FF*Simply love*(Maaneet)pt27at pg14(note at pg153 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: sweet coco

love it!! fantastic...i wish it never ended...wanted it to go on and on and on forever!!!!

thanks for the comment .sorry it ended 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: muskanp

Wow..the candle was awsome...
The lap part so cute and unique..
Wow plz continue..thanxs for pm


glad you read my ff & 😳 you liked my scene . you are welcome
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: cute-aly

cooooooollllllllllll ff .
nice updates 👏
add me in pm list

😳 added you dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: _SuMmEr_LoVe_

this is fabulous love ^_^
yap maan u said it right
Geet has not only changed ya life completely but she's changed you to silly maan ...man...guy..
up date soon

summer ^_^
<div>summer ^_^


glad to see your comment dear
love change everyone how strong that guy try to be 😉
love is most powerful thing in world 😊 right 😉
Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: anufa

fantastic!!!!👍🏼

update soon...pm me!!



thx added you

Originally posted by: XAiShBaBy08X

Great story, good plot. Update soon! and please add me to your pm list if you have one.



😃 glad you liked it added you dear

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

lovely fic dear
do continue
bye sumi


😳 sure
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
part 4
Earliy morning
Maan was first one to get up he felt strange to see Geet still

in her lap sleeping peacefully .he stared at geet charming face he quickly moved .he went to his gym to do martial art. maan was busy he heard foot step behind him he

trun back saw geet standing behind him rubbing her eyes .
Geet : maan I want to freshen up but I don't have my clothes

here can I go home. I have to go office too.
Maan: shocked as she called him Maan for the first time . she was looking adroable in her hairs open care free walking with out slippers , her face look fresh no sign of sickness.
Geet felt he is staring at him "aap ka ghar mein guest ko iss tarah look after karta hai. I am so hungry where is kitchen . she waved her hand in front of his eyes
Maan: came back to his sense. Kya?
Geet: put her hand on his froehead "let me check are you ok or not as you are behaving strange" her hand all wet with his

sweat. she made face
Maan grab her hand & wipe it on vest: "geet why you behave

like child soon you are going to be a mom" maan paused what he had said left her hand & walk out
Geet: blushed at Maan comment "babji yeh kya horaha ha .un ko firaq kyun nahi parta . yeh muhje se kuch pochta kyun nahi ha.
she walk out of room and follow Maan.
He was in kitchen,pouring juice in 2 glass he was looking at geet didnot noticed the juice is over flowing
geet saw what he is down: shouted aap ka dehan kidar ha?
Maan came out of his thought :oh ! sorry i am worst in doing

kitchen work.........he looked at Geet smiling face . he

thought he might said some thing wrong,he got what he said to her he showed her his weakness.
Geet: aap koi kam ghalit bhi karta ha, mein tou samjhe ghailti sirf mujhe se hoti ha.she got napkin & wiped the messy table,she took sip from both glasses as they were over following,gave one to maan he took sip at same place where she lift her lips marks.she didn't saw what he did
Geet:" i am here i will look after you" she shaked her head what she had said.
Maan could not hide his smile after seeing her blush face."so [you are here to look after me".staring her naughtily
geet closed her eyes as he was too close to her& there was no space to escape,Maan enjoying Geet reaction. geet felt he touch her forehead she held her breath . maan just check her wound and move back as he could not control his emotions.

Maan turn his face as he don't want to show geet his feeling :"Geet you have breakfast & rest today no need to come to office , i will ask pinky to drop your luggage here, till that you can wear mine" he quickly walked out of kitchen.

Geet still in state of shocked she touch her forehead feeling Maan touch.


cont......... if guys will like it and do tell me if you want pm's
Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: desigurl953

please please please continue




added 😉
Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
lovely FF...do continue and plz add me to your PM list:)
p.s.-thnx for the PM😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
hey naddiya 🤗🤗🤗
awesome part. do continue soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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interesting.....Thanks for the PM 😊

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