FF*Simply love*(Maaneet)pt27at pg14(note at pg153 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Giginaik

Such a cute story, you must continue. I was scared for a bit when I read your reply to some of the other comments that you were ending it. Mere dil ko tasali mil gayi when I saw the last update. Thank you.

thanks dear .sure i will continue till you guy comment. i did not got positive reply so i was thinking to finish it but you all liked my last update that why i cont it 😳 .you plz do comment in future too 😊

i liked it a lot... i mean personally i don't want dev's child to be a part of geet and maan's life but u have made it all so sweet that now i am in double minds...but ya carry on..thanx

Originally posted by: chullbulli

i liked it a lot... i mean personally i don't want dev's child to be a part of geet and maan's life but u have made it all so sweet that now i am in double minds...but ya carry on..thanx

thax for commenting dear. i personal think it is not that child fault that his father is a Dev. i just feel that child mom is our cute Geet and if child is in guidance of Maan he will be a perfect child..... my pleasure that i am changing your thinking 😊

plz continue
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so nice..especially touching her forehead..geet blushing!!!

Originally posted by: muskanp

so nice..especially touching her forehead..geet blushing!!!

thax dear you read it & liked it 😳

wow.....

yahan b sath sath rehna!!!!!😃

update soon!!!

wow i liked dear
maan finally confessing he also did something wrong wow this makes human in geet eyes so cute
geet in maan clothes
was awesome
kya imagine kar lenge hum log
do continue
bye sumi

Part5
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Maan got ready for office throughout the time he kept on thinking about Geet " why i let her come and stay with me what was there is in her eyes that melt my heart.i am a strong headed guy ,why i am changing?"
Geet knocked at door :can i came in?
Maan turn back geet peeping through the door. he could not

stop smiling:"yes you can tum khud pagal ho mujhe bhi kar do
gai"
Geet: what i wear ?a sheepish smile at her face.
Maan : give her his white kurta pajamas...." i am going"
Geet: wait i am coming in 10 min.... i want to talk to you.
Maan went to study room
after 10 min Geet enter maan who was reading news paper

suddenly stood up as he was dreaming Geet was looking an angel
dressed in his white dress she was busy in folding her kurta
sleeve.
Maan drop paper started walking towards her he reached very

closed when Geet raised her head
Geet : thank God i am not late.she hold his arm & started

pulling him with her Maan without any argument walked with

her,she pulled chair and ask him to sit.
Maan: surprised to see breakfast on table.
Geet put parath ,baaji & lassi in front of him "plz eat"
Maan: "yeh sub kya ha aur kaha se aaya ? i dont eat this in
breakfast"
Geet: yeh sub mein na banya ha aagar aap yeh sub kha kar
office jaga to aap ko kam ghusa aai ga. aap woh karwi coffee

peeta ha iss leya to har waqat Karela ki tarah karwa rahta ha.
OH!quickly put her hand on her mouth.
Maan: stare her in anger"i will have today but next time dont

make it.don't try to change me "he started eating
Geet: you didn't ask me anything about my past
Maan: i don't want to hear it,sub ka past mein kuch acha aur

bura hota ha.you are my present that is all i want to

say...paused you are not bad cook.
Geet gave a strange look to him thinking how he change topic.

her nawal was still in her hand.
Maan put that in her mouth :"eat rest and be happy you are

safe here". quickly got up kissed her forehead & vanished.
geet sitting in state of shock.


Maan driving to office why i must say sorry to her.he dialed

home # but from other end he heard dadi he quickly closed

phone. he reached office everyone congrats him.
Adi: sir geet nahi aai
Maan: nahi
pinky :why sir?
Maan: she need rest walk to office
tasha: sasha yeh mk to bilku badal gaya ha
Sasha: hmmm
At home when dadi saw maan went to office he visited Outhouse.
saw geet sitting staring at wall her hand is on her forehead.
she was about to talk to her but phone rang.when she picked up

someone closed it.

At office
Maan again picked up phone & dialed home he heard dadi from

other end again. he quickly closed it
Dadi :smiled as she knew it was Maan. she dialed office.
Maan seeing call from home He picked up.
dadi: mujhe pata ha ab meri awaz sun kar tum phone baad karo
ga .
Maan: woh mein.....
Dadi :kya kiya ha meri bahu ka saath tum na woh apna sar pakar

kar bathi ha itni dar se.
Maan: kuch nahi....mein iss se baat kar sakta hoon.
Dadi : aik min. she took phone to geet and placed it next to

her ear.
Maan: could hear her breathing he softly said "geet"
geet: quickly jump up looked around saw dadi holding phone

next to her smiling at her. "jee"
Maan: i am .... paused
Geet: bola bhi
Maan: woh project kai file kaha ha
Geet: aap ka table per Aap ka haath ka neecha.
Maan: ok cut the call.
Geet got what he wanted to say to her.


at office
adi enter room :sir you & geet are invited on dinner tonight

from office staff member.
Maan: for what?
sasha: app kai shadi ki khushi mein.
Maan: thinking what to do ? ok let me ask geet if she is free

then i will let you all know.

At home
dadi: geet call maan to have lunch with us.
Geet: mein
dadi: ha tum .see you both at lunch. i bought a sari for you wear that.
both thinking how to call each other.
Maan dialed Geet picked up "what are you doing?"
Geet :kuch nahi
Maan: your tablets is on my bedside table take it.
Geet: i want to ask you if you are free come for lunch.
Maan: smiled ok but you will not cook you rest see you.

to be cont
pre cap: Maan & geet shocked to see pandiat waiting for them to have saath phara of aagni

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