Short Story-Take my breath away-Vik&Nags!Upd 7/26 - Page 99

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.1k

Views

103.3k

Users

16

Likes

1.7k

Frequent Posters

-sann- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rushtrip



sorry nupur...had some reading to catch up on work wise...have written only half...will try and finish today and promise will update..today...in couple of hours...

kaan pakadti hoon...maaf kar do...

okey....tumvi kya yaad rakhogi ki kisse dosti ki hai....😆😆
waiting eagerly 4 ur update....
-RushTrip- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
Chapter 38
Nargis and Nupur chatted as Nupur ate something, she did not like airplane food and was happy to eat what Nargis had made. They discussed work and caught on news of family. But Nupur was dying to talk about Vicky.
She said, so tell me the story with Vicky. How did you meet. Nargis told her the whole first meeting and the winks this guy had given her. Nupur listened amused at the way these two had collided. Nargis had left out the intimate part, but Nupur being nosy as ever, asked, Did he kiss you when Nargis told about the plane mishap. Nargis blushed, Well he tried but I pushed him away, she lied. Nupur, answered with a Hmm! Not believing her friend of many years. They both knew each other too well to not see through that.
Nupur let it pass, because she was happy to finally see Nargis with someone. Nupur had had her share of boyfriends. She dated and had kissed a few frogs but no prince had turned up yet. She liked men, well, their company and she had many male friends. Nargis was okay with men and they often had arugment about her going for a date with a guy on the pretext of being with Nargis. It had been fun to do these little rebellious things when in high school. Nargis was too straight laced and Nupur had been wondering for sometime now if Nargis was going to ever find herself a boyfriend and now to see her like this was a treat.
Nargis and Nupur then went off to their respective rooms to sleep, they had a long day tomorrow.
Maan and Abs had had the last minute talks about the arrangements and Abs basically getting nervous about the whole thing and Maan cajoling her to calmness. Abs had decided to wear a Banarasi saari in peacock blue with red embroidery as the border and heavy embroidery in silver in the main saree. The blouse was a brocade red with blue embroidery and the back open with thread to tie at neck and a back. The jewellery was her grandmother's old traditional kundan jewelry in uncut diamond and turquoise stones. A necklace that will drape around her neck covering it from base of throat to rest on the hem of the pallo. Matching earring that will dangle from ears to almost but not quite touching the shoulders.
Abs had set everything out and her mother and brother had arranged all the baskets to be taken to the Khurana family. They would have liked to do the thakka at home but the space would be an issue and Khurana's had insisted on doing the first ceremony here so that they did not have to rush to get things arranged the minute they landed. That had been quite helpful.
Morning came with advent of a bright day, a new beginning. To Abs, the birds were chirping merrily, the morning dew shone brighter, there was a zing in the air that smelt sweeter. Maan had woken up with a smile to finally claim his future bride. Today the traditional bethrotal will be the first of many steps that they will take together. He unhurriedly got ready for the events to follow today.
Vicky woke up to find himself thinking of Nargis and Nupur and the fact that now it will be difficult for him to meet Nargis till the wedding with both preparation and guest with Nargis acting as proverbial chaperones. He got ready while smiling at the thoughts he was having of sneaking a few moments with her today. He will love to tease Nargis and get her hackles up with everyone around. He put a plan in place to grab Nargis to himself, just then heard a knock and Maan walked in to get help with the outfit.
It was a traditional chuddar and kurta in cream with a turban in pink and gold to go around the head and a jewel to be put with feather on it. Vicky got up to help Maan decide on the turban twists. He helped organize the jewel which his father had worn in his wedding. Also a family string of pearls was to be worn today. Maan had not wanted to wear this but Vicky had convinced that traditions need to be followed and yes, a bride got to look good during the wedding ceremony while the groom had to turn out to be the clown. He said, Bhai, dulhe ho, joker banajao abhi, nahi to saari zindagi yahi karte rahoge. Bas ek baar billi maar lo, sab theek ho jaayega. Maan punched Vicky on the shoulder for the teasing and said Haan, tumhari tarah thori hai, sab kuch karlo, shaadi ho jaayegi jab honi hogi. Vicky smiled guiltily and said, Apna apna naseeb hai Bhai, tumhein woh door rakhti hai, aur hamari hamein door rehne nahi deti and winked his characteristic wink and shrugged his shoulders.
Nargis had woken up with a start, worried about everything for nothing. She was a guest at the wedding but she felt as if she was going to be on exhibition and the whole Khurana Khandan was going to check her out. She was hoping, Vicky would not get up to his usual pranks. She went and woke up Nupur and got ready and made small breakfast for them. She did not feel like eating, she felt queasy at the thought of confronting so many people. She was glad to have one supporter with her and hugged Nupur tight when she came out to the kitchen.
Nupur, said, Arre wah, aaj to lottery lag gayee. Don't worry Nags, everything will be fine. Mein hoon na.
Nargis said wahi to darr hai. Tum wahan kuch toofan mat macha dena. They are a bit stiff tradition people who follow rules and etiquettes. Tum sambhalna. Nupur said, philhaal tum tension chorro aur nashta khao.
They got ready and Nargis called up Vicky to let him know that they are coming in half an hour to help with anything that needed there. Vicky assured everything was under control but they were welcome. The Verma family would be there around noon.
Nargis and Nupur left for Khurana Mansion with gifts laden in their hands for Abs and Maan.
Edited by rushtrip - 15 years ago
--Nargis-- thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago
Muje lagta hain ke kuch na kuch tau aaj hone wala hain...between Nups and Vicky....I am in for it...plus I am so not going to like being ogled at by the KHURANA Khandaan......ugh....totally have a queezy feeling in the pit of my stomach..... keeping my fingers crossed....off we go the KHURANAS......😕
-RushTrip- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Muje lagta hain ke kuch na kuch tau aaj hone wala hain...between Nups and Vicky....I am in for it...plus I am so not going to like being ogled at by the KHURANA Khandaan......ugh....totally have a queezy feeling in the pit of my stomach..... keeping my fingers crossed....off we go the KHURANAS......😕



