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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesum update
Liked the way Geet buyed that sherwani for Maan witout thking much abt money na ll
Liked their phone convo Geet was annoying Maan😆😆
Dev never leaves a chance to tease Maan
Geet n Dev's 1st encounter
Musibats are on Geet's way
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg that was too goooooood
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue reli soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG...Geet will be meeting Dev...can't wait to know wat happens next...!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey wonderful update...

the suspense is killing yaar...
aise mat chodo yaar.....
i m absolutely glued to the PC to kno whats gonna happen next
ur updates are great...
reva
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyy...
Awesome update...
Geet and dev coming face to face...
What's gonna happen next???
Can't wait till the next part..
Pls cont.soon..and happy friendship day to you too 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update.loved it.
but oh no geet and dev will meet now,.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Its too good
Plsssssss continue soooooon
waiting..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
hellow frens...thankx for ur support ...i m truely thankful to u...that u liked dev's entry too....
the update is on its way ....
i m feeling numb to post the next update ....its bit dramatic...but couldnt help .....
i hope i can keep the fic upto ur expectations....
fingers crossed....
update coming in next post .....
plz be there with me...thanx again for every support ..!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
part 17

Now the situation is like this...

~ Maan lost .. blushing at the thought of devs last sentence ... "she will be be perfectly urs..."while sasha tried to draw his attention back to the clients ..

~ dev is on his way to meet geet to hand her over maan's cards ....thinking of the secretary ...he wondered ..what can be his brothers choice.....!!

~ geet waited there impatiently .....for maan's brother ..............!!

kitna time laga raha hai yeh sir ka bhai...!! kab ayega.... .while pacing back n forth

I hope he looks like sir only ....ottteri geet ...yeh kya kia tune....??sir se unke bhai ka naam puchna to mai bhul hi gayi...ab kya hoga babaji...!!ab agar maine sir ko dobara ph karne jaungi to unka bhai laut na jaye bina mujhe mile......and if I disturb him again in mid of the meeting he will definitely eat me up.....!! isse aacha hoga mai yehi wait karu...unko to mera nam pata hi hoga na....

Waisebhi ...sir ka bhai....sir ke tarah hi dikhega na...mai bekar me soch rahi hu....she assured herself....

Offhoooo..!!!!.....she peeped down from 5th floor......aur kitna der lagayega ...!!!! she impatiently looked down to the ground floor ..

And what she saw turned her world upside down........

Dev.......dev jiii....vo dev ji hi hai na......!!!! she stood there frozen.....

Dev was entering the shoppers stop ...he was moving towards the escalator of the gorund floor....

Dev jiiiiii.....she ran at the top of her speed clutching the bags in her hands.. ....trying hard to move forth between the rushes of peoples in the mall.....she ran to the escalator going down....she ran over the escalator pushing people aside....everybody present there looked at her ...thought she has lost it ....

Yes!!....she had lost it.....

Dev jiii....she shouted again.....sweating profusely .....gasping .......she ran down to 3rd floor.....when dev was on the 1st floor....

She ran to 2nd floor by using the stairs....

When she reached there...she didn't find dev there.....she looked upward ...and found dev at 3 rd floor....

Again she ran upward....this time she didn't do the mistake of using stairs....she cant let him go out of his sight.......

She ran without taking a single breath....

As She reached 4th floor she saw dev trying to take the escalator of 5th floor....they both were in a same floor...it was a huge rush on the escaletor ......as well a huge rush between him and geet .....she ran at the top her speed to reach 5th floor before him .....she used stairs again....she reached 5th floor again a long before dev could reach there...he was moving upward....geet stood there frozen....

Dev ji.....par mai unse kahungi kya...????

He is married ..why m I running after him....do I hav anything to say to him...?anything to ask for....it's him who had left me after the wedding night..

mera baccha .....to jayej hi nahi hai.....kya mangu unse.....nayantara ji ko divorce deneke lie....???????aur who de denge...? ?mai fir apne ghutne tek du unke age... apne lie..... ya yeh jo baccha who chahte hi nahi ....iske lie bhikh mangungi......????

She remembered the way dev n nayantara laughed at her after entering the airport.....the way nayantara tried to convince her for the abortion.....

She stood there entrenched....

Dev passed infront of him without looking at her .....he didn't notice her either ...she didn't feel like to stop him.....

Dev was gone.....she stood there deep-rooted...

Yeh maine kya kia.....?dev ji ...inhi ke lie maine hoshiyarpur chodhi thi na....yeh aaye....aur chale bhi gaye.....?? I have just let him go.......i didn't call him .....

Why did I do this...?

If I have told him to divorce naintara and remarry ...mightbe he would hav agreed to do it ...at least for the sake of his child......apna lete mujhe..me..par maine unhe roka kiu nahi....Unko samjha ne kelie hi to mai unhe dhundh rahi thi....i had left no stones unturned to find him.....

