi hoon ghar" and stood there staring at maan.

"tumhe CA nahi lawyer banna chahiye geet. Trust me, saare cases tum hi jeet jaoge".

"haaan?" she asked thinking maan was complimenting her.

"haan!" he said angrily. "doosro ko bolne ka mauka hi nahi doge, tuo tum hi jeetoge na!" he said trying to remain as serious as possible.

"phir se taana, har baat pe taana. Maan singh khurana samjthe kya hai aap, apne aap ko?"

"dekho, tum baar baar mujhse yeh sawal mat karo. Ab mujhe ghoorne bandh karo aur chalo ghar!"

maan ran behind her and stopped her. He then saw maan convince geet for another half hour and thought smiling, "wow! the maan singh khurana trying to make a girl happy!"

maan and dadi convo is

He heard maan telling daadi, "gussa tuo uski naakh pe chadi rehti hai daadima. Har choti si baath pe gussa".

Daadima laughed and said, "maan she's perfect for you! Aapko bhi gussa naakh pe chadi rehti hai".

best part is


Dev realized maan spoke of everything but his new romance. He decided to tease him further, "waise bro who aapki secretary kaisi hai?"

Daadima looked at him dumbfounded. Dev was going to get it back now she thought. maan replied, "who ab mere secretary nahi hai!"

"oh really, tuo ab aapke liye kaunsa kaam karti hai?" hiding his smile.

Daadima laughed out loud. She could not control it anymore. Maan looked at her angrily and said, "dev, she does not work for me anymore. I'm not her boss!"

"oh, I see! Iska matlab relationship status change hui hai!" and looked at maan grinning.

Maan shot one furious look and daadima continued her laughter. He roared, "daadima aap please hasna bandh kijiye aur tum dev kuch aur baath karo!"

"Bro, aap itna gussa kyun ho raho hai?maine sirf yeh kaha ki aapke relationship ab ek boss-secretary ki nahi hai, kyunki who aapke liye kaam nahi karti. Aapne kya socha?"

"kuch nahi!" he said angrily



plzzz conti soon
waiting for next
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Posted: 15 years ago
Loved this update Soumya ..!! 😉
Haha I like the Dev in ur FF ... he's so much more sensible n caring 😊
And cant wait for the next update! 😛
-Mahi ❤️

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