Zee's Oneshot- I'm Always Here - Page 3

aisa kabhi ho sakta hai ki tumhari short FF hum readers ko pasand na aaye........😃😃😃

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nice OS jana

Loved the way Maan took care of Geet n was jus telling im alwyas there for u

Maan Singh Khurana blushed Haaye😳😳😳

It was fab

Write sum more n strt ur FF soon

Originally posted by: scorpiangyal

AWWWWWWWWWW

Originally posted by: Chotii

OMG!!! what a beautiful os!! awwwwwwww i love maneet in this lol awww! Zee! its wonderful!!! From beginning to the end I couldnt help smiling! Gosh, the entire thing is written so nicely!! like from description to dialogue, its all fab! I can totally imagine it and from quite a hot moment when he grabs her and in ur words.. "unconciously caresses the side of her" lol, it turned out so sweet!! with maan caring for her n all, n so sweet as well with geet cursing his height!!! lol aww zee this is sooo lovely!!! love the way he was comforting her with his words, with the lil kiss on her forehead awwww and then geet grabbing his vest - hayyye, u got some awesome images together here!!
i was expecting this to be posted tomorrow, but ammm sooo happy that its early! lol cos its just so ahhh great!!! and just makes me smile lots n lots lol u'v done it again, written an outstanding piece on maneet !! love it!!
Saz
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Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93

hey

Awesome OS!!! totally loved it!! 😃
the way maan was caring for geet and all, and aww geet actually was shy lol,

great, cant wait for more 😉

Maheen xx

Originally posted by: desigirl_18

Awww Zee this was soo awesome!!! very well written, OMG imagine we get something like this!!😍 Maan is soo cute, hai blushing swhoo swheet!!! loved how u ended it as well and ur descriptions are awesome!! oh u know i was soo lost in ur OS and i went to the kitchen and also got hurt by the knife myself😲..aur yahan toh koi Maan bhi nahi hai mera itnay pyaar se khayal rakhnay ke liye😉😳!!!

Originally posted by: salma434

lovely zahra !!! written extremely well. i was scrollin down, i did not want it to end 😆 fab work zahra. keep goin!!!thanxs for the pm:)

Originally posted by: khakshan-aa

Awesome OS Zee..
OMG MSK knows how to blush 😳
plz keep them coming..

Originally posted by: aree

wow zahra i loved it 😍 haye itna pyar itni fikar par our sweet geet still not getting wats on his mind 😆
this ws undoubtedly the bessssssssssetessssssst among all ur 5 os 👏