Zee's Oneshot- This Isn't Over - Page 3

Originally posted by: phoenixgirl

nice os zahra...gud work!!👍🏼

Originally posted by: anufa

superb....awsum!!!!👏

yar one shot kyn likhti ho.....continue kia kro!!!!!

update soon...n thnx for pm!!!

Originally posted by: aree

fabulously written i felt the passion in it 😊
dont worry dear it was as good as first ones 😊

Originally posted by: Chotii

Gosh Zee! Maan / Maneet onscreen scenes make me blush like crazy, and today ur OS made me! lol ufff suuper hot - love the way they're both thinkin of eachother in the beginnin... the entire scene in Geet's bedroom?? WOWZAHH!!!! love ittttt - i'm soo happy that u write OS's - short and hot! simply awesome!!! once again, u'v done a fabulous job!! keep it up gorrrgeousss!! xxxxxx

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..

ZeeZeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I LOVED it!!! 😃
Wow Maan coming into her bedroom and......😉...........superhot girl!
I love how you described Geet and Maan thinking of each other and whatever had been happening. 😛
Maan's description of him exercising was just 😍 Made me fall in love with him all over again! 😉
Amazing OS! Yur doing a fab job hun! 👏👏⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: shalini_s

Maan jumping through the window...

good :)

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

passionate one
do continue
bye sumi

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93

hey
awesome os, lol it was very very intense and 😳
hehe, cant wait for more of your os's

Maheen xx

OMG. Zee..*chupa rustam*..ddnt knw u were such a gd writer..aww maneet thinkingg abt eachh oda. n'd he enterzz geet bedroom.*blusshh*..Ahh wish we cud see d sceness which u wrotee on onscreen aswell..nww update d secondd part jaldi jaldi..:|..<3

Originally posted by: Fabolous_Dreamz

OMG. Zee..*chupa rustam*..ddnt knw u were such a gd writer..aww maneet thinkingg abt eachh oda. n'd he enterzz geet bedroom.*blusshh*..Ahh wish we cud see d sceness which u wrotee on onscreen aswell..nww update d secondd part jaldi jaldi..:|..<3