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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwww that was so good
i hope geet does hug him
cant wait for ur nxt update
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maanmeet8

hellow thr ...!!!

is anyone looking forward to read it .......
precap

Maan : "Geet ..!!! tum mujhe fir" couldnt complete as he was stopped by her..

Geet : "Haan ..mai..!!..mere lie bhi nahi .....??"smiling in that noxious way ...

That takes his breath away....

Maan felt a wave of heat running through his body...an urge driving him crazy.

update karo na plz😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
thank u so much dear ......i wont keep u waiting more...
yeah .here goes the update....thanx dears.......
i donn know what will be your reaction reading the next 3 episodes...jolted with truth and emotions...
m nervous...very much nervous
part 15

It was late at evening when maan came back from office..

Geet who was standing at barandah watched him coming back ...

Tired he thumped on the couch ...

At that moment ..

Paani ..she extended a glass of cold water to him..

Maahiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......song played in background

..........how did she know I m thirsty.............

Kuch hai ankahee khwahishein...

jo sirf unke dil ko chu jaye....

kuch hai dard aise...

jjisme wohi dawa ban jaye..

He was surprised but didn't say anything ..maintained his rough attitude..!!

no thanx..!!i don need .!...dont start eating my head ...go....m very much tired...!!he rudely threw the words

sir....

what geet .....!!!maan was irritated..!!

Go and have a bath ..she softly said..

Kiu?r we going somewhere ?

No..she smiled...u will feel better ..go na....she ordered softly .... .

What the hell ...? u r ordering me.....mee.....Maan Singh khurana..? maan was flabbergasted ...

Himmat to dekho iski ....thik hi socha maine...ladkiyan....offff..!!mere bas ki baat nahi...he thought in his mind...now she has started ordering me....wow....!!!

Geet just don't eat my head ...!!jao ihase...!!!!goooo...!!!

Sir....please have a shower...listen to me. U will feel good....please...!..she was not ready to leave it ...spoken softly ..

There was something in her voice that made him follow her words..

"U don't have to suggest me...i know what I have to do..."though he wasn't going to show it to her.

as he came out of the bathroom he found his tracksuit and tee lying on the bed...she had already kept them ready for him.

Smiling he changed into it ..Came downstairs.. he was about to switch on his laptop ..geet closed it lid..and handed him over a cup of coffee..

It was the thing he was thinking off..!!

Maan : "Tumne banaya...!! ohh no....no thanx..."

Geet : Pee lijiye ..and continued after a pause...

itni buri cook bhi nahi hu...roj to ungliya chatke khate hai aap ..!!!

Maan : Ahh...woh ...mai ...woh to...par coffee nai peunga mai tumhare hat ka...jao ihase...

Pee lijiye ..u would feel better ...she was soft yet stern.

He was amused by her behavior this evening ...earlier she used to take care of his belongings after shifting in to this house...but she has started ordering him too ..and but the orders were not only orders...it hinted her concern.

U havn't poisoned it right ....he tried to burn her..

Smiling she nodded negative.. .

she was not like always...she wasn't bouncing back answers..she was by him ..not infront of him..

She was behaving different ....maan's past made her matured in one evening .

And yes...u r certainly not going to sit infront of laptop...go n watch tv..

Geet mere paas faltu ke behes karne ka time nahi hai...jao ihase.dont eat my brain..he shouted at her.

"Sir meri bat maniye...jakar tv dekhiye" she was soft yet stern..

"U r ordering me...." maan raised his brows..u r ordering maan singh khurana?

Geet nodded ..

"Nahi manunga..."he was adamant as usual.

Geet shrugged..but didn't give up.

Kya kar logi...?he asked angrily as he was cornered..as well amused inside .

Kuch nahi...par aap manenge meri bat ...she softly informed.

Accha..? his heart skipped the beat ..

Hmm...she nodded..

Ha ha...over confident ...!!!he tried again

On u ...she replied.

He was bowled out.Maan didn't want to let the conversation continue..

He left the place and switched on the tv...

She was right ...he was overstressed..he couldn't work more..though he was trying to do..she knew he wouldn't stop ..untill he is nt being stopped.he was happy in his heart ..by her taking care of tiny things...and ordering him.

At right time she called him out for dinner..

Bad me..abhi mujhe kaam karna hai...he had already switched on the laptop...

