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Posted: 15 years ago

hadh kar diiiiiiiiii tumne yaar....u r making us get used such superb updates................tumhare dimaag mein toh imagination ki factory hai.heheheeh

lovely superb, gr8, wonderful, mesmerising FF...................thnxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow..another great part dear👏..seriously loved it!..oh poor Maan and poor Geet..their silence wasn't just hurting them,but it was also hurting me😔..aw..when will these idiots confess their feelings for each-other?😡..I hate to see both of them in pain!!..cant wait to know what happens next..update fast!!..great work once again!!👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maanmeet8

well guys ....

i decided to update it again at night ...
shud i do it .....??
i had left in incomplete .....................
waiting for ur views ...

plz jaldi se update kardo..i cant wait!!..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Bul3


<div></div>plz jaldi se update kardo..i cant wait!!..



yup sure
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi !!!!!! 😛

this update made me feel so so so sad for maan....!!! 😭..... awww....geet's words must have hurt him so so so much...!!!! but i guess she was tired too..unable to understand what she's going thru and she simply removed all her frustration and loneliness on maan...😲

hey, looking forward for a happy update next time...p[lease!!!!😉.... u have to make maan and geet make up for all the crying and pain........😆

and thanks for writing out the page numbers ,...it makes it a lot easier to catch up with the updates...!!!! 😃

looking forward for your next update!!!! 😊

Soumya


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Posted: 15 years ago
naaki aur pacho pacho do update i will read
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow, awesome update. loved it........
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg that was amazing
it was toooooo good
cant wait for the nxt update
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maanmeet8

well guys ....

i decided to update it again at night ...
shud i do it .....??
i had left in incomplete .....................
waiting for ur views ...

Ofcourse Reet...plz update....its a very emotional angle of the story....me waiting...
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Posted: 15 years ago
part 10
Geet stopped crying after some hours....went out to sit infront of outhouse...if she can see any sign of his....she was dialing his number almost in every single minute...but all it was...switched off....!

Her self protection..her ego...her sentiments..her decisions washed away in the rain....she didn't care about anything else in this world...except her sir's security and wellbeing !!

Out there it was pouring like hell..

Back at the road maan was asleep resting his head on the wheel.

He opened his eyes with the first ray of the dawn..it was 5 at morning ....he thought sometime..and started driving ...after some time he reached the dhaba where he had come with her ...unknowingly got down from the car ...and sat there still...they were just about to open the dhaba...

Aap wohi paji hai na....usdin who kudi de naal aye si...[usdin us ladki ke sath aye the]..the owner recognized him....

Maan got up...he was about to leave...as the owner held him by his hand..

Oye tuci kitthe chal diye..?todde hath ton khun beh reya hai ...ki hoya paji ...kivein edda haal bana lie.

[translation- where are u going?ur hand is bleeding ..what happened..? how u made this thing to urself..?]

Lajooo ...oye garam pani la jaldise....he called out for her woti..

Look I don't need anything ...

Edda kivein...!! thand pao hun..{aise kaise ...be cool}

His wife started wiping the blood off wid a piece of cloth .and started bandaging it ...

All this time He remembered how geet bandaged his hand with hanky in a small injury in his palm..!!lost in memories of her.

Oye ..ethhe to kaanch ka tukda peya..her wife pulled out a piece of glass from the wound.

Oye samjha kar lajoo aa apne woti nal ladke aye hai...!!he chuckled[get it my wife ..he had a argue wid his wife ]

He snatched his hand back ..and before they could get anything ...he drove away .

Later at office ..he was trying to gain his normalcy as there were some importants delegates are present ...he kept his hand in his pocket all this time...after they left he pulled it out ...unintentionally to pick up a file...but he had injured his hand so much he couldn't even held the file up ...

[[cummonn!!! It was a real wound...not like in cinema ...even after bullet injury at left side of chest'I mean heart.. Fighting for hours ...and dying only after his enemy is killed...fake injuries..sorry yaar I just hate dose overdoings..:P]]

He winced in the pain...at dat moment sasha and dev noticed..

Bro ..u hav injured ur hand..dev came to him seeing the stain of blood on the piece of cloth tied around his hand...

Sasha ..bring the first aid box quick ..dev ordered sasha.

Ohh my gawd ...is bahenji geet ne first aid box kaha rakkha hoga...she muttered in a low tone while trying to find it in his cabin.

Though dev couldn't hear it ..it couldn't dodge maan's ears.

DON'T UTTER HER NAME IN EVRY 2 MINS ....do u get that ?just stop talking about her ...... maan growled at her ..banging the wounded hand hard on the table.

And dev I m absolutely fine...u resume to ur respective works....

Maan stormed out of the office........

Its 2 am at night.....maan is not back yet ...geet expecting hard ..he will come back..she even cooked some of his favourite thinking he will hungry for sure...neither she had slept for a single moment nor taken a single bite of food..she waited n waited..pacing allaround the groundfloor...sitting in the stairs..here n there..everywhere ...she waiting breathlessly ..

