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naddiya26 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi
sorry for late reply . i read your update but did not added comment as it was my lunch time.


oh he gave his staff a gift .... Angry mr Maan
i like to that he is angry but he had lunch cooked by geet. and he did slept st sofa. how caring is our Maan
soon they will fall in love as it is said the way to man's Heart is through his stomach.... i hope Geet cook tasty lunch
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice ff...loved all the parts...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Interestinggggggg update.Waiting for the next part.
Thanxx for the pm.



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Posted: 15 years ago
hellow frens...
thanx for ur comments ...feeling good that u r liking dese rapid updates.
.m in a hurry but before going i will update the fic..
i will reply u shortly
here goes the part 9
part 9

At morning they tried to have the minimum conversation they can share..all formal talks. In which yesh and no was the majority...maan completely ignoring her..

Before maan goes out for the office she said in a low tone...lunch pe aajaiyega...mai banake rakhungi..

Maan waited a while hearing this...and went away .

The day was going on the same..maan was back from office in time of lunch...they had a silent lunch ..as well after it almost silent fileworks...

Some more words added in their conversation...like...thanx...what do you think about the plan..and u r welcome...but coldness was still the same...

Next 2 days too went on d same...maan busy in office ...geet bored alone at the home...with little file works cooking and taking care of Maan's things..

She has started getting his like's n dislike's.....

Like what kind of food he preferred ..from how much food he leaves in the plate after meals...which shirt he picks up....which magazine he searches for....geet tried to take a good care of these things ..so that maan doesn't get angry on her .although maan didn't notice these things at all

Next day as maan went office bored she ..switched on the TV....idly surfing channels..there was showing some news on Punjab...a village near to hoshiarpur...she watched it with keen interst.that was nothing interesting ...she was lost in the thought of the old days back at her haveli...her eyes became moist at the thought how everybody ignored her presence..her likes and dislikes...nobody ever considered her a living thing ...neither her family nor her maan-sir....frustrated she changed the channel...suddenly something made her brain stop....

Her eyes were fixed on the screen .............

There was a advertisement going on ..on babysoap...a infant is being taken care by her mother......so innocent the child was....such a heavenly feelings...

These days She had almost forgotten about the growing child in her womb....she kept her hand over the lower abdomen....lost in thought..

U r the only family I have...i will be the only one u have...a drop rolled on.

What maan sir thinks of himself....she became aware suddenly even she herself being loose with him....i m not piling myself on him.....certainly not ...i m alone that doesn't mean u r my world...i have my child with me...i m here only for my child...not for u ..she decided to get control on her childish emotions.

Sentiment finds it way own....writer chuckles.

Geet decided to become total silent and decided to keep the coolest relation with maan ...

It was the end of 4th day ....maan almost had no good conversation with geet ...he was tired fighting with himself.

he was missing the naughty blabbering jovial geet ...he was actually missing her..he became impatient in the office...realising the cause of his own restlessness he decided to go home back early ....so that he can have a good talk with her.

After coming home he didn't find the geet he knew....she was cold silent and almost like a robot ...he tried to talk with her ...but a sudden headache made her go upstairs and sleep .

He decided to stay at home the next day....he tried to bring warmth ...but failed..everytime he tried to start a conversation..geet finds other works urgently to do....very soon d list of probable topics to be discussed ended from maan's side...geet was knowingly avoiding him...keeping a good distance..she was not happy at all seeing him at home..that made him morose .a gloomy atmosphere prevailed..

It was whole days effort ...gone in vein geet was not talking at all....maan was restless he desperately wanted her to talk...eat his head..at night he was sitting outside at the stairs...it was getting late at night..geet waiting for him to come for dinner ....but he had lost the idea..he was feeling very much low...5 days..and being close to her ...so far from her....he didn't make out why she is angry ..or avoiding him...when he himself trying to patch it up...it was about to begin a storm outside..maan sitting out feeling the cold air of the night ..there were no stars in the sky....heavily cloudy ..

Geet came out ... "sir .....d dinner is getting cold..."

Maan was lost ...couldnt hear her voice...

"Sir.....its about begin rain here...have the food its getting cold.."...this time louder...she stressed on the last word cold...knowing maan doesn't like cold food or that is heated after cooking ..(Spoilt brat..!!!)

Geet ...tum itni chup kiu rehti ho ajkal..?maan was waiting for her to answer...turning back he saw no one is there...throwing the sentence she had gone inside again....

Geet as usually avoided talking with him ...though she had heard him to ask that .

Disappointed Maan made his way to kitchen.....where geet was waiting for him...seeing him to come in ...she started serving the food...

