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Hinna

@.-BalleBalle-.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Wah re wah ZeeZee! 👏
I thought ur first OS was amazing but this just killed it man! ⭐️
This one was miles better! Seriously i love ur writing style! 👏
I really hope, if Geet still remains pregnant in the show, then the truth comes out something like this because it sounds so realistic!
And the last part......oye hoye very...HOT! 😉
Great work hun! Can't wait to read more!! keep writing keep writing! 😛

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mysterygurl1427

@mysterygurl1427

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

i likey!!! Such a treat to read this after coming home from such a long day from work!! I thank u for that....really made me so happy!! This part was wonderful...i enjoyed reading it a lot!!! Keep up the great work, i hope to see another part to this.....one more day to go i hope that u can write more for us!! Long?? lol I found this tooooo good and short!!! But amazing job seriously!!

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Zahra

@Amongthestars89

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Tania.k
Damn good yaar, very nice, lovely! 👏 👏😃

Thank you! 😃

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Zahra

@Amongthestars89

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: -Destiny-
Hi dear You have done an awesome job : )

lekha

Thanks Lekha! 😃

Read my first FF...it's called May Have Feelings For You😃

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Zahra

@Amongthestars89

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sweet_chilly
😃i enjoyed reading it a lot...specially the last part..thanx a lot..!

Thanks Sana!!! 😃

Lmao...oh the last bit eh??😉 hoping you were in Geet's place then??😆

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Zahra

@Amongthestars89

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: NIDIZ
👏

NIDI!!!! 🤗

Did i make you speechless, eh?😉 😆

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Zahra

@Amongthestars89

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: cacoethes
wow....really good! and the ending 😳 too hot to handle☺️

cacoethes😃

😆 shall i get you some water to cool you down???😉😆

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Zahra

@Amongthestars89

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: hapinezz13
Nice!!

Loved how she screamed his name all thru her pain!!!

😃

Thank you very much!

In this one i wanted to show how she acknowledged Maan in that way, you know?

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Zahra

@Amongthestars89

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: cooldude10
OMG OMG OMG. the ending part was sp 😳 OMFG. the whole thing was amazing 😍 i could imagine it happening! please please update soon 😃

lol thank you! 😃

This is my second oneshot.

Here's the link to my ff creations thread, which will be updated when i post new FF's!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1435253/zees-os-and-ff-creations-thread

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Zahra

@Amongthestars89

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: desigirl_18
OMG this was really awesome Zahra!!! very well written...and the last part soo intense😳!!! Keep it up, love the way u write!!

Thanks Fatima! 😃

😉did you get a bit hot??? 😆😆

Thanks! I'll definately let you know when i write another! 🤗

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