D door opened slightly at 2.30am .....geet stood up and ran to the door....

Exhausted maan entered the house..house seemed to be a haunted one..no light ..except the moonlight coming from the windows.....though he had no intention to enter ....he came back...due to a reason....something happened that made him come back to home..

Sir .....a mumbled voice made him look up ..

Sir...she couldn't say anything more...he stood there still...

She reached out for his hand....sobbing...touching his right hand she cried...she was coming close to him..she clung to his injured hand and cried....as if she is trying get over from the guilt.

For sometime he stood there still..neither soothed her nor moved a bit ...then threw her over the ground.

She got up...wiping off her tears and again got hold of his hand ...made him seat in the sofa while he tried to protest ...but this time she wined over him...

She fetched water and food.

Sir...aap peeke aaye ho..?she sensed a faint smell from him.

He was silent...like he if deaf n dumb.

He protested all the time while she was trying to feed him...

Dekho sir....she said in a stern voice ..ek to 24 ghante se jada ghar nahi aye ho...pura din ph off karke rakkhe ho...apne aap ko jakhmi karke gaye ho..uparse peekar bhi aye ho....aab nakhra dikha rahe ho...?chup chap khao lo ....mujhe bohot bhukh lagi hai.

He didn't want her to explain..neither he could stay in office nor enter house nor mansion nor he could go to any known place as definitely they will be curious about the wound...he had to spent the time without thinking of her ....so he was bound to choose the way ...though he was just sitting there holding the glass.so kept mum..

[I had seen msk to drink beer after tearing the white rose]

He looked up to her for the first time he entered house...her hair all messed up...dark circles around her eyes...fully swollen red eyes explained to him that she had cried a lot..still her big eyelashes were moist with tears.her lips were looking like dried rose petals..colour was drained from her face.......he stopped fighting ..and took bite from her hand...she fed him patiently ..then dressed his hand....she already kept ointments ,cotton bandage ready for his dressing ...as if she knew he wont do it himself...

He noticed that.

Tear drops were silently rolling from her eyes as she was dressing it...she thanked god for the semidarkness prevailed in the room..but little did she know...maan could feel her crying from her heavy breaths..

Both of them were silent ...for a long time....niether she asked for his forgiveness nor he uttered a single word..

She sat on the floor somewhere near to him ..as maan relaxed himself in d couch .lying on it

"Kha lo.." that was the first thing to utter ..maan said in a low voice.

Tears that stopped falling again started..

Maan understood...but didn't say anything ..half n hour passed..

Geet moved bit close to him ...thinking he is sleeping..but she was wrong ...he was fully awake.

She moved closer ...maan remained silent.

She came close to the couch ..and rested her head in d brim of the couch..as if wanted to be sure he will be there for the rest of the night ...keeping herself close to him.

[Writer : .i wont say ..one secretary shouldn't do these things ...this maaneet are impossible!!]

Maan whispered "..geet kha lo".

Geet got up with a jerk..she didn't have the faintest idea that he is awake.

She looked at his eye...he too looked in hers..d eyelock continued....she could nt bear the gaze anymore...buried her head in his shoulder ...and weeped silently .

Maan said it again "...geet kha lo..."

She nodded her head negatively keeping her head buried in his shoulder.

"Mai thik hoon..geet"

Again ..geet ..again u did that ..!! her tears flooded his anger ....he could never bear her tears..again geet u winned over him.

Geet feebly got up ...and had a glass of juice ..not wanting to disobey him.

When he woke up later at morning... he found geet lying in the same position ...half sitting on the floor resting her head on his shoulder...peacefully dozing ..!

A feelings of contentment filled his heart ....

Kiu chahke bhi mai dur nahi ja pata tumse geet ...barbar jitna mai koshish karta hun tumhe apne aap se hatane ki ...khud hi pallu pakad leta hun...kiu tumhe barbar khud hi rok leta hun

Kiu tumhari ankhose gira ek boond meri saas rok deti hai ..

Kiu geet kiu....kiu aayi tum mere jindegi me...

Is ahesas se mai kaise ladu geet ....darr lagta hai mujhe geet... is ahesas se...bohot darr lagta hai .................yeh kya kar rahi ho geet tum mere sath ...mai khud ko samhal nahi pa raha hun..

guys...this is the rest of the update of ur desired maneet ...

i was watching geet in youtube...feeling very low now...i don know whats going to happen with her ...poor geet ...me sad.! neways...i will reply everyone individually after 10.30......plz dont be angry wid me,,,as i dint reply neone individually for last part of update....but i will definitely do it tonite
its actually maneet making me very much upset ....
geet huyi maan ki dewani ....
y always after love the pain has to come..why there is so much pain in love..????
Edited by maanmeet8 - 15 years ago

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