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soumya

@pickle6586

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Posted: 15 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: sweet_charmed
Hello soumya.... ohhhi have fallen soo behind in ff... :( stupid work.. . lol ..i jst read part 20 which was very awesome by the way... lolz.. geet and maan are soo adorable.. *pinch cheeks* ...😆😆😆 lolz.. on to reading part 21 now.. ahahaha.. lol my goal of the day catch up to date with ff ..wish me luck 😊😊 (Y)
😊

glad u liked that pinching cheeks part.....!!!! i was smiling when i was writing that part....!!!!! 😉

good luck honey....!!!!!😊 you have to catch up and finish all the parts today....!!!! 😛

and btw the last 3 parts are very long too......!!!!!! 😆.....

Soumya

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geet.a

@geet.a

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Posted: 15 years ago

#442

Beautiful part!!!

Dadi was the star!!

The lost baby MAan...dadi supported him and made him remember how much he loves her...she opened up his heart before he could close it again!!

I wish this happens in the show too...you portrayed the emotions perfectly!!

loved this part a lot!!

lots of love!

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sweet_charmed

@sweet_charmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#443

still reading... part 21: lol soo poor maan will be glad to know that hez not the only one suffering from hallucinations...haha geet is suffering from similar love symptoms.. 😉😉 .... haha by the love geet testin out see if maan was real... a little poke her and and lit pinch there.. soo funny.. .. and Maan has some aweosme skilss when its comes to divertin and not answerin Geets question.. he should have become a lawyer or a copy...actuallly considerin his anger issues.. a cop for sure😉😉 .. plus man in unifore are always hot 😉😉

and ohhhh man has gotten all serious ..chalo lets see if the truth is finally revealed..thadum..thadum thadum...

p.s. great update as usual .. i prolly have said a million times before..but you are an awsome writer soumaya and and you write a fantabulous story ... one *BIG HUG* for you and alll you efforts!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏

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soumya

@pickle6586

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Posted: 15 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: geet.a
Beautiful part!!!

Dadi was the star!!

The lost baby MAan...dadi supported him and made him remember how much he loves her...she opened up his heart before he could close it again!!

I wish this happens in the show too...you portrayed the emotions perfectly!!

loved this part a lot!!

lots of love!

thanks geet...!!!!! 😛/...... despite your classes and ur FF u still find time to read my ff. that's really nice....!!!!!! 👏

Soumya

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sweet_charmed

@sweet_charmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#445

PART 23: wooowww... thts all i got too say ... woooww... this update was soo well written it takes a lot skill to be able to get such deep emotions through jst words like the way you have!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏... aww i jst want to give both a maan and geet a jaddu ki jhappi.... its soo sad... i'm hoping for a happier tone update but this one was awesome and very necessary for the story to continue..after all the truth must be revealed sooner or later ..

p.s. i love this quote by maan...."geet, ek waqt tha jab tumhari rone se mujhe koi farak nahi padta. Leking ab tum jab rohte ho, tuo tumse zyaada mujhe taqleef hoti hai. tumhari aansu se pareshaani hoti hai. Tumhe yeh baat samaj mein kabhi nahi aayegi."

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nupurvj23

@nupurvj23

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Posted: 15 years ago

#446

Hi Soumya
WOW WOW WOW...!
This was such as emotional chapter....I really want to see Maan's reaction when he realises that Dev is behind the whole thing..!
And I must say you write really quick...I mean ek din mein 3 chapters updated! Amazing!
Waiting for the next part
Take Care =)
Nupur

PS: Thanks for the PM :P

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: sweet_charmed
PART 23: wooowww... thts all i got too say ... woooww... this update was soo well written it takes a lot skill to be able to get such deep emotions through jst words like the way you have!! 👏... aww i jst want to give both a maan and geet a jaddu ki jhappi.... its soo sad... i'm hoping for a happier tone update but this one was awesome and very necessary for the story to continue..after all the truth must be revealed sooner or later ..

p.s. i love this quote by maan...."geet, ek waqt tha jab tumhari rone se mujhe koi farak nahi padta. Leking ab tum jab rohte ho, tuo tumse zyaada mujhe taqleef hoti hai. tumhari aansu se pareshaani hoti hai. Tumhe yeh baat samaj mein kabhi nahi aayegi."

@blue: just maan and geet???wat about me girl???? i'm the one who wrote it.......!!!!!! 😉

thanks honey....!!!!!! 😛........

glad u liked the quote........😃

Soumya

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geet.a

@geet.a

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Posted: 15 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: pickle6586

thanks geet...!!!!! 😛/...... despite your classes and ur FF u still find time to read my ff. that's really nice....!!!!!! 👏

Soumya

😆 😆Aap likhti hi itna kamaal hain..toh kya karein!!

lub u lub u 🤗

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152265

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Posted: 15 years ago

#449

WOWOWOWOW loved the last part, Maan is sooo accepting!

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uzma

@uzmakhan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#450

😭😭😭😭😭😭 part 22 is sooo sad!!😭😭 poor maaneet! kamina dev!!😡

ughhhhhh!! i hate him evn more noe lol!

buh its soo sad! bechara maan!! wen i waz readin..i got the feelin as if...sum1 is actually pinning a nail in his heart wid every word that came outa geet's mouth aftershe sed shez preggy!

and our masoom billi!! how embarassed she wud be!

shukar maan did not jump to any conclusions on his own!

bechara mera bacha! 😭

----buh very well written--now i cant w8 to get to the next part so me off to part 23!!!