A lifetime of Gratitude-ff maneet updt-149,154 - Page 15

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Incomplete epsi... Please complete it!!!! Ur too behaving like CVs... Leaving us mid way 😭



sowie..par kya karun...weekends pe.. 😆 im in huge demand...i will post more before the end of the day,okay?

Main Maaneet land mein chali gayi thi ki..mom...AAJA AB...LOL

so i had to stop..i said 2 minutes and sent u all the pm..

love u
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Tressa

lovely ya.... 😊😊.... I jus cant stop smiling... its so sweet.... Geet taking care of Maan for a change... cool.. didnt u finish ur lunch till now??? Are u having all that Geet ordered??? chhole, butter chicken, dal makhni, bhindi masala, shahi paneer, butter naan aur mirchi-pyaaz???? my mouth's watering... dis time even Maan is having dhabe ka khana... nice....



thanks..arre..kha liya..bas thoda work tha..will update in a bit!!

love ya
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Posted: 15 years ago
dear geet.a
thank you, your post was really cute 👏👏
waiting for next part
best wishes😊


Edited by bahane - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Geet and Maan have finally finished eating and on an impulse, Geet invites the paaji family for dinner next week in their home

Maan thinks
Yeh paagal hai kya? she didn't even ask me if I want to have dinner with them..I will ask her later.At this point, it would seem very awkward.

Maan is about to get up to go pay the bill but Geet says

Geet- Arre..MAAN...Wait a bit.. Abhi Gaajar ka halwa bhi toh Khana hai

Maan- KYA??!! Geet, don't you get full EVER?

Geet- Maan...I want Gaajar ka HALWA..ABHI

Maan thinks- mya museebat hai yaar..She will eat throughout our lives together i think

Maan- okay Geet. Let's go from here. I will take you to the best place where we get Gaajar Halwa,okay?

Geet smiles an enchanting smile..so happy that Maan is listening to all her wishes
and of course that she will get to have Gaajar halwa

Maan remembered Dadi telling him about a very famous shop in Rajendra Nagar, so he took Geet there.

In the car

Geet and Maan sneaked glances at each other. Since there was a cool wind outside, Geet opened her window and at a traffic signal, a man in a black jeep kept staring into the car

Geet wondered why a man would be looking at Maan..
Geet (thought)- Let it be..I don't want to know about these city folks..chi chi chi babaji

Maan wondered why Geet is talking to herself and said
Maan- Geet...Who are you talking to?
Geet- Babaji obviously
Maan- oh..and what are you talking about?

Maan finally looks at Geet,and sees the man staring at Geet lecherously. His eyes flash fire,and his jaw sets

He comes closer to Geet so that the man can hear him and says to him

Maan- Excuse me. If you dare to look at MY wife again, I am going to take those eyes out! DO YOU understand??

Geet so thoroughly confused and the man in the jeep scared witless, stare at Maan who has a very hard time controlling his temper

Geet- Maan...woh
Maan- kya Geet..Ab don't say you could fight yourself..
Geet- I could Maan
Maan- yes..but You weren't even aware he was..You don't know..This man was looking at you with such disgusting eyes
Geet- I really didn't notice. Aur waise bhi, You don't have to get really worried about it. Remember what you said to me in Hoshiyarpur that by anyone touching me, my "pavitrata" won't be violated..well then.

Maan- GEet..woh tab ki baat thi. Plus, I have never looked at you in that way.

He added to himself-
You need to be worshipped and cherished, not stared at like some object for a man's satisfaction.

Geet got so depressed after hearing him say this without figuring out why that she didn't look at him till they reached there or talk...or even think about where he was taking her.

Maan on the other hand thought that he had once again lost his control, but then again,
"i should really get used to it..If she is around...control gets scared and hides somewhere deep inside"
I wonder what she is thinking about me.

Geet was feeling quite dizzy again, and pretty much full was about to doze off, when Maan declared that they had reached.

Geet glared at Maan with sleep-filled eyes and without saying a word, was about to get out of the car, when he stopped her.

Maan- Geet. Gaajar ka halwa..aur kuchh chahiye?
Geet- Nahi. Thank you very much . If you will sit inside, I can go and get it myself.
Maan- Geet. You look tired. Please, sit in the car and let me go.
Geet- Fine. If you're going.. get Daal ka halwa and some ras malai packed too

MAan rolled his eyes and went to get it all for her

Geet thought to herself

What an unpredictable man. Sometimes he acts like...and sometimes like he can't even bear me..Hey babaji...what am I going to do??


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Posted: 15 years ago
geet continue it as soon as possible as i m hungry 4 it as it weekend hope u understand my feelings
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Posted: 15 years ago
Babaji ab mein kya Karoo!!!
Yehloo.. Itni jaldi finish ho gaya 😭
Please update soon!!!
Loved it.. Really cute!,
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks sweetie..... for completing it despite ur busy schedule... well now do ur work... as work cums first.... nice update.... even i wanna hav gajar ka halwa... gosh Geet's demands seem never-ending... but our Maan is also very understanding.... tk cr... & ya complete ur work
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Posted: 15 years ago
both parts are awesome.
loved maaneet scene and their conversation.
continue soon.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 19 n 20
Both were good
Well evn im thking how much Geet eats 😆😆😆
Maan was getting realling pissed of her eating so much
Liked their cute talks n nok jhoks
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Posted: 15 years ago
Now I want butter naan and gajar ka halwa. Going to irritate my mom. Please update soon.

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