Geet ....maan called her out feebly ...

Geet knew his voice...she knew he wants to break the ice...but she doesn't want to...

Sir....khana kha lijiye...

Maan took his seat....today geet decided not to have the dinner together ..cause she knew what maan is upto....and she seriously wanted to avoid any confrontation ...that might damage the least talking terms they have.

Serving the food as she was about to go out of the kitchen....maan caught hold of her dupatta....silently ..

(guys.....our very own MSK is really very much passionate about her dupatta ....i don't know whether u have noticed it or not ...)

As geet felt him grabbing it from her back.....her heart skipped the beat again after 5 days....she shut her eyes in despair...haye babaji ..plz aisa mat karo mere sath ...

Determined she looked back...

What is it sir....???it doesn't suit u MR MAAN SINGH KHURANA...always pulling ur secretary's dupatta from her back .....she taunted bruitally .

Maan was silent ....taking time to apprehend what she is saying.....still holding the dupatta in his left hand..

Bull's eye..!! she had hurt his ego!!

Sir...mera dupatta chodiye..!!!!!!!adhi rat ko mera dupatta khichna...sharam aani chahiye aapko sir..!! I m here for job ....n nothing else MR MAAN KHURANA..!!! u better get it .....she chewed the words harshly ....

It was more than enough to bear it for maan ....already he was totally pissed off by her ignoring him completely ...and now this.

The house was silent for few more seconds....

Maan felt his heart piercing by her words...

He was still fixed with gaze fixed on the table.....head lowered.

BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANGGGGGGGGGGG..!!!!

A turtling sound broken the silence of the house...a flash as well outside declairing the start of the pouring ....it started raining heavily outside...

He had hit the glass almirah standing just behind him......all the glasses were broken...blood was oozing furiously from his hand..

Geet stood there rooted...............the stains of blood were all over around her ...

She regained her senses as he banged the main door behind himself...

She ran after him......sirrrr....kaha ja rahe ho sir.....sir ruk jao.....sir......khun ......sir plz ruk jao .....sir plz........she was sobbing . but maan had had enough.....his heart was crying ...not he himself.....geet had never ever hurt him so much before....it was the last thing expected from her ....

He started the car and drove away ......the glass pieces were still inside his right hand....it was aching badly ....but if something aching more than it ....were their heart ....

Geet couldn't stop him....she ran after ther car but could nt reach it ...he was too fast.

Geet came back home....still trying to comprehend what has happened...she followed the huge stains of blood from maindoor to kitchen......

"Itnaa khun.."

His hand is bleeding profusely ...

Geet broke in cry ......she cant stop him...she cant sooth him....all this happened because of her ....he is so much hurt ..how much pain he is going through...she cursed herself.

She was crying her heart out .....sitting still infront of the piece of glasses completely stained with blood.evrything she can see was filled with his blood...

It was raining heavily outside..maan was driving in furious speed..

IT DOESN'T SUIT U...!!

PULLING UR SECRETARY'S DUPATTA....!!..

Her voice was driving him crazy .....he pressed the accelerator hard..

How could u geet !!!just how could u say that ..!!

Geet u never realized ...i was always alone...i had saught company only in u ....first time in my life ...i saught for company ...i saught for support ...

He pulled the break....scrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeechh!!

A black long car silently stood in the midst of a dark long highway ......alone....a few cars was passing it in high speed...it was standing like a statue....only being visible when there was flashing in the sky ...no body noticed how hard a man punched his wounded right hand hard on the steering ...nobody noticed the blood dropping from it soaked in his black pant ...nobody felt the storm in his heart ..!!

Except one...who had given him the pain...but she had nothing to do ...crying poorly burying her head in her knees..guilt was covering herself like the darkness covering the night.
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg that was very painful both are hurt .........speechless dear
Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW

the way u update, so fast i just luv that
n what a great FF yaar, hats off 2 u dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey feeling bad 4 maaneet atleast in ff we can show them together na but i understant if they hav 2 cum close they hv 2 do dis
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Posted: 15 years ago

This was the saddest update of ur FF till now

How culd Geet say all that
Wen he was trying to break the silence in between them than wat took over her that she strted it
He was her support man n she was hurting him like hell
Hop she give proper bandage to his hand n stop behaving lik stubborn child
N i really Hop Maan is safe n sound
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Posted: 15 years ago
well guys ....
i decided to update it again at night ...
shud i do it .....??
i had left in incomplete .....................
waiting for ur views ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh gosh yr its soooo cute... why u stop.. pls update soon... wonderful

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