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Shagufta

@JanuaryEmbers

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Posted: 15 years ago

#371

I love this story! Continue soon!👏👏👏👏

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neahakhan

@neahakhan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#372

Awesomeeeeeee summmmmiiii love It man keep it up

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nupurvj23

@nupurvj23

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Posted: 15 years ago

#373

Hi Soumya....

That was AWESOME!

Seriously you write really well...Its a pleasure to read this ff..!

Pls update soon

And thanks for the PM :)

Take Care =)

Nupur

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soumya

@pickle6586

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#374

@muskan: thanks muski.......😛....glad u liked it... he's all heartbroken but he simply acts like a kid with his daadi.....

@Hapinezz : thanks!!!! 😊 i guess it was important to highlight the bond both of them share. and he has never maintained any relationship with anyone but his daadi. so she is his support system even though he looks all strong and hard-hearted...!!!!!

@iqbal4ever: thanks a lot.....glad u like it....😛

@neahakhan: thanks sweetheart,....!!!!! 😛

@Nupur: thank you so so much...!!!! 😊 this time i sent you the PM first ....... 😉

Soumya

Edited by pickle6586 - 15 years ago

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febinyusuff

@febinyusuff

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Posted: 15 years ago

#375

Awesome Soumya !!! Really touching... I loved Maan-Daadi part....Imagining myself i place of Daadi 😆😆😆😆

Continue please :)

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Kiran

@platy01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#376

Soumya... well written script.... how carefully u are moving the story ...ican understand the background work u have done to put it on paper.....Amazing...i wonder how u guyz get such a wonderful narration..

Thx for PM....

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Heena

@wintersunshine

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Posted: 15 years ago

#377

Hey again... Soumya this part was wonderful and the best of all updates so far of course only after maan's realization, but you really outdid yourself. I love your fic and you keep on improving your writing and story with every post... can't wait to read more! am hooked to your fic and don't stop writing cuz you're amazing⭐️⭐️!

I am so glad that dadi knows and she is going to be helping maaneet... and the part where you described maan's and dadi's relationship that was just sooooooo touching that i can't explain... i can actually picture that scene cuz you wrote it so wonderfully 👏👏👏 Plz do update sooon.................. lots and lots of love, Heena😃

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*mittu*

@*mittu*

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#378

Soumya, Sorry for not commenting on last few parts. But I was reading it. What a great way the story is moving yaar. Poor Maan . I could feel his pain. It is going to break his heart again when he knows Dev is the one behind all this.
I love this dadi. She is smart. How is Geet going to react when she comes to know Dev and Maan are brothers. Please continue soon. I cant wait to read more. Love you!!

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

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Posted: 15 years ago

#379

LOVED UR UPDATE.. PLS CONTINUE SOON....😊

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sravani899

@sravani899

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Posted: 15 years ago

#380

soumya

wow what a update girl really awsome

i am really loved the update

maan and geet part and the hug wow😃

maan and his heart

😭 and maan after a long time he went and slept in daadima laps oh

and daadima knowing all abt D&N wow😃

daadima the detective hahahahaha.... but so sweet of her

and now daadima is willing to unite geet and maan that to after knowing the truth of geet wow amazing love this daadima alot

and now i think daadima will play a role of cupid right

really waiting for the update

suggestions

how abt maan doing martial arts and thinking abt geet and he is unable to come out of geet thoughts and finally controls his feelings

and daadima saying him that i know u like geet and daadima giving him lecture like abt love and saying love means not getting the girl but feeling responsible and helping her at every cost coz u love her and love is not a give and take policy and all and also hiding the truth that she knows geets past

maan thinks abt it and stops and 2 days pass and sees geet and cant control his emotions and feels like he is in hell and comes to his house

the list continues dear

really liked ur update daadima knowing abt geets past u placed it brilliantly girl kudos

and loved ur update

with love

sravs