Sometimes LOVE is not ALL it is meant to be - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow it is all so nice ... so exactly wat he would have felt!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome Bri...I was so confused today to think what would be Maan's reaction after Geet ordered him to stay away. But after reading your post am feeling like " Maan's realization is round the corner" 😊...

Your description of the battle going on in Maan's heart is so genuine. Definitely its gonna be a treat to watch how a man like Maan goes thru when a stupid feeling called LOVE hits his very much controlled soul....I can't express my feelings in writing like you but can say that -----------
"sometimes Love is a moment...sometimes Love is a lifetime....sometimes a moment is a lifetime"

We are defo. waiting for that "Moment" when Maan will realize that "It is LOVE and it has arrived"
😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow Bridgette 👏👏 great way with words....please do write more👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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u described maan's love in a lovely poetic way.....keep it up....i guess maan's feelings r very natural....being a city boy he has always been exposed to girls like NT or sasha....but he now has this simple, naive, small-town girl who has entered his heart widout even letting him know.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very very well written dear.Mann's realization is just round the corner.I
Edited by rajeev the best - 15 years ago
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But if you ask me why I care, I would not know. It just matters to me. Every single thing about you matters to me. Your tears, your fears, your laughter, your joy, your anger, your playfulness, your childishness, your innocence, your outlook on life, your philosophy, your naive outlook on life, and so many little things that may not mean anything to you but turn my world upside down.

A thorn that pinches you leaves its indentation on my heart. A breeze that chills you freezes my dampened palms. A bee that stings you cripples my soul. Yet you ask! You ask me why I cover you? How can you?
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Loved the way u described the war going on in Maan's life......

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: rushtrip

Love has many manifestation. It can blossom when cherished. maan and geet are destined for each other. They will meet up the road is long and winded.
Their love is like nature. the volcano, hot geyser and waterfall exist together. Just as Maan's anger sometimes is like a volcano, that burns everything in its wake, a hot geyser that shoots out of a small fissure and a waterfall that find its depth when falling from a great height. Maan is going find himself fall in love and rise like a geyser that can heal and burn at the same time....

just some random thoughts after reading your lovely piece...



Wonderfully put...👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: rusha4003

WOW Bri ..... 👏

Awesome peice of work ....
Exactly the state of Maan's mind..... the very thots that are driving him crazy !!!
You have a wonderful way with words ..... 👍🏼
loved it totally !!!
Can the swallow stay away from the song? Can the eagle stop soaring in flight? Can the morning dew stop drifting towards that blade of grass? Can the irises become detached from the eyes? Can there ever be a tropical rain without the hailstorm? Can the sparkle be missing from the diamonds? Can anything stop a tempest from hitting the horizon?

Nothing, absolutely nothing can keep him apart from her for too long....
Sighhhhhhhhhhhh ..... what more can be said ???? 😍



Thanks so much dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@Nargis @ mahi @sheena @muskanp @doodleberry @tanya @aditi @geet @mayurrocks @rajeev the best @rolzz Thanks guys for reading and comment...it's always great to hear such nice words
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: bridgette

<font color="#cc0033"><font size="3"><font color="#0000ff">"What was happening to him? Why was he thinking this way about GEET? This girl will drive him totally insane one of these days" - MSK</font>

He was disturbed, freaking disturbed. And confused, almighty confused.

Who is this girl? What was happening to him? Why was he "feeling" at all? Maan Singh Khurana is not an emotional fool.

<font color="#0000ff">'Why did you cover me with your shirt and rest my head on your shoulder?" - Geet</font>

God, give me a break woman. Here I am, with my heart in my eyes not knowing a thing as to why I was driven to do that except my care and concern.

But if you ask me why I care, I would not know. It just matters to me. Every single thing about you matters to me. Your tears, your fears, your laughter, your joy, your anger, your playfulness, your childishness, your innocence, your outlook on life, your philosophy, your naive outlook on life, and so many little things that may not mean anything to you but turn my world upside down.

A thorn that pinches you leaves its indentation on my heart. A breeze that chills you freezes my dampened palms. A bee that stings you cripples my soul. Yet you ask! You ask me why I cover you? How can you?

<font color="#0000ff">"Please don't call me or don't come near me" - Geet</font>

What the hell does she think of herself ordering me not to come near her or call her. ME! What the hell is wrong with her?

Do you know how ridiculous that is!

Can the swallow stay away from the song? Can the eagle stop soaring in flight? Can the morning dew stop drifting towards that blade of grass? Can the irises become detached from the eyes? Can there ever be a tropical rain without the hailstorm? Can the sparkle be missing from th</font>
</font><font color="#cc0033"><font size="3">e diamonds? Can anything stop a tempest from hitting the horizon?

Nothing, absolutely nothing can keep him apart from her for too long....
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wow..

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