Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 30

vruu, that rose had better be back where it belonged. I dont like suprize endings, only happy boring routine one's.

OMG! I thought I'll peep into IF from my work and lo behold.. I came upon your write-up on Hungry Eyes! I really don't know how to react!! It's too hot and not at all an advisable reading material in the workplace!😃

Vrush,

Caught up with the last few updates now...

I liked the scene where she picks up the rose and Maan hugs her from behind. You know I always thought hugging from behind is a way of companionship..... a gesture to show that you belong to someone... and it was so beautiful what you wrote.. And that kiss in the end - cherry on the cake.

The idea of the contract marriage - I kind of don't like this phrase - contract marriage. But the way you wrote the scene was beautiful. I think even in the show we will see Dadima trying to get Geet and Maan married. More scenes for our x-ratedness ain't it?

Hungry eyes - read the title and I was transported back to Dirty Dancing... Wonderfully written. Maan really has bedroom eyes and the way he looks at Geet with all the passion, desire in his eyes - UFF!!

Thanks a ton for the pm dear. And your posts always make me smile..

Love,
Ash

Originally posted by: SWKIA

vruu, that rose had better be back where it belonged. I dont like suprize endings, only happy boring routine one's.

All better be well,

you write wonderful dear. jhappiz

oh yes..swi..it made it to Geet...thank god...

hungry eyes is awesome.... i reach office early morning i what a feast u give me..... thanks vrush.....

You are welcome Gouri...anytime... this cook is always ready with the broth for the hungry...

Wow Vrush...the last two were phenomenal...you describe Geet's and Maan's haalaat so accurately and with so much detail...i can literally feel what they are feeling...great writing.

And thanks for the song...loved them...and very apt for Geet and Maan respectively!!!

thank you babes...

i am on a roll..just unearthed the words from the scene in M&B thread..
my it was exact lines..they had used...amazing...am i that good?

btw..i have completed the journey of the rose...

everyone knows what happened so did it in verse..do read..when you have time..

Hi Vrushali ...loved the way you wrote about the turmoil in Geets mind .....and i guess many of us , at some point in life face the IF ONLY in our lives ......to hunt for a bride for him will be utter torture for Geet but to see him happy she'll do anything .....
like u said , its so true ......
That is power of love….set if free, if it comes back to you, cherish it for life, if it doesn't it was never yours.



By the way ... u had me stupefied with Maan's Hungry Eyes .....thanks for making me even more crazy than i already am ....... 🤪

My god! U burn my screen and my senses with your amazing writing.. I was soooo lost in reading the last 2 updates.. It was almost felt like I am watching the scene instead of just reading it...