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Ayesha.

@cooldude10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#281

OOOOMGGG. i LOVE this paaart soumya! AWW. i loved how geet slept in the car and maan stares at her. AWW. that was such a mahi moment 😉 Thankyouh for the PM 😃

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Adeena

@..Adeena..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#282

im your new reader.... please PM me wen u update another part......

please continue soon.. ur an owsum writer.....😊

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deejagi

@deejagi

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: pickle6586
hello people,

how was your day today? 😛mine was fabulous!😃 i got a job offer from a venture capital company and i am so excited.!!!! that was the reason i could not update any earlier. lot of you were asking me when i would update.

CONGRATULATIONS ! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She was about to walk out of the gate when a familiar voice cautioned her, "geet raat kafi ho chuki hai, andar jao." Without a second thought, she stepped back. It was like a reflex now to do anything that voice asks her to do.

Great yaar, without telling the name you are hinting who was waiting their even after dropping her to her destination. was he waiting for her to come out so that he can have some more moment with her?????/
Soumya

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#284

wow beautifully written
best line

"geet, main bhi nahi chahta ki tum mujhse door jao"
loved it dear

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#285

Nice update

Geet blabbers a lot Yaar

Liked the way Maan whispered in her ear

Update soon n longer part

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sravani899

@sravani899

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#286

hi soumya
congrats girl for the job

and maan geet conv really lovely❤️😍😍😍

maan saying try karke dekh the hai🤣

geet saying chup to maan and maan saying i learnt from u and the song in radio🤣 wah what a timing soumya👏👏👏

maan staring at geet hai maan thoda to aage bado😉🤣😆

and geet holding maan and saying she dont want to leave☺️

and maan saying he doesnt want her to leave him hai hai☺️☺️😍😍

and geet has feelings towards maan at last

and waiting for the update soumya

i am not interested in reavealing suspense so i dint comment on maan at parking car and the voice which geet heard

suggestions

well there r 2 days time so how abt bringing mr.cupid i mean mr.chopra into the scene😉

and how abt maan lying to geet abt some project and makes geet to come to his outhouse 😉

anyways loved ur update girl

and great update and awsome job girl👏👏👏

loved and enjoyed ur update

with love

sravs

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Tia

@tes_v1

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#287

...try karke dekhte hai, phir pata chal jayega....

A song plays, "Aa gale lag ja...." 🤣 🤣

Soumya, 🤗

First things, first.
Congrats for the job offer hun!

I had also come to ask when u'd be updating again but seeing so many Q's already, I thought better of it!

This epi was wonderful! For once, it was Geet and not Maan who was getting the shocks! 🤣 Maan's lovey-dovey words and then yelling to wake her up was indeed a unique idea!

Loved it!😉