Zee's Oneshot- I'm Always Here - Page 4

Originally posted by: verni

Luved every bit of it... awesome write-up..

Will be waiting for more..:)

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

omgg zeeee dat was amazingggg

totally fab!!!!

cnt wait 4 more

xxx

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

so sweeeet bunnie nice one!!!

Originally posted by: anufa

awsum....superb!!!!!

loved it...!!!❤️

update soon!!!

Originally posted by: shalini_s

oops.. Sir to Maan and then Sir again.. not good :)

Originally posted by: Nanthini9

awww that was so cute! luved th whole part esp where geet is thinking wat else maan wud do for her heheheh

Originally posted by: cooljan

awesum os yaar............keep it up................... 👏

Originally posted by: revav

pl add me to ur ff PM list...

loving it....

reva

Originally posted by: Sofna

☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Wrtten sooooooooo beautifully....👏......Loved Every sentence😆

Jst wondering..can Maaneet ever be 'cute'???😛

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Wonderful Zeee 😳👏👏

I wish this really happened 😃😳

It was very well written, bautiful 👏

Loved how u describes all their feelings 👏

Hehe naughty Geet i like what she thought: "I wonder what else Maan will do for me, since I cut my hand,"

I cant believe u made Maan saying "sweetheart" 😲😆😍

Aww Maan is a real darling, u showed his complete majnoo, caring side 👏😳

Loved the kitchen scene 😳👏👏

Keep it up jani,

Do write more OS, love them 🤗

Love,

Humz 😃