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Posted: 15 years ago


part 12
Geet closed her eyes thinking how he had changed my life completely...aagar iss din woh sub kuch na hota to .babaji sub acha karna aab ,mera mein aur himat nahi ha mein bahot thaak chuki hoo.(recollecting how he saved her every time when she was in trouble )
she felt him close to her she open her eyes
Maan:sorry mein na tum ko utha diya seat belt laga raha tha.
Geet: I was not sleeping I just closed my eyes
Maan: ok let me drop you at home then I will go to office
Geet: ghar kyou office nahi jaana aap na… gave a innocent look
Maan : hmmm acha .... he drive to office . tum betho mein files lakar aata hoon i will finish work at home.
Geet: nodded
Sasha : tum aagai Maan (she walk with him to his office)
Maan yes I just came to get my laptop & files
Sasha : where are you going ?
Maan: looked at her " any problem sasha ?"
Sasha: you daily go late home that why i asked
Maan: before I was single now married for your kind information... he was collecting his things he saw Geet note pad he just smiled and picked it up.
Sasha: yes I have notice you are changed
Maan: changed for good is always welcome.... you were my friend you will be my friend. ok now move Geet is waiting in car
she saw Maan going in elevator . she walk to window.
Sasha: Maan you don't know me I can't let go thing which I like . I just have it somehow or destroy it.
she saw him sitting in car he was laughing.
Sasha: I will ruin your life Geet you have taken my love?

In car
Maan: tum ko itna acha lagta ha mera naam
Geet: woh mei n sirf try kar rahi thi.
Maan: kya try kar rahi thi
Geet: aap ka naam kaisa lagta ha mera naam ka saath.... blushed
Maan: tou kaisa laga. while driving he turn her face towards him.
Geet: 50/ 50 laugh
Maan: kya matlab.... stare in fake anger

they had reached home
Geet: so so. said and ran in
Maan: aram se paglee... he saw she was hugging dadi.
Dadi aaj aap itna jaldi ghar aagai
Geet: mein laker aai hoon yeh tou mujhe chor kar phir office ja raha tha
Dadi: saw Maan coming "acha yeh bataai Geet Maan na aap ko taang to nahi kiya
Geet: taang dadi he drive car so fast in morning muhje ko chakar aana laga tha
Dadi: hold Maan ear mein aap ko bola tha khayal se driver kar na
Maan i was driving slow aap iss shatan kai khala se pocha iss na kya kiya tha koi aapna driver ka saath iss tarah karta ha ( he recollected their first kiss) he wink at Geet
Dadi turn to Geet: jee aap bola aap na kya kiya tha
Geet : shy kuch nahi dadi mein to bus Maan se kah rahi thi ka taxi driver ka saath race laga ai.... she showed Maan her tongue.

Maan: dekhe looga tum ko dekha dadi yeh mujhe ko paused
Geet : see dadi school going bacho kai tarah yeh shakieet kar raha ha.

Dadi hug both she got there was some thing fishy fishy.
Maan: acha dadi we are going to out house
Geet: ok you go I want to be with dadi
Maan :why?
Geet: bus aap ko koi kaam to nahi ha mujhe se
dadi yes she will stay with me you go
Maan: tou tum mujhe ko ghar kyun la kar aai jab tum ko Dadi ka saath rahna tha. he quikcly walk out of the house
Geet: zara ghusa dekha apna Grand son ka Dadi haar waqat naakh per hota ha
Dadi: smiled.... rahna do
Geet: theek ha ... she placed her head on her shoulder for some time
Dadi felt she is restless . dadi was asking her question but she was not replying
Dadi : geet hum na aap se pocha ha aap na kya lunch kya
Geet: pizza
Dadi : beta aap jai aap ka dil yahan nahi lag raha
Geet: shyly woh mein
Dadi: jai dekha woh apna ghusa kis per utar raha hain

at out house :
Maan yeh samjhti kya ha apna aap ko. haar waqat taang karti ha. khud bola tha aap office jai ga mein bhi chalo gai ,aur ab paused bang the bed room door
He changed his dress now in casual t shit & pants. he open laptop but could not concentrated at his work just stare at her picture. He turn on tv just switch channels.
Sajde Mein Yuhin Jhukta Hoon Tum Pe Aake Hi Rukhta Hoon
Kya Yeh Sabko Hota Hai Humko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se ( maan ha yeh pagal pan sub ko hota ha)
Tum Se Hi Sab Baathe Ab Se Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua..

