A lifetime of Gratitude-ff maneet updt-149,154 - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago
geet,

loved your update....!!!! šŸ˜›

this part is just too too adorable....šŸ‘

Geet doesn't say anything, only takes Maan's hand and places it on her abdomen..

Maan looks at her in confusion,and then feels a tiny nudge..

They look at their joint hands at Geet's abdomen where the baby has kicked for the very first time

Geet- lagta hai, baby likes you
Maan feeling extremely emotional says..
Maan- woh...everyone is looking for us inside. Let's go if you're okay

they go back inside


-soumya

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Posted: 15 years ago
another great updatešŸ‘ ...so sweet 😊...ab to serial se zada update ka wait hai 😃....jaldi se update kro
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update. loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: geet261

<font size="4">another great updatešŸ‘ ...so sweet 😊...ab to serial se zada update ka wait hai 😃....jaldi se update kro</font>



aww really,that's soo sweet of you.. šŸ¤—
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey nice FF
Read all parts
Maan really loves her a lot
Liked their closeness n Maan's changing nature
Update soon n plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey cute part
lol, mangoes in the winter 😃 kl kl
cant wait for more
Maheen xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
update

Maaneet walk slowly inside..not wanting to end the moment as they so abruptly had..
No, Geet thought..As HE abruptly had.

Suddenly MAan stops an she looks at him questioningly

Without meeting her eyes, he says
Maan- Geet,don't worry. I promised you I will protect you and the baby and I will. You don't have to worry about anything but taking care of yourself.

Geet is thinking how to put her words next...
Geet- Thanks Maan..Woh..I wanted to say something to you before we go in.
Maan- what happened?
Geet- um..You took me to the dhabha today,right?
Maan- haan..toh?
Geet-..toh..nothing.let it be.LEt's go inside

Maan stops Geet and she feels tingles all through her body
Trembling like a leaf, she looks into those mesmerizing eyes of Maan, whose heart is not so steady itself.

Immediately he lets go, as if electrocuted

Maan- Geet.Tell me.
Geet- If I do..You will go into one of your fits of anger, and I'm not in the mood to take that risk
Maan(warningly)- Geet...
Geet- What? AM I wrong? when are you not angry. I am not sharing it with you. hmph..

Maan says in a softer tone- Achha meri MAa..tell me

Geet- that dhabha..I was not hungry then...but I want to eat now.

MAan- 😲 WHAT? Abhi? But...But you said..

Geet- I know..but now I am craving it.

Maan- I swear Geet..you and your cravings.. How much does the baby need anyways

Geet- Fine. You won't take me. I will go with Adi. or MrChopra

Maan- HAAN? Mr Chopra? You won't go with anyone except ME.

Geet- I'm not going with a thundercloud driving the car.

Maan- I'm not a thundercloud

Geet- you so are a thundercloud..ready to burst..

Thinking indeed ready to burst, he controls and asks Geet if she can act

Geet- Act? of course I can act! I love to act..In fact, I always played Heer in Hoshiyarpur

Maan- HEER? and you??

Geet- toh? can't i play Heer?

MAan- and who was Ranjha?

Geet- it wasn't you.

Maan- uff..Okay..so either we make our excuses..or you fake that you are hurting while I go tell Dadi what's happening

Geet- oo...wow..I had no idea you lied

Maan- I had no idea I would do so many things in my life...

Geet and Maan nod at each other, and Geet winks at Maan..completely excited

Maan thinks to herself
Maan- MAAn Singh Khurana is doing this for his position. And because she has a craving..it's important to address it otherwise she will make everyone go crazy..

Shuddering a little at the light he had seen in Geet's eyes during the mango craving..he goes first and sneaks a few mangoes in his car.
Then goes to Dadi when he hears a loud scream

Geet-AAAAAHHHHHAAAAHHHH!!

Maan's instinctive protective feeling towards Geet arises at her sound and he rushes to where she is pretending that she has a terrible stomach ache

(guys, no one knows Geet is preggy, except Maan and Dadi, and Adi and Pinky..so they all are anyways the ones who are huddled around her)

Maan and Dadi join Geet and Adi and Pinky..Adi looks like he is just about to faint..

Adi- woh...sir..woh
Maan glares at Adi,warming up to his role and spares one look at the shocked spectators, thanking God it isn't for real

Scooping Geet up in his strong arms, he takes her outside,into the car, and then is about to drive but....

Maan- Geet..you can stop acting now...you're a good actress

Geet- Maan...I'm not acting...Seriously, it's hurting...

Maan- haha Geet, very funny..Stop it.

Geet really looks in pain and the sarcasm in Maan's voice changes to concern as he moves closer to her and asks where she is hurting...

Geet- Here...I'm hurting because....

I'm hungry MAAN>>>TAKE ME TO THE DHABHA as fast as you can!!

MAan is so stunned, he glares at her and starts driving to the dhabha..as fast as he can, thinking to himself...

Oh God..I have gone mad..I must be if I married this crazy woman...Kya hoga mera??


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93

hey cute part

lol, mangoes in the winter 😃 kl kl
and lol, really liked their exchange in the room, and outside in the garden 😊
cant wait for more
Maheen xx

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Posted: 15 years ago
thats so funny!! šŸ˜†.
i am loving the regular updates as well! keep up the great work!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey lol, i keep commenting on a part, and then i realise you have updated again, lol
you're very fastšŸ˜†
Maheen xx

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