FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet.Part 48..pg190 - Page 17

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi, I have just read the entire (all the 11 parts) at a stretch. Fabulous. When are giving your next post. Please PM me.

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Posted: 15 years ago
wen will maan come to know that geet is his wife?
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Posted: 15 years ago
too gud yaar.......... keep gng........................
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Posted: 15 years ago
Muski!! 🤗

I read the previous two parts together!!

loved it loved it!!

But jsut to be clear- has maan forgotten he had gotten married to Geet..??
haha..paagal insaan..

loving it!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

off course the winning team was geets... it was quite clear with that question answere session..

PART 11

The staff and maan take some time in discussing the result. Maan tries to catch glims of geet
while she was removing her stuff from the stage..maan hears smriti calling her GEET
Maan..wispers geet..and smiles...geet suddeny looks at Maan, as if she heard him...
maan gets concious...and turns his face ...with cute naughty smile..
geet - inhe kya hogaya? wase bhi mujhe inke baate kanha samjh aayai hain jo aaj samajh aayagi?

Results was announced and geets team won the award..
maan was really happy to see geet smiling with her trophy..
Maan was feeling really light that day.. he wondered wat was that made him feel so light and relaxed
Staff and pricipal requested maan to personally congratulate the winning team..
geet, pooja, smriti and kavya were called to the pricipals room..
before even the knock at the door maan knew she was around..he just looked up and took a deep breath.....then there was knock sir may i come in...
pooja, smriti and kavya where taking a pride in shaking hands with Maan Singh Khurana
He spoke to each one of them separately and apperiated each one of them
he turned to geet looked at her..they had that brief eye lock.. he was about to say geet!!! tring tring!! geets phone rings... she was about to cut the call but notices it is krish's call
she looks at Maan and says KRISH??
she says excuse me !!! I have to answere this call..
Maan gets pissed off!!! How could some one walk out on him!! he is Maan Singh Khurana!
he feels really insulted...principal aplogizes on her behalf..Maan leaves at once from there...

when she comes back..the staff and principal really get angry at her... she wondered why
they gave her heavy dose on professionalism....she was upset and walked to catch up with
her friends..they too were annoyed at her...
Geet- wat happeneed??
smriti - why did have to take that call??
pooja - could'nt u just ignore it..
kavya - maan did'nt like when u walked out..it was so ambarssing for all of us!!
Geet - wonders..babaji maan ko to main ne kha tha ki krish ka phone hain..phir woh kyu naraz hain? sachi unhe bus mujh per naraz hone ki wajah chahia...nahi nahi aaj kal to wajha ke bina hi
shuru hojathe hain..
Maan bhi na..aaj inke wajha se sab loog mujhe he gusaa kar reha hain..
no body seem to notice how much hard work i had put in all this???

kise ne kya nahi notice kiya???? says armaan
Geet - hai doc.. kuch nahin..
armaan - so congrats ... lets go for dinner girls...lets celebrate..
they all decide to go to disc and then dine out..
they plan to meet at 8.00pm

geet comes back to mansion tells every thing to daadi..about the presentation, trophy
and their plan for dinner..
daadi - where are u planning to go
geet - ji woh ..disc ja rehain hain & then dinner
daadi - wat r u wearing?
Nt just walks in & says...please don't wear ur salwar kameez
geet - daadi dekho na..
Nt drags her to her room..tells her to pick some thing from there
geet - didi it just a casual party so I will wear geans and that top..

at the entrance of the hotel..maan is on a call...sees a long black car..typical his types..
he is looks away..there is a sight breez flowing forcing him to look there..
amused to see geet getting of the car..involunterly he checks is buttuns...
maan walks towards her... geet has not noticed maan..as she was busy texting on the phone..
they are like couple of step away..
armaan says...hai geet!! she looks up..to say hai..and her eye meets maans
her legs frooze!! armaan gives a warm hug and says..geans cute..lagrahi ho
geet was still looking at maans eyes...maan snaped a glance
geet knew maan was not approving that hug... she held her hands back...armaan dragged her
into the disc....maan pretended to be on a call..
geet - babaji aaj mera din hi tehk nahi hain..subha college main ab yahen bhi.. main to gayi
every one hits the dance floor..just dancing on random music, more of jumping around and having fun!!
armaan has never seen geet so happy ever since they have met..
he asks her for a dance..when the music changes...to a soft number..
all of them pushes geet ..and tells her not to be a spoilt sport..
geet reluctantly stands up..and extends her hand to ...when she looks at the entrance to notice
maan looking at her...she pulls her hand back & drinks water..
armaan goes down on his kneews..just to push her further...
Maan turns his head away.. geet really gets tensed...and say i am hungry...

they all walk to the dinner table...
Maan stops eating suddenly...he knows she has just walked in...maan heart beats faster and faster as he know she is about to pass him..as she passes ..he grabs a glass of water and gulps it down
geet chooses to sit next to the long glass window since it had a good view..
geet and maan were sitting facing each other on different tables..
geet still not realized all that...while glancing through the menu she notices those eyes..
geet- woye geet kitna acha view hain??? hogaya tera dinner...yeh to mera hi dinner bana ke kha jayange
they keep on looking at each other..every now and then, making sure no one is noticing
it was more like their dinner togather!!!maan could not stop glancing her hair, eyes, ..suddenly he notices little curry on the left corner of her lips...geet catches maans eyes looking at her lips..she really gets consious..maan still looks at her, she takes her napkin and wipes her lips(as if she knew wat was he saying).. maan smiles..
Geet - yeh smile bhi karthe hain...

