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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_charmed

oh my gawd!!! ek nahi do do update ek hi din main!! 😲😲 . lolz i must have a won a lottery 😉 oh my god both these updates were soo well written!! i just totally loved lovedd loveddd them .. they were just soo good .. lmao i have realized it doesn matter how many times u update i'm alwayz going to want to know more .. read more .. jst get moree updatees overall ahah .. i have realized i'm becomin quite a greedy reader ahahah loz but wat i can i don i think i'm addicted !!! lolz 😆 i need to have daily dose of maneet!!!! ahah lolz so ya wat was i sayign awweeesooomee!!!

part 47: it was tres tres awesome .. lolz im glad u didn follow my advice and make maan follow geet .. ahaha lolz as they absence make heart grow fonder .. ahaha i'm jst imagin wat it must have done to an already fond heart like maan and geet and lolz the effect of the lumbaaiii judaii can be read in ur beautiful update!! awe maan is soo cute he wants to have some alone time with geet soo hee worked night and so he can get some 'geet time'.. aww maan is jst soooo wonderful 😍 .. i swear i'm in love ☺️ ahaha lolz but the whole dev thing got me all worried i was a like noo oh my god .. wats gonna happen .. soumaya better update soon .. lols its like ur heard my thoughts next thing someone updated again hehehe jst love it 😃

part 48: this was just a sizzling hot update!! i jst totally loved it maan ... maan and geet are sooo cute and adorable .. im like in love with their love story .. haha lolz they jst make me swooon!! 😍 ahaha lolz sooo maan is jst soo thoughtful but also very naughty these days ahah jst can't keep his hand off geet .. ahah but i must say geet isn' too bholi these days either hahah 😉😆😆.. and i surprsingly and joyfully loved the dev part .. for the first time dev acted smart .. stopped nt from coming here and i'm glad hez not gonna be issue here.. i actually felt bad for him after this update... hopefully maan and daadi won't be too out of the world harsh wit him.. lolz wit naintara they can be as harsh as they want 😉 .. lolz

so.. you kinda have to like update sooonn kay.. well as soon it reasonalbly possible for you!!! 😊😊




palo,

u got the part numbers wrong...!!!! lolz....... was that what my update did to u????? 😆😆😆😆😆

thanks for the lovely comments...!!! yes, i heard ur thought s and went ahead and posted the second one for u .... so that u cud give me ur wonderful comments...!!!!! thanks honey....


hmmmm me sorry, cud not go by the janta votes this time, had to change the track to maan not following geet..!!! though everyone wanted him to go to geet.... instead i made geet run to him, straight into the swimming pool...and after that u know wat happened..... 😉

nowadays, he can do anything for some "geet time"..... and geet too, can just do anything for getting to meet maan...!!!!

wat maan and daadi would do i ssomething that i wud decide later... u know...as of now, he knows it and i too felt bad for him... but well , he was not right in destroying an innocent girl's life for his selfish needs....

NT would certainly get it back from her bade veerji...... 😆😆😆😆😆.....big time.....!!!!!!

soumya
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Poli.Geek

Dear Lovely Soumya,

What a wonderful update. I feel all cuddly inside. It had the perfect amount of everything, joy, passion, playfulness, regret, deception and fear. I am speechless. Hard to believe but it is true.

As for taking the next two days off, I think you more than made up for it in the last two updates. I am kinder than you, I give you 2 days chutti, unlike you who only gave me 1 day chutti. 😃

Will wait for your next update patiently.

Polki



hi polki,

i guess i can call u by your name no, since mahi has guessed it.... unless ur playing it with some one else...!!!!!

thank you so much...!!!! i'm so happy u liked it..... 😛

yes, thanks for being very kind to me and giving me 2 days chutti. u needed only one , so i just gave u one...!!!!! i'm a tough boss u know....😉

and thanks for waiting patiently, i guess the wait is over now..!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: blueyRu

w.o.w!
i am on break for Ramadan but i come here to read Geet's updates and your FF title caught my attention and OHMYGOD!!

i read it yesterday from 5 am until 10 am and with every chapter i was
it is SO SO AHMAZING!
you are so damn talented!
i love the fact that you kept Geet and Maan the way they are in the show.. its like watching the show reading your FF! and i love how Maan is the same angry man with Geet in the office but alone, he is totally someone else.. and the way you add his anger with Geet alone also is just great!
i just love this! you are great!!
please keep on updating!! 🤗




thank you so much...!!!! i'm so happy u liked my FF and read it in like 5 hours at a stretch...!!!! 😛

i feel so honored... after reading ur comments...!!!!!

i did add u to my PM list... so whether u like it or not, my PM's will keep bothering u..!!!


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Posted: 15 years ago


@neetu: u can feel what ever u want....its dev , u know...!!!! 😉



@anufa: thank you so much...!!!!!




@mahi: thanks mahi, no worries about not commenting....!!!! school and work is priority i understand that.,...!!!!



@cute_ aly: thank u..!!! dev is not completely positive nor completely negative. but i guess he does have an idea of what he has done, unlike NT...!!!!! love ya comments and thank u once again..!!!!


@sweetscorpio: thank u ..!!! dev's guilty and yes, his guilt is justified...!!!!!



@sireesha: thank u so much...!!!!


@yasu: thanks dear...!!!



Soumya

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Posted: 15 years ago
@reva: thanks reva...!!!!



@Jaya: hi honey..!!! i was going out of city for two days...!!! and i could have done an update earlier, but my flight got delayed. i was struck in the airport and luckily wrote out a pert of the update. so that saved some time for me.
thanks for ur wonderful comments....!!!!!


@rituka: thanks dear...!!!



