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DIPIKA

@dipu

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#131

hey!!!

really liked it yaar..

hope dev's plan will work to break that stornghead but still cute maan..

update next one soon

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Maheen

@sweet_gurl93

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#132

hey

really like ur ff, its quite interesting lol, esp dev's character in this
i cant wait for when maan will realise that he too cant live without geet, hopefully this jealousy plan works 😃

anyway cant wait for more
do continue soon

btw can you please add me to your pm list?
thanks

Maheen xx

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Nirali

@Piano1422

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#133

I just read your story and it sounds really good. I like how Dev knows ahead of time that Geet loves Maan so he doesn't try to do anything to Geet. The plot is pretty unique and I look forward to reading more of this fanfiction.

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rinky88

@rinky88

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#134

it was really good plz update soon asap

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lallulal2010

@lallulal2010

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#135

It was such a beautifull updaaatee Jealousy yaaa a good weapon ofcourse
Updaate sooooooooooon pleeeeeeeeeeease

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#136

Tia, 🤗 🤗

I just don't know how I missed this lovely FF. its so well written !!! 👏

Part 1: I loved the way you described MAan. Gosh, I don't think anyone else would have done justice to that. and geet in love with maan?? I did not see that coming but it was really really good. 😃

Part 2: DEv and Geet to make Maan jealous. I loved the dialogues in this part. the conversation between Dev and Maan is just rocking...!!!!! 😛
So, Maan has to realize his feeling for geet in like 2 weeks haaaaan???? 😆 that's an interesting twist in the tale..!!!! 😲

Hey , u need to update soon..!!! and send me a PM when u update...!!!! 😊

and this is for your wonderful FF ... 🤗

Soumya

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Isha

@Sidarth_lover1

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#137

ahhhhhhhh! luv the jodi n the FF!

add me on the list asap!

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Tia

@tes_v1

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: sups2222
Omg thats soo kolllll.......i hv always looved dev bt he is in negative role in the serial.......n owwwwy i love this dev so always like this k geet first marry devn then maan hehe.......owwyyw totally loved the concept yup JEOLUOSY makes it......maan will sooner or later realsie it...............i love this ff plz include me in ur pm list......
Luv,
Sups.

Hey Sups!

Thanks for ur lovely comments. Well, yeah, we all liked Dev until he ruined Geet's life so miserably in the show. Well, so Geet is not actually gonna marry Dev, it's only a plan to wake up Maan.

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Tia

@tes_v1

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: xXdEejAyXx
awesum awesum awesum!!!....

Thanks Deejay! Will update soon!

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#140

Hey Tia, you sent me a PM regarding this FF of yours...and i decided to have a look at it..Wow i gotta say i'm totally loving the storyline of your FF..It's really something fresh!

I mean we or rather me hate Dev so much in the show itself..but here, in your FF, i'm actually liking this dude! He's a total charmer..and very different from Maan...😆

So thanks for the PM! :)

I read the intro and part one..So Geet actually has a thing for Maan way back at college..and Maan just seems to be engrossed in his work..and work..and work..😆..I like how the two of them are business partners...and Dev, he is so playful! Love how he outrightly just told Geet that he finds her sexy..and asked her out..!

You know reading this FF of yours, as much as i love Maneet..i actually woudn't mind a Dev and Geet angle..surprisingly! Excited to see how you unfold the story..with the marriage proposal coming in...Wonder if Geet will accept Dev's offer..or will she just tell Maan her feelings...

Also love how you stated..For Maan, girls don't count..and so for Geet, boys don't count!

Great writing! Will be reading the next part of yours! 😊