arre arre...itna...saara tension...shaadi to Abs ki hai...put on your best smile..girl..square your shoulders, remember Vicky loves you and have fun...
Armu4eva thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
Hmm..seems some tense times ahead for all of them..... guess prewedding jitters....😛
Sure..everything will go off well... !!
Nicely written epi dear.... luvd it..👏
Hot_Indo_Chilly thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
Nargis....get a grip on yourself...Vicky is boasting too much about uhm the time you two spend together and to to your future Jeth!!!!!😲 Need to play hard to get now...And you need to get Nups to help you...I'll help you as much as I can! Is Vicky ki vaat lagani hai ab...Kaheen woh apne Bhai ko uksaaye nahin kuch eisa waisa karne ke liye😲..hai na? Naah, Maan eise nahin hain....Main bhi kya soch rahi hoon...aur waise bhi Paris ka jhaapar toh yaad hi hai Maan ko!!!😆

And now time for Maan to meet my little bro who act like my older bro...I'm sure they'll along fine..engg guys always bond together! 😆

Hmm, backless blouse...wow that's revealing....for a girl's never even wore sleeveless!!! PAr thodi daring toh ho hi sakti hoon...hai na? Aur pallu se back to cover rakh sakti hoon! Just better keep a watch on Maan's fingers all the time!😲😆
😆
Hot_Indo_Chilly thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Hmm..seems some tense times ahead for all of them..... guess prewedding jitters....😛

Sure..everything will go off well... !!
Nicely written epi dear.... luvd it..👏



Pre wedding se pre engagement jitters ho gayi hai mere liye!!!!


Hot_Indo_Chilly thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
Arrey why am I picturing the Khurana men singing "Gal mitthi mitthi bol" from the new movie "Aisha" to me and Nargis at the engagement?

Hot_Indo_Chilly thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rushtrip



arre arre...itna...saara tension...shaadi to Abs ki hai...put on your best smile..girl..square your shoulders, remember Vicky loves you and have fun...



I know exactly what you're going through! You're worried as you know you're not quite yet a Khurana family member...it's liek you're in the middle...and you haven't spoken with your parents about your situation...Complications......but don't worry...I don't think they would put too much pressure on you...as I figure they know what you're going through...

Abhi toh puri limelight mere upar hai...tumhara bhi waqt aayega! Bas meri maddad karo abhi! Kaheen mein saree mein trip na kar jaoon! Plus yeh heavy jewellery uff kya kahoon!
-sann- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
aahh finally....
nice update as usual...👏👏👏
hmmm...to atlast nags ne nups ko bol diya...(woh v adha..😆 koi gaal nehi..i'm nosy...bata to laga hi lungi😆)
i had so many boyfrnds....😲😆😆 aur kiss v kiya..😲😲😆...lolzzz....naughty nupur...😳😆 mom ko pata chal gaya to meri khair nehi😆😆main kinni chalu nikli😉😉😆
nice dress 4 abs...i must tell u...👏maan ki to hosh ur jana hai....😆
hmm....so my jeejudude is thinking about me also....😆 khote...mujhe apni lovelife ka kanta samajhta hain...😡 ab to iski khair nehi...😡 agar nupur ko ye pata chal gaya na to wo to dusri flight leke chali jayegi phir v apni dost ki life main musibat create nehi karegi....😭 jeejudude, beware.....do not mess with me....kyuki apni frn ki liye main kuch v kar sakti hoon....
aur nags tu v...a lo..yaha to sabko mujhse problem hai....😭 vaise hoon v to toofan express...😆 ek jij jiski nazar mein main hu patthar...ek nags jiski nazar mein main hu desester.....😭 ab kya karu.....
nags ki warning se to lag raha ki kuch bohot bura hone wala hai.... kahi ye khurana khandan mera churma na bana de....hai khuda meri raksha karna....😆
vaise sabki kapro ka description to de diya....nags aur main kya pehenke ja rahe hai???

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: nushhkiee

6 months ago

Short Story ~ Objection, Your Honor! It’s Love ~ Completed

Had this scene flash in my mind a couple of days ago, and I just couldn’t shake it off… It’s nothing big, just a random moment of inspiration...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

6 months ago

Short Story - Interest?

Hi, everyone. Below, I’ve written a prologue for a different sort of genre. Now before I decide to post, I’d like to know whether there is any...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

8 years ago

TH #2 Teri Meri love story- pt37/38/39/40-pg66/67/68/70- 9 june

Introduction this is simple love story... where u see maaneet cute nok zhok, ruthna manana, both love, breakup... geet doing job in Maan company

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: amrutha11

3 months ago

Maneet story guess the name

Hi everyone, I forgot tthe name of the story of maan and geet. The story line is maan dadhi force geet to marry her grandson maan whose half...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".