Precap

Maan working out!!!!!!!!!!!

please give me inputs on any particular thing if u r looking for shall try to include
the pace of the story is slowing down..thanxs to spicy scenes but i guess that should be fine by u guys...
love
muskan

muskan.. i just caught up with ur fanfic.. absolutely awesome.. keeps you attached.. to it.. congrats .. please PM me when u update ok.. thanks dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
part 11 was good like always will be waiting for more update but just wondering when will maan know that geet is his wife.
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Posted: 15 years ago

this is awesome yaar !! i just wanna read wht happens next !! update karooo jaldiiii :)

Well done.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Geet - yeh smile bhi karthe hain...

Part 12

Geet comes back home..she is restless..she is blushing..she snesks into maans room..
she looks around try to feel his presence, she touches his towel..she sees the vest..which he wears
while working out...she takes it and holds it very close to her..she could actually smell him...
it was intoxicating...she goes to her room and sleeps holding the vest..

maan walks into his room..he felt as if geet was there..just few mins ago..he freshens up..
he wipes himself with the same towel.. he felt as if geet just touched his face..with her soft hands..he could feel the soft strokes calming him..he smiles and goes to sleep...

geet started breathing faster and faster..she feels a tickling touch on her neck..she can smell him..
she is breathing faster and turns around and feels her lips just burned
as she turned and landed on his chest...geet jumps up and find herself dreaming
and his smell all over her is intoxicating...she looks at his vest!!!
she looks at the clock it was 6 am
she looked for water..could not find it...so she walks to the kicthen..
she was still breathing faster..while crossing the gym..she gets floored..to see
maan..practicing his martial art..he was topless..sweating
she kept on admiring his strong legs kicking.. the curves of his biceps every time
he pushed a punch in air..maan turned to the other side facing his back to her..
she felt a shy..to look at his bare broad shoulders...she kept walking towards him...
looking at those sweaty perfect back..
she hugged him from back...her hands slidded from his strong waist towards his broad chest..
slidding over those aabs..one after the other..her cheek touched his back..
she dropped the empty glass in her hand ran to the kitchen....
she took a bottle of water and ran out to the garden
she finished the whole bottle and was still thirsty and panting...

maan turned to see the broken glass.. he wonders wat happened..he calls for the maid and asks
her to clean it up...maan gets ready to go to office..geet was still in a shock..
ek baar maan ne tumhe dekh kar smile kya kiya you have gone mad!!
don't you know he is Maan Singh Khurana...she pulls the spread and sleeps again
maan left to office..daadi comes looking for geet.. she was shocked to see geet still sleeping
daadi - wat happened geet
geet - nahi daadi mera sur ghoom raha hai
daadi - kya hua? restlessness bhi hai kya
geet - babaji how did she know all that
before geet could say anything daadi calls the doctor!!daadi gets really excited thinking geet is expecting!!
when the doctor arrives..daadi was all excited and tells dr.anjali (family friend) i think she is pregnant
Geet - nahi nahi..woh wala restlessness nahi!! babaji..yeh sab kya ho raha hai
dr.anjali - that will let u know..when did u have ur last pXXXX date?
geet - total confused
dr.anjali - checks her BP..it was high
geet - woh to high hi hoga na!!!pur please..meri baat to suniya..
dr.anjali - writes some test..
daadi comes in..is every thing fine na?
dr.anjali - nahi iska BP high hai
daadi - maan pura din gussa main rehta hain..uska kuch to asar hoga..
geet - nahi daadi ..its not like that
daadi - don't defend him now
geet - defend..aur main woh bhi maan ko??(mummers)
dr.anjali - i can't say any thing until i see the reports..but please take care..
if she is pregnant then high BP is not good for the child
daadi gets very worried..and starts taking care of her like a baby..
the whole day..Nt and daadi are making sure she is not stressed ..
geet starts feeling odd.. she does'nt like daadi getting so excited
geet calls dr.anjali and tells her to tell daadi that she is not pregnant
dr.anjali - how can u be so sure?
geet - i am pritty sure..aap please daadi ko relax karne ko kahiya
dr.anjali - says ok..she could feel there is something wrong!!
dr.anjali speaks to daadi and says reports are all normal ..geet is not pregnant
daadi gets disappointed..anjali adds..I think maan and geet should spend more time togather...


Precap

beehgi beeghi rethe armaan and geet

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please add ur feedback..i just love to see all ur responses
keeps me motivated
love
Muskan
Lot of u have askd about when will maan get to know..geet is his wife??
my take....umm umm!!! i am still thinking about that..
i have the whole thing in place...just trying to reach there...
mean while could all please suggest how dramatic u will like it to be...???


Edited by muskanp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
tht was superb...yaar tum aisi moment pe stop kar deti ho...wanna read more...update fast or i'm gonna kill u...:P
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey again muskan... loved this update as usual... bechari geet kya haal hora hoga maan ko martial arts karte dekh completely understand... yaha pure ladkiyon ka bhi toh wahi haal hota hai lolz :P

Just wondering...when will maan find out that geet is his wife... plz update soon :D can't wait for that part plz plz pretty plz jaldi laado woh part!!!

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