Koi kaam nahi karna hai ...pehle dinner..she was stern again...

Geet ..u r too much !! u wont boss me !! he yelled ..he was loosing temper...

No..u r too much ..she was equally stern...u wont work here day n night .stop being a machine..look at urself...there is a thing called life..u r alive ...do u know that ?

Maan was stopped by her .....what ???...concern..?..care..?bossing ..? ya fir ....

Come ...she dragged him to the table...have dinner with me and talk with me.she didn't give him the scope to continue the argue..

Maan followed her ....and soon forgot about his work by the blabbering of her's ...

After dinner as he was again moving towards his desk..she was in front of him stopping him to reach there.

He was amused...

Irada kya hai...?khurana construction bandh karwaneka...?

She nodded in negative..

Fir ....?? he thought in his mind(....ya meri jaan leneka....??)his heart was beating fast.

Chat pe chale.....?

Kiu ?he whispered while started decreasing the distance between them.

Aree sir aap na sadoo ke sadoo rehenge ..she tried to lighten the situation..slightly distancing herself

Ohh really ....!! mai sadoo hu..

Haan ho...she dragged him upstairs..

Geet kya kar rahi ho....geet ...but stopping her was the impossible thing to do..

Poor geet ...she was trying hard to pay him back for all the pains he had in his life..she was trying take some other's place....pay back for them who have always hurt him........

Poor geet ...she didn't understand she was behaving like his .......... what shall I put in this blank space......mahiii........ but she didn't think the outcome of it ...she just tried make him happy...she was determined to give him back the time he had lost..

geet my poor geet ......i hope u know what u r doing...did u ask urself why u r doing this for him ...u r just a secretary appointed by his dadi ...geet didn't care to think of all these things...

Lets sit here..she indicated a place beside her...

Aao na sir...baitho na....

Maan was amused by her behavior but didn't express it ..he took the seat next to her..And looked at her ..with full eye..she is really behaving strange this evening.

Kya dekh rahe hai..sir ?her heart skipped a beat seeing in his eyes..

Tumhe...!

She was stopped at it....a chill ran through her spine..she looked down..

He felt she is feeling awkward ...i mean tum jaisi namuni har jaga dikhne ko nahi milti na...

Aahh....sirr...aap jaisa namuna bhi to lakhon me ek hota hai na...she retorted back...

Accha..!!! he asked in a hypnotizing voice....

The moonlight... the cool breeze ...her fragrance ...her open hairs ...her dupatta that was touching his bare arm.....her caring eyes...was taking his breath away .... but he didn't want to give in...

Yeh lijiye....she broke d trance...

Maan : Geet yeh...he was dead shocked..

Geet : Haan...mouth organ.....aap hi ka hai na...?

Maan : tumhe yeh kaha se mila....

Geet : Who mai kuch dhundh rahi thi to ....bas mil gaya....bajaiye na sir....

Maan : Geet ...u know it ... I don't like neone messing up with my things..he chewed the sentence in a stern voice..

Geet : I wasn't ...but now when it is in front of u ...play it na...

Maan : No...i don't know how to play..

Geet : Ohh really ...?? geet chuckled looking deep in his eyes..

Maan looked away he just could bear her gaze...as if she is trying to read his mind...

Maan : "I don't play it in front of anyone..i never played it for anyone"

Geet : "Okay ...u never did it ..but now u will do it ..."

Maan : "Geet ..!!! tum mujhe fir" couldnt complete as he was stopped by her..

Geet : "Haan ..mai....mere lie bhi nahi .....??"smiling in that noxious way ...

That takes his breath away....

Maan felt a wave of heat running through his body...an urge driving him crazy.

"Please..."she kept it onhis hand...her soft fingers brushed his fingers.....chill ran through his spine....

He looked staright in her eyes..her loose locks of hairs falling on her face....her fingers playing with her dupatta...her supple rosy lips ..her deep brown eyes has d capacity to make him do anything it asks.he gave in.....he started playing it resting his back on the wall........

Guys plz click the link given below...and play it so that u can feel it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aesF6I5O01k

a melody of a unknown Melancholy started spreading in the airs......trees stopped waving its branches to hear him.....moon came close down to earth to sooth the fellow who had torn her heart by his music ...stars even stopped twinkling ...just trying to feel what is the unidentified desire hidden in the tune......

back at the mansion dadi stood infront of the window thought ....

dil ke tar ne chede hai sargam koi anjana...............maan ki sargam...maan ki geet aagayi hai uske jindegime...

geet aagayi hai....ab yeh samhal legi mere maan ko .....uske dard ke din khatam huye ab...she thanked god for sending geet in maan's life.