But .... us din ke baad mai kabhi dobara embassy gayai hi nahi....whats wrong with me...how did I forget to go there .i had just stopped searching for him..

Areee....mai embassy nahi ja payi kiu ki maan sir...unhone to mujhe pareshan karke rakkha tha...

Ohh really ...u have forgotten ur own husband !! ...whatever may be the problem is...how can u forget ur husband geet ......?her inner voice was very much rude..... taunted her ....

She was fighting with her brain ....with her self....trying support her own actions..while for the first time she is facing the truth of her mind...

Ohh...so u want to say ...that u have changed ur priority ...?

Geeet ....why didn't you stop him geet ..?...tujhe ek bar bhi who shadi....woh rat unke sath bitayi huyi yaad nahi aayi...???

Nahiii...nahi aayi yaad.....bohot bura kia unhone mere sath....he had made my life miserable,,,because of him my family wanted to kill me....

Par use sudhara bhi to ja sakta tha..hai na...if u had asked him...if u had urself told him about ur child...you could at least give him a scope..??...and if it comes about your family ..they are like that only ...it was just dev incident made u realize what the thing ur family is....

She was fighting hard with herself...tears flowing from her eyes...

Ya fir tu sudharna chahti hi nahi thi ....?u didn't want to give him a scope....u were afraid of his coming back to your life.

Geet had no answer

Tune dev ji ke bareme is 2 mahine me kitni bar socha hai geet...!!

i didn't have time.....woh maan sir ne....she mumbled..

Ohh really ..tell me one good thing geet ....you find only one name as ur explanation.. responsible for ur all actions..that ur MAAN SIR..dont lie to urself geet....if u had really wanted u could search dev at least u could remember him ......u did not geet ....u have changed geeet ....her self was yelling at her ....

No..its not that ....woh mai pareshan thi...maan sir bohot pareshan the....

Maan sir pareshan the geet ...? islie tu pareshan thi....?

Nahi....mai....maan sir sach me akele the...

Ohh...to tu unke humsafar banna chahti thi...

Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......mai to bas madat kar rahi thi....

Tu Madat kar rahi thi..!!wow..!!!..madat karte karte tu apne pati ko bhul gayi...

Who mera pati nahi hai....woh mujhe chodhke chala gaya tha....woh to maan sir hai jiske wajah se mai aaj iha jinda khari hu.....

Maaan sir......... maan sir..... maan sir....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tere dunia me to sirf tere maan sir hi the na....abhi bhi hai.....is waqt jab tujhe dev ke bareme sochna chahiye ....tu maan sir ke bareme sochi ja rahi hai....

Geet u r pregnant by dev.....maan sir tera nahi hai...tu sirf unke employee hai....you havnt told him all the truths about yourself..

Par ..agar woh naraj ho gaye to.....

Tujhe kiu itni fikar hai geet ...? maan sir ko kuch bhi ho.....tu to bas unki employee hai na....u r not supposed to think of all this things....

No...i m just....

Haan tu.......tere lie sirf aur sirf maan sir important hai......aur koi nahii....dev bhi nahi...tu dev ko bhul gayi hai.....

Nahiiii...yeh sach nahi hai.......she tried shouting ...

Yehi sach hai.....maan sir hi teri dunia hai.....

Nahi....mai unse peyar nahi karti....

Dekh...tune hi keh dia....maine to kaha hi nahi KE YEH PEYAR HAI....U R IN LOVE WITH MAAN SINGH KHURANA..her inner voice shouted at her at the pitch of her voice........she started getting flashes of maan around her ....she was gasping poorly .

Nehi....aisa nahi hai...yeh galad hai....maan sir ko bohot taklif pahuchegi yeh jaankar ke mai pregnant hu....shadishuda hu....yeh gunah hai.....!!!!he had lots of pains through out his life...

Par peyar to ho gaya...tu gunah kar rahi hai.....ab kya karegi tu....u r in love with maan...her self laughed at her bruitally....u were dreaming to be a part of maan's life...remember what u did last night..remember geet ......accept u r in love with maan singh khurana.

World was reeling infront of her .......she had realized the most bitter yet most beautiful truth of her life....she is desparetly in love with maan....and it was only him...who made her forget the truth of her life....he made her forget about dev...her marriage .all her problems....the truth was suffering her like hell..

"Mai aisa nahi kar sakti" .....she whispered ..

"Kya nahi kar sakti geet" .....a familiar voice called her from her back.

She turned back to find who it is..

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Edited by maanmeet8 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
dats all for now ......waiting egarly for ur views....
u cant imagine how much anxious i m .......!!
kahi kuch jada to nahi ho gaya na..????????????
plz people if u r reading it ....plz do reply this time....
i do need to know ....plz dear ..post wateva u feel..!!even if u find it worst dnt hesitate to say that ...!!
but if u like it ...then plz do press the like button
thanx in advance
nervous
maanmeet
Edited by maanmeet8 - 15 years ago

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