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Hinna

@.-BalleBalle-.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

ZeeZeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I LOVED it!!! 😃
Wow Maan coming into her bedroom and......😉...........superhot girl!
I love how you described Geet and Maan thinking of each other and whatever had been happening. 😛
Maan's description of him exercising was just 😍 Made me fall in love with him all over again! 😉
Amazing OS! Yur doing a fab job hun! 👏👏⭐️⭐️

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Maan jumping through the window...

good :)

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Maheen

@sweet_gurl93

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

hey
awesome os, lol it was very very intense and 😳
hehe, cant wait for more of your os's

Maheen xx

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Zahra

@Amongthestars89

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sweet_chilly
that was really good!

thanks sweet chilly!! 😃 arre i keep forgetting your name! sorry! 😳

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Zahra

@Amongthestars89

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: rushtrip
i like it..but...girl....what was the 17 and above..all about...but i am not complaining..

you have a way with words..that is very visual....i enjoy reading your OS and stop worrying about chappals and not being better than first...

it is really good...

now about Dev...he is there isnt it anyway?

Lmao its just in case some kiddies read it...i just want to be cautious is all. Don't want to get in troublewith the moderators!!! 😃

Eh...personally i didn't think i had much imagination here, but if you think it's great, well thanks! 😃

lmao yeah i know, but i don't like Dev and tried to avoid putting him in...🤢🤢🤢

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Zahra

@Amongthestars89

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: desigirl_18
it was awesome Zahra!! very well written!! very passionate😉☺️!!! u write very well, keep it up!!!!😳 and i didn't mind the Dev bit it was okay, i guess it was needed!!

hey Fatima!!! thanks! 😃

hehe, you getting all shy now eh??😉😆

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Zahra

@Amongthestars89

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: -sann-
tht was super passionate.....

thank you very much sann! 😃

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Zahra

@Amongthestars89

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sweetscent13
Hurry up and continue so I can read it before leaving!😡 COME ON! 😡
BTW really loved this one!❤️

Only one thing...it's Babaji.🤣 You cracked me up when you wrote Babuji because it reminded me of some song that is kinda inappropriate (if you have heard it 😉🤣).

erm maggie...😕😕 who you telling to hurry up and continue to read???

😆😆😆 Thanks for reminding me!!! i edited it now so it's okay!

Omg! that song??? Maggie!!! 🤣

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Zahra

@Amongthestars89

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Barbie3143
wow zahra.. great writing .. although shy shy... but yes nice i must say... kash yeh hum onscreen dekh pate ..lol am i gone mad.. sab tumhari galti .. mwaaaaaaaaaaaah..

hehe my fault eh?? I thought Maneet was the cause of your pagalness!!! 🤣

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Zahra

@Amongthestars89

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: salma434

once again fab work zahra!!! 👏 u write ever so well, in lots of detail😉 keep tha fab work goin gal!! and thanxs 4 the pm!!

aww shucks! 😳😳 Thanks! 😃

Lol i did add you on my list!😆

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