Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 80

Hi Vrush dearie ...kaisi ho ? sorry yaar cudnt reply before and when i finally did log in i was so glad to see u had written so many parts .... 😊 really love the way this story's going ....Geet finally telling him about her fake marriage and i can just feel their turmoil ...especially Maan's ....bahut accha likha hai dear ...no wonder main tumhari fan hoon .... 🤗 aur kal ke button closing scene ne toh meri jaan nikal li .....the way he turns her around ....Vrush main toh gayi kaam se ....

yar, vru, tell me one thing how do u find so apt words when it comes to describing emotions, i mean d way u portray d emotions welling up in maaneet with every sentence.....
i find it 2 adorable, n hence wish to get even more updates frm u, always hungry 4 more of ur wishful thinking.
d titles u gav 2 diff parts wr outstanding 2.

meanwhile tis funny update, wat cani say abt tis, i cant imagine maan behaving lyk tis, cudnt visualise nything on him except d last line, thts wen he came back 2 his usual self.
in fact tis scene reminded me of Jb We Met, wen tht serious shahid bcame d punjabi munda at kareenas place....

keep writing honey..😊

Plzz update soon for the next part and thanks for pm

Originally posted by: deniac

Vrush.... tune to maan ko character se bahar nikal diya.... oyye n all.... i remember brij so much when oyee comes.... 😆😆😆

nice update..... i was the first to read it..... even before the PM😛

Sachchi dont ask.....ye mera Maan nahi tha....ye Rev ka Maan tha....like i told..she pushed me over the edge..and my Maan became Brij... thank god Talwaar nahi uthaayee...bas ussi ki der thi...nahi mujhe aur Rev dono ko Maar deta...

Originally posted by: muskaansara

Vrush..I must confess..I find difficulty in understanding punjabi language..But still loved your post Kudi😊Please update

Muskaan
..i donno punjabi...such a smattering..i am sure..meine..ek do murder to kar hi diye..hain...
besides mere Maan ka...jo..mere..liye hamesha..smoldering eyes...ke saath baat karta hai..kal...raat ko...talwaar le kar aaya tha....bhaang peeke

Originally posted by: uzmam1

Vru,

Another beautifully written, power and emotion packed update ..

I can imagine Maan's temple like a volcano .. building pressure just about to erupt .. no one wants to try and stop it or be in its path!!! Best place to be is the hell away from the volcano and Maan!!

First day back at work after a week off .. what better way to start the day!!

Well done on yet another fantastic read!!

Grateful as always,

Uzma xx

i loved your analogy..volcano...he is like one..is he not? yes...when he erupts people better pray...for..anything in its wake..is surely going to burn...let me see what he is going to do now....
is this volcano going to erupt or lie low...

LMAO....

👏👏😆🤣loved it alot vrushali👍🏼wowwwwwwwwwwww MAAN SINGH KHURANA 🤗sooooooooooooooo CUTE & JANU😍.AWESOME and this is for u vrushali 🤗MIND BLOWING WRITEUP😊

Originally posted by: Jes75

Hi Vrush dearie ...kaisi ho ? sorry yaar cudnt reply before and when i finally did log in i was so glad to see u had written so many parts .... 😊 really love the way this story's going ....Geet finally telling him about her fake marriage and i can just feel their turmoil ...especially Maan's ....bahut accha likha hai dear ...no wonder main tumhari fan hoon .... 🤗 aur kal ke button closing scene ne toh meri jaan nikal li .....the way he turns her around ....Vrush main toh gayi kaam se ....

Thank you so much...i am enjoying exploring their emotions...which is what drives me to write in the first place...

oh yes the button scene..was my mini death...

Originally posted by: amrita2010

You have expressed everything so well, I always have to search for words to comment😆 my vocab isn't that rich, but let me admit this

Vru, you have touched me deeply with your words, full of emotion, pain, anger, unconditional love and so on

I loved reading the piece of truth as well

thanks..amrita... means a lot..coming from you..