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sravani899

@sravani899

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#261

hi soumya🤗🤗

maan and geet coversation really nice☺️☺️

geet maan ko chod do warna wo tumhe kabi nahi chode ga😆😆

geet again with her chappar chappar😳😆😆😆

maan maan y do u need to dream/thought of geet as she infront of u😆😆😆

maan thinking abt saying i love u to geet ☺️🥳🥳😍 soumya loved it😳

chalo after these many days he had got courage to take decision that he will confess his love to geet 😉😆 aaj nahi to kal bolega😛😉😆

and geet if u want to stay in maans house stay maan will no problem👍🏼😉 he will be the most happiest person in the world😆 infact he will be on top of the world😆

but be careful girl as munda is having xness thoughts these days abt u😉😳😳

but geet wait untill u both get married girl😆😆😆

maan againy u leave geet like that ha😡 u have to take care of her till end of ur life so better dont leave her ok😆 soumya👏👏 exactly placed maans character girl i am sure he will do the same if he is in this suituation 👏

geet, hum yeh follow chase walk drive car game 😆🤣🤣 well soumya nice name for the game it made laugh out loud really🤣

maan ho maan😆 u had no control over ur words also now😆chalo achai hi hai dil ke baat bahar ajana achi baat hai mere dost😉😆

"tum naraaz ho kya karu?aake tumhe gale lagalu?aur phir tumhe utaake gadi mein bitaau? "

"theek hai. If that's what you want, then here I come" and opens the car door slightly. Geet jumps up as though someone pinched her and says, "nahi, main baitungi."

soumya nice placement of the dialogue these dialogues girl kudos👏👏👏

loved the topic⭐️ alot girl👏👏👏

really nice, wonderful, and awsome part👏👏

loved it alot🤗🤗

waiting now what maneet will do in the car i mean whole ride to geets home😳☺️

soumya 🤗🤗

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#262

@muskaan : thanks!!!! 😊 maan had to give her that push to make her sit in the car...im glad u liked it..!!!

@naddiya: thanks a ton...!!!! i guess its their stubbornness that makes them so cute...!!!but in the end, geet had to give in...!!! 😉

@Tia: thanks a ton Tia..!!!! 😊 even i was laughing at maan's imagination when i was writing it...!!! imagine if that really happens in the serial.... i would give anything to watch those expressions of maan..... 🤣

@PrithviSAnyo: thanks a lot....glad u liked their bickering...!!!! 😛

Soumya

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neha2005

@neha2005

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#263

stubborn as usual!! lol! great update!

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: deejagi

Hi Soumya, How much do you want to torture Maan with Geets Nautanki. Give him some peace. let Geet sleep off giving him some time for watching her in peace and to decide the next course of action (how & when to confess). BTW how did he close the door? I mean if had closed the door for Geets side😉😉 leaning on her??????

well jaya, they still have to go to geet's house....so geet sleeping off in the car could be a possibility...!!!! 😉
he closes his door.... remember he had opened it a little to scare geet as though he would actually go and hug her..!!!!!

Soumya

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: sravani899
hi soumya🤗🤗
maan and geet coversation really nice☺️☺️

geet maan ko chod do warna wo tumhe kabi nahi chode ga😆😆

geet again with her chappar chappar😆

maan maan y do u need to dream/thought of geet as she infront of u😆😆😆

maan thinking abt saying i love u to geet 😍 soumya loved it😳

chalo after these many days he had got courage to take decision that he will confess his love to geet 😉😆 aaj nahi to kal bolega😛😉😆

and geet if u want to stay in maans house stay maan will no problem👍🏼😉 he will be the most happiest person in the world😆 infact he will be on top of the world😆

but be careful girl as munda is having xness thoughts these days abt u😉😳😳

but geet wait untill u both get married girl😆😆😆

maan againy u leave geet like that ha😡 u have to take care of her till end of ur life so better dont leave her ok😆 soumya👏👏 exactly placed maans character girl i am sure he will do the same if he is in this suituation 👏

geet, hum yeh follow chase walk drive car game 😆🤣🤣 well soumya nice name for the game it made laugh out loud really🤣

maan ho maan😆 u had no control over ur words also now😆chalo achai hi hai dil ke baat bahar ajana achi baat hai mere dost😉😆

"tum naraaz ho kya karu?aake tumhe gale lagalu?aur phir tumhe utaake gadi mein bitaau? "

"theek hai. If that's what you want, then here I come" and opens the car door slightly. Geet jumps up as though someone pinched her and says, "nahi, main baitungi."

soumya nice placement of the dialogue these dialogues girl kudos👏👏👏

loved the topic⭐️ alot girl👏👏👏

really nice, wonderful, and awsome part👏👏

loved it alot🤗🤗

waiting now what maneet will do in the car i mean whole ride to geets home😳☺️

soumya 🤗🤗

sravani 🤗

i never update without reading your updates once again...!!!! because you keep giving me suggestions and also predict what happens next....!!!!! like u just did again... geet and maan in teh car...!!! girl...kuch tuo suspense rakho na...!!! 😉
i didn't want her to stay in the outhouse so soon...as it is they were fighting ...!!!!! 😆.... they'd probably pull each other's hair by morning and daadi would regret leaving them alone...!!!! yo...that reminds me daadi has to be bak in the next part to tease maan.....!!!! 😳

there were a few things that i liked in the update and u like them too... first in the name of the game like u pointed out...
then maan's dialogues in the end...!!! and maan;s imagination... when he thinks of geet asking him "kyun" when he says "i love you"😆
guess, great minds think alike...!!!!! 😉

ab nok -jhok bahut ho gayi.....shall we get maan and geet a little X-rated in the next update sravani???? any suggestions?????

soumya

Edited by pickle6586 - 15 years ago

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#266

oh wow this is great
geet is too much when maan got ready to drop her what was the need to instigate him again
and maan monologue about love confession was really cute
the last csne was damn good sweety
i can actually imagine geet's reaction
her too big eyes with shock mouth open and then like scared rabbit jumped in the car
too great
do continue
bye sumi

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#267

hi,
just discovered tis ff of urs,
must say this is one of d best ffs i hv come across till date,
congrats 4 tht.😊
can u plz add me 2 ur pm list.....

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Maheen

@sweet_gurl93

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#268

hey awesome part

lol really liked the way geet actually ordered maan, and also snaps back at him 😆 lol, and then also what maan said to her, to get her into the car
do continue soon
btw thanks for the pm 😊

Maheen xx