he stare at her pic . then grab her dupatta laying on bed
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Fidaa Hoon
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya.. ( smell her scent)
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda
He heard she is coming he quickly hide her duppata behind him. Change the channel as the song was reminding him of their dance at hotel.
Geet: Maan mein aagai. sit beside him
Maan: didnot response watching news
Geet: i want to see snatch it . he was not expecting she will do so. she change channel . stop at same channel
Maan: give me back
Geet :nahi mera fav song ha I want to see.

Tu Kahe To Tere Hi Ek Dhum Ke Mein Nishano Pe
Chaloon Rukoon Ishaare Pe.. ( geetlooked at Maan angry face)
Tu Kahe To Khwab Ka Bana Ke Mein Bahana Sa
Mila Karoon Sulaane Pe..
Hoo…Tumse Dil Ki Baathe Seekhi
Tumse Hi Yeh Raahe Seekhi
Tum Pe Mar Ke Mein To Jee Gaya..
Khuda Jaane Ke... Mein Fidaa Hoon
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya...
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda

Maan give me back he was just trying to snatch ,geet first try to hide under the cushion .he bend on her to get that he was too close. she pushed him and stand behind the sofa
Maan: do mujhe ko
Geet: nahi first you talk to mein
Maan: nahi i am angry
Geet :ok then i will not give you.aise to aise sahi
Maan rako mein bata hoon
Geet pehla baat
Maan nahi first you give me
Geet: you don't know me i am Geet Maan
Maan: jump on other side of Sofa: give me
Geet lost her balance about to fall down : shouted Maan
Maan pull her to himself hold her tightly hug her
(Dil Kahe Ke Aaj Chupa Lo Tum Panaahon Me
Ke Dar Hai Tumko Kha Dunga)
Geet: just hide herself in his arm
(Dil Kahe Sambhal Zara Khushi Ko Na Nazar Laga
Ke Dar Hai Mein To Ro Dunga..)
Hooo Karthi Hoon Saugaate Tumse
Baande Dil Ke Waade Tumse, Yeh Tumhe Na Jaane Kyan Hua..
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Fidaa Hoon
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya..
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda
They were warped in the curtain


Geet: held her breath: maan let me free
Maan :why
Geet: I will call dadi
Maan :ok call wink
Geet :try to push him . but she was held very closed in his arms cage
Maan enjoying her presence . ok aik sharat per charo ga you kiss me
Geet : Kiss his chin now leave (felt helpless)
Maan not here at some my some where else
Geet : no
Maan :ok you stay like this I don't have any problem
Geet pinch his arm
Maan: ouch u jungle billi let her free
Geet: chor diya naa
Maan : ok I will not talk to you till you kiss me .he want out of room
TO BE CONT If you all will like and comment


Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
i loved it! Maneet scenes are so cute!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh such a nice update .....thnx
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Posted: 15 years ago
love it .... amazing no words it's just amazing...i am so excited.. pls update very soooooon... thx
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Posted: 15 years ago
😆
cute comment
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwww that was so amazing
i cant wait for the kiss 😉😉😳
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i cant wait for da nxt update
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow, awesome update.
loved the scene between maaneet.
continue soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey

awesome parts, lol
cant believe it, this is maan's side that is very rare
lol really liked what he said at the end 😃
cant wait for the next part
do continue soon

Maheen xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update ...Please continue :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
ah nadiya wow girl
update dear
really liked each line of urs
and maneet moments r simply superb dear
loved alot
romantic sceens wow so nice and
really i am waiting for ur update cause of the kiss
maan is really naughty dear he will talk when she kisses him omg faints
and that song is one of my fav song and liked it dear
with love
sravs



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