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Posted: 15 years ago

#551

marvellous... 👏⭐️👍🏼

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Sarita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#552

i was abt to pm u vrush, ki why u havent wrote anything on tis stupendous promo till now,
d last epi broke my heart , so tis update was soothing,
i just hope d real epi 2day 2 gets sm lighter, phew...

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: zerro
wow!!!!!!!!tat was GUD.but i have a request.pls write one shot where u show d dark grey yet extremely passionate side of maan.i mean a little obsessive type.u really write sooooooo well, i cudnt keep myself from asking u.

okay zerro..i will write..a scene...dark..and grey..he will be hope you all dont kill me...

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#554

there is something wrong with IF...

every time i type a reply or send a pm..it says..service not available..

will try and write replies to all...as and when i can..

thank you everyone..in the meantime...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#555

Thanks Vrush... With all the angst going on between Maan and Geet right now in the series, this was much needed... :)

Edited by sridevi27 - 15 years ago

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--Revv--

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Posted: 15 years ago

#556

Vroom,

Reading ur updates turns my brains into thoughtless mush.. Only the mood lingers... I am captivated by the characters but ur take on the characters leaves me spellbound!!

U have a unique way of writing - the 2 updates just prove what I always felt -----> U take us to a fervor pitch of intense emotions and the next one soothes our senses..👏👏👏.......

I loved how u merged the epi to the promo without any glitches, it was picture perfect 😛

Now coming to the writing , u analogies are unique..

I loved how the panther is wounded cos of the hurtful words hurled by the hunter in this case Geet.. I loved how the hunted has become a hunter , the way he wants to trap the hunter at her own game, namely get her to admit her feelings to him.. like he said - no more hide and seek, now he is going for the kill...

U have captured the soul of Maan's character.. If he gives up soo easily, it would not be Maan.. He is a persistent and extremely confident person who beleives in himself.. So the engagent update just shows us how he would bounce back.. I wait eagerly for ur updates as they give me a clearer perspective of the characters..

Truly stupefying updates... Kudos to keep upping the bar.. I hope the CVs are reading you and integrate the same sense of character to Maaneet 👏👏👏

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#557

I liked all scenes they were jus fab

The last one was awesum

He jus used his plan n it worked he didnt evn gav a chance to Geet to say sumthg n jus took it as Yes

He was jus fab here

Loved all ur scenes

Can u add me to ur pm list plzzzzzzzzz

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mchopra

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Posted: 15 years ago

#558

It was so beautiful..and i was dying to read more..

each word of it so beautifully wriiten..

loved it..would love to have a new one soon..

thanks

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zerro

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Posted: 15 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: rushtrip

okay zerro..i will write..a scene...dark..and grey..he will be hope you all dont kill me...
no no not at all.u just keep it romantically dark😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉and u wil find NOBODY complaning!!!!!!!😉😉😉😉😉😉😆😆😆😆

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#560

Sorry for the late comment dear, I'm out of town at the moment😊
The first part," When The Doves Cry" part really made my eyes watery, You have described both Maan and Geet's feelings so well👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
The way you described how their eyes communicate their inner feelings, omg, its simply amazing, feels like actually visualising those in your writing👏👏👏👏👏

The second part was superb as well, loved how Maan finally trapped Geet, making her his real fiance', pretending that he is just doing it for Daadima.