Geet ....felt him speaking up his emotions for the first time..pouring his heart out .....giving a way out to his hiddedn emotions...

.she remembered about his past ....she again remember how he was dejected by every single person in his life....she knew he wont speak up himself..the only way get his pain out from him is his music....she felt the music coming from the bottom of his heart and piercing her heart by its melancholy ....she promised to herself to take away his pain...

Bohot seh liya hai aapne sir....bas aur nahi...tear rolled down from her eyes...while thinking of his pains that he had never uttered in front of her.always hidden at deep of his soul...

Sach hi kaha tha dadi ne...ek aisa dard hai is sur me...kisike bhi aankh nam kar jayegi....

He stopped playing it seeing tears in her eyes...he could never bear it ...ab kiun ro rahi hai....maine to kuch nahi kaha ....fir ...shayed ghar ki yaad aagayi...he though in his mind.

Sir....!!she spoke up..wiping off her tears..

Hmmm...!!

Aapko na business me nahi ...A. R Rehman ke group join karna chahiye tha....apko na pura desh sunta hota....

Accha...?? he blushed at this...looking away ..

Haan sir....mai hamesha sochti thi aap me kutkut ke sirf karwahat hi bhari hai(bitterness) ...Par apke yeh sur ki mithas to kisike bhi dil ko pighal ke rakh degi....

Kisike bhi...?he whispered ..he searched in her eyes.

She kept her hand silently on his as a silent promise of being there always......they looked at each eye...locked ...whilegeet wondered how could people around him had hurt him so much .....maan entwined her delicate fingers in his....and asked again..

Kisike bhi....?

Geet not realizing his question ..lifted her other hand to grip his hand in between hers .....kisike bhi...sach...!!

He smiled tenderly.

Geet was dumbfounded ...how handsome he looked while smiling..

Aap haste hue bohot aache lagte hai sir...her heart filled with contentment seeing him smiling.....she didn't know why she felt so rewarded seeing him happy..

Maan looked down blushing ....and soon discovered what he had decided the day earlier..doing exactly opposite of it...uhhh...geet ...!!!

Ab niche chale.....he detached his hand from hers ....though he wished to do the opposite.....

Rat bohot ho gayi hai...he said again.

"Uhun....!!" geet shook her head in negative ... still wished to make him smile more....

"Kiun...??"his heart...his bloody damn heart....again skipped a beat.

"Batein karte hai..."

He shook his head ...nahi...mujhe shona hai ....he got up and was about to go ..when geet held his hand from back...still sitting there...

" nahi jane dungi .............."

His bloody traitor heart thumped with the ribs..world stopped in front of him .....what did she say just now...???

hello frens....read the continued part at page 47......
hope u enjoy it ...plz post ur views about it
thanx ..
loads of love
Edited by maanmeet8 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
its a long update .....but night is really long ......should i update more....how many of u want it ......
precap

Maan felt ....her supple fingers brushing the skin of his neck....he felt the heat of her body ...he drew her closer...tightening the grip in her waist .... she felt her heart throbbing to his warm chest ...he looked at her supple lips....he felt a dangerous urge to touch it ....

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Posted: 15 years ago

Oh Reet am dead...what will happen next...seems to be a YashRaj movie....This Maan will definitely kill so many kudiyan this time with his paasionate look n killer smile...God save them.......

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Rituparnaa

Oh Reet am dead...what will happen next...seems to be a YashRaj movie....This Maan will definitely kill so many kudiyan this time with his paasionate look n killer smile...God save them.......

u know .......i m planning it somehow like that only .....thanx a ton .....u know what i have in my mind....i think u will like it ....if not ...if nethng u dn like bt pm me..hinting it...
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwww y did u have to STOP IT DER 😡
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
i hope she hugs him
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Posted: 15 years ago
geet is so nice! obviously she is in luv w/ him that is y she wants to alleviate his pain :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey update it i m loving it ... awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey ....
thank u so much ......
okay .......frends...continuing ......
just wait ...a few more seconds

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