@sumi: thanks honey.,...!!!! yes, dev had the sense to stop naintara...!!!!



@pop77: well as of now, dev knows the truth of maneet. but he still does not know that geet is pregnant ...!!!!! so maan;s reaction is still soemthing i have to decide on..!!!! something that would come later...!!!



@vika: no probs...!!!!! 😛 i was wondering where u disappeared..!!!! thanks..glad u liked the update.



@shaila: hi sweetu..... dont worry abt the comments... as long as u like the update and enjoy it , i'm okay with it...!!!!!


Soumya
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rockin_gal

u really know how 2 keep ur readers happy... this update was just mind blowing, magnificent, majestic, and just wow u really deserve 👏 👏 👏 👏... seriously ur writing is intoxicating & ur just superb terrific... 👍🏼... i wanna give u a biiiggg 🤗 4 making my day by giving ur luvly updates,,,,, but awwww i wont get 2 read ur update till saturday... well u hav 2 give us another loonnggg update 4 testin our patience ok... i understand ur bussy but wat can i do im crazy abt ur ff 😕.. so plzzzz update soon... me eagerly waiting.. 😍 ❤️ 😊




thank u so much honey...!!!!! u're comments leave me happy.. u certainly know how to please with ur beautiful choice of words..... 👏..... so happy u liked it./.!!!!! and yes, because of some work i could not update... but the next part is out already.... hope u like that too...
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Posted: 15 years ago
@subiafreen: i did add u to my PM list...!!! thanks for reading....




@macho_muffin: thanks a ton...!!! so happy u like my writing style... 😛....i did add u to my list....!!!!




@Naina: thank so much sweets.... i did add u to my PM list...



@sona_rai: hi...!!! thanks honey...



@lovelycutietedy: thank u...cutie tedy...!!!!!!



@sarita: sorry abt the PM's...will make sure u get them next time..... 😛 and dev will have to suffer no matter how much he changes... thanks to his wife...!!!


Soumya
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Posted: 15 years ago
Soumya jaldi update kar. Aur plz Dev ko evil mat banana
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: uzmakhan

soumyaa!!! main phirse annoy kernay aagai!!😆😆😆

🤗
actually yaar, mujhe bohot plannin sey tera ff perhna parhta hai. 😆
ay-wee parhney main maza nahi aata na--i first create a whole maaneet enviornment, relax myself and then slowlyyy read ur ff so that i can enjoy every bit of it! 😉 ---haan haan janti hoon main pagal hochuki hoon, teri galti! teray ff ka asar hai!!😆---khair enouf wid my blabberin, a quick comment on part 52:
gurl m in love wid ur ideas!! they are unique and daym adorable!! they touch my heart sirsli!!👏
the note thing waz the cutest thing ever!! completely adored how dadi left him a note and how he replied bk :

"Thanks Daadima and sorry for not making you happy all these years!

I'll make up for all of it, I promise.""

awwww<3 how cute can one get!!😍....ahhhh!! y dont these guyz exist fer real!🤢
overall an amazing piece once agen! loved it uppar sey neechay tak!!😉
woopssy 4got! my fav dialogue---uupppar wala maan ka note aur aik lustrous wala😉😉
"you wanna try tonight baby?" he asked smirking, pulling her closer and releasing her hair so that it would fall freely on her shoulders and back. Geet looked worried.
"Why?" she asked kissing his throat. "Is it that difficult to make maan singh khurana lose control?"
ohh my....this dialogue is juss sooo.....yummmyyyyyy!!! 😆😉😳 tons of 🤗 fer such fantastic liners!
chal itnay crucial point perh tu rukh gai, main bhagi next part perh!!
muazzzzzz!!
love u 1024 GB bhar ke!!!😆😆



aa gayi tu????? kitne dino wait kar rahi thi, ki uzmaaaa kab aayegi aur mujhe kab annoy karegi...!!!!!!!!!

i'm not singing any songs and displaying my love in public for u......we'll just keep it at the PM level....... 😆

nice to know u plan before reading my FF... dil mera khush khush hua....!!!!! hayeeeeee......chalo......... !!!

ab next.. u liked the notes haa.....??? thanks ..!! i send u also notes know every now and then u never liked them,,,?????maan ne ek note liya tumhe pasand aaya??? 😉

even i like the yummy yummy dialogue...imagine... maan actually saying that..!! these say sin the serial also he's been trying to soften and get all romantic... kahi CV's ne mere FF tuo padhna shuru nahi ki...!!!

remember the dark room candle scene in my FF... that was there in the serail today, but a different version of it....!!!!!

thanks honey,....!!!!

swimming pool bar bar ke pyaar....... ab next time tennis court bar bar ke pyar barsoongi..!!!! 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: wintersunshine

Soumya *big hug*

Srry yaar itne din se comment nahi kiya and didn't mess with ur blush control program hehehe lekin I guess computers kharab hone ka season chalra hai cuz my laptop is acting really shitty... So blame it lekin pakka promise I've been reading ur ff cuz I love it, I love the romantic maaneet scenes as well as scenes where you brin out there characters so wonderfully! You're a fab writer... Cont soon I knw ur busy lekin I blame u for making us this greedy for ur updates!! Lol take ur time lekin gv us a big juicy update :P

love you,

~ Heena



hi heena,

big hug to u too....!!!!!!!!!


koi nahi... dont worry abt the comments.... 😛......

thank u heena.....!!! despite ur laptop and computer tragedies , i;m glad u still found the patience to comment... if i were in ur place i wud just throw the laptop some where and leave.... 😆😆😆😆😆

juicy update????? poora swimming pool ka juiciness kam tha kya heena???aur kitna chahiye?????? 😉

love u too...!!!!!

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