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-Priyaa- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Arre yaar Soumya meri fast hain aur main try kar rahi hoon ki apni xrated ness thora kam karoo par tera toh kuch aur hi plan hain.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Amazing update as always!
I have been a silent reader of your FF since the past few weeks.
I have finally joined IF so that I can tell you how amazing ur FF is!!!
I eagerly wait for your and Muskan's update!
PM me wen you update next....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Soumya!! 🤗 This update was just awesome babiiee!! 😉
Maan wanted milkshake so he licked it off of Geet's lips!!!! ☺️
Haha Dadima is a genious yaar ... I loove her in the show! She was teasing Maan 😆
Aur Geet ko Tom n Jerry pasand hai? Yaar i looooove that show!! I still laugh soo hard when they both fight! 🤣
Arre geet .. she's soo clever 😆 She wanted a doctor's appointment the same time Maan's meeting with Andy was. 🤣 .. Maan tum tho bara romantic nikhle .... 😳
just loove these MaanEet moments ... seriously maaneet are the best couple on tv ever!
looved the update soumya!! cant wait for the next one!! 😛
-Mahi ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
soumya
jappiz and pappiz yaar
wah ab tak romance sorry x-ratedness aur is baar puri hassi wah
wah soumya x-rated mein hi nahi hassane mein bhi sab ko peche chod diya yaar wah kya baat hai
"geet!", maan yelled loved maan yelling at geet coz only this can stop her x-ratedness thoughts for few minutes
ye ley time dekne ke liye maan ka watch ye ladki koi bhi mauka nahi chod thi maan ko chune ke liye ha ha
"But I'm not sleepy", ha ha what do you want geet a more liplocks
"Then what should I do?" she asked frustrated a sympton of the person who is filled with x-rated thoughts ha ha
"I told you to relax, that does not mean you have to sleep", he said switching on his laptop
Maan took a deep breath, "Life's not going to be easy with you, honey!" he thought and walked to her and placed the TV remote in her hand and said, "yeh lo remote. Tumhari bak bak bandh karo aur iski bak bak shuru karo" and walked back.
ha ha yes his life is not going to be easy with those two women maan abhi shadi nahi huye yaar aur chota dhust dhanav bhi anne wala hai aage aage dekho hota hai kya
tom and jerry,"chod dijiye. Aap hi bahut bada cartoon hai, aap dusre cartoons ko kya dekhenge!" ha ha so maan is cartoon and geet is dusra cartoon ha ha both r like tom and jerry too hillarious soumya wah kya comparision hai yaar so nice
wow geet answering maan that she is still geet and not yell at him shreni wah
maan iski baat ka matalb hai change her name to mrs.msk yaar ladkiyon ki baato ka matlab samja kar yaar
daadima and taunting maan is superb go daadima go dont stop
daadima and maan cov was really hillarous soumya haass haass ke mujhe body pains aa gaya yaar
so maans sipping means kiss so he had a code language ha ha and how naughty he is i love this side of maan yaar
so its official that chup means liplock
by the way maan i think its the only option u have to make geet quite and i am happy as i get more of ur romance
and soumya if this is the way of their daily meeting then what abt sr yaar paused i know i am becoming besharam a little correction became besharam ha ha
geet not comming in between maan and daadima is really nice and sweet yaar yes geet to knows abt limits and respects maans feelings so great and soumya u know how to make me happy even more and u r great and fab writer dear seriously i adore u alot dear loads of love and muaz yaar
geet taunting maan and getting angry so nice
maan itni chillane ki zarrorat nahi i know u r committed to geet and i am committed to love u even more ha ha ha
anybody can do in broad day light? yess maan geet can ha ha ha do u want to bet
wow next whole seen was mindblowing yaar maneet are even more hotter and i am on fire some one help me bring maan thats it
maan kiss her everywhere and untying her dori ye kya sr ki practice kar raha hai kya
soumya soumya mere jaan i love u alot dear seriously wow now geet is not at all bothered abt her past now wow soumya loads of hugs and jappiz for u dear
so now dev is going to get a thank u instead of a slap with chappal by geet oh no
hubby wifey talk is so sweet and nice soumya
20 minutes u left for us to our imagination dear pata nahi kya kya sochna padega but i think what all i think will be less when compared to their passion yaar
maan and daadima cov again superb outstanding soumya
happy that maan is not going to forgive dev ha ha ha
ye lo how can u sleep maan without geet as u promissed that all nights r urs
soumya kuddos girl i appericiate u alot dear
they way geet is not coming between maan and daadima
and maan tying her dori wow kuddos girl
u r amazing, brilliant, outstanding, great dear
great in the sense u know how to place a character and limits of character u r brilliant, supeb, great in that part which makes me praise u more yaar and also increases not only love on u but also respect on u to a new level which increases never decreases really u r perfect
soumya yeh kya kar diya yaar aap ne mera dil puritarah tod diya yaar
maan is commited
and only geet can kiss him and is in his heart
and his eyes searches for geet
puri maan is for geet nahhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnn
kuch to chodo soumya maan ka jiss se mein khush ho saku
love u alot dear
sravs





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Posted: 15 years ago
Sweetie I loved it
Tom and Jerry...doesn't this resembles Maan and Geet? 😆
and the cute Maneet moments and Daadima is way too sweet 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
haha first i want to declare that I LOVE tom n jerry!! ahaha best cartoon ever!! 😆😆😆😆 ... lolz secondly and most importantly i loved ur update 😊😊 lolz i swear u have a brilliant mind ...hahaha ... lolz the whole update ws soo adorable ... it was maneetiliciously good!! lolz soo i think maan enjoyed the milk shake very much! 😉 lolz these two can't seem to get enough of each other and well i can't get enough of them <3...lolz.. and once again loved the daadi and maan moments ..aww man they have the most adorable relationship! lolz i wonder what maan wil do once he figueres out tht dev is the one who betrayed geet :O .. lolz update soon and more 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
First of MS Soumya., I just caught up on your whole story for the past 2 days. I must say you have a knack for the FF it is brilliantly written..You have MSK all romantic and angry at the same time. Geet as usual in bubbly way.. i am loving it.. btw i do not want dev to come in mess up this whole thing up.. i can't wait for more.. more romantic moments, such sweet way he treats her.

Pls do add me to PM list.. for the updates.

i look forward to reading more of this amazing story.

Vika:)😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
firstly ur a fantastic writer.....
secondly this FF is marvellous.....⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
waiting eagerly for the next part!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Soumya.. ..

update soon yaar :) .. wanna see new twists ( i'm sure you have planned one) .. geet going to farmhouse.. will Maan be her driver ?????
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi, lovely update. Loved the light hearted moments. loved the way she expressed her insecurities as well the way she wanted a reconfirmation of his love for her. cute and the way he convinced her wa also great. Anyways I ma not going tom keep tab of their kisses right in the morning. have so much work to catch up so can't afford to dream about Maneet the whole day. But could not convince myself from keeping away from the posts. So have decided to read & post comments and get back to work. His confession with daadi & their little convo was great. It will be so nice to have such an understanding divine dadi. Maan is too lucky to have one such.Long live her.

Will come to read your next post.
Jaya

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