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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD

**Angel Face** Thankoos.. BTW, are we the only ppl here today?? What happened to Vroom, Nargis and Nupur ?? I am eagerly waiting for Nupur's story.. I feel I know u galz a little cos of the story.. Nupur is a big mystery for me 😳 tumne bulaya aur hum chale aaye...😆 well, i'm also waiting 4 nups story...bt likhne wali gayeb....😕 i'm a mystery to u..😲 am i, am i,really?😆 well this nupur is a mystery 4 me also..😆.

Did u see the new pic of Maan in the darga !! So maanilicous 😍😍😍😍..... Of course you would have!! *dead*
So what are ur plans for friendship day??? meri din to gujar gayi...had a lot of funn 2day with frnds, clssmates......had a concert & party on beach....had to perform...all went perfect...lot off masty...i laughed more today..(steph & he😆)...they made me laugh even more....😆 bt he the ghanchakkar broke my nail..threw my i-pod in the sea....😡😡
And u guys watch Geet on YT only ?? I think Vroom and some others said that there is a delay of a week in telecast 🤢🤢... i watch on YT...sometimes in TV..bt it delays...
I feel the clarity is not good on YT at times.. I watch it both on the TV and YT.. Pagal hoon 😆😆
Thought of watching on startv.in (Good clarity)- cant see videos It says I am not in India AngryAngry.. Where do they think I am - in the SEA ConfusedConfused
Ok , I am chapar chapar person- be it virtual or real world.. So u may need to use the magical words (CHUP) at times (Or just skip 🤔 Filmy type - Nahiiiiiiii)
Keep deleting what I type- Dont want to bore u with my life story (Will slowly reel u galz in and then WHAM 😈😈😈- I ll bug u to death)..u r not alone here...main hu na...mera radio 24/7 yaha bajta rehta hai....jhappiya pao...😆

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Posted: 15 years ago
ab apni mu se khud ki kya tareef karu..vaise tareef karne ki koi bajey v nehi hai.....jo puchna hai pucho....i'll tell....😆
i'm aware of these weird look....😆😆
ya...u better not mention MaAn.....😉
lets borrow chappals, danda's also....😈 he deserves more...arrogant jerk.....tommorow is enemy day...& i'll spend the whole day with him😈😈 akher ek hi to hai meri dusmaan..😈 lets attack 2morow...😆..no, mera i-pod pani mein kho gaya😭😭..he'll hav to pay 4 this😡 well, i did pakao his brain & threw his car's key in the sea...😈😆....mujhse panga.....😆😆 hmmm...maan ka attitude de ta hai....le aayi na aukat pe.....😆
nail broke & i got hurt....my feet is paining like hell....he stepped into my feet while performing.....blood🤢🤢 😭on the stage....bt i didn't stop neither cried...i dont remember whn i cried last time.😕..just finished somehow thn went to sea.....paani mera blood v le gaya.....😭
he is not "my supposed 2 my frnd"...my enemy...
& my new laughing topic is steph & he....😆😆 another coincidence is tht as it was a beach party,steph was wearing skirt as vrus mentioned🤣...& he was wearing male shorts🤣...i was screaming to control myself....bt failed😆😆😆he was maybe teaching her steps CLOSELY...😆😆i told thm ki kisi kone mein jake jo karna hai kare😆😆😆 they were like 😲😕....we argued in this topic..why was i laughing...😆😆 result i lost my i-pod..he lost his car's keys....😡
yep..i dance...& a bathroom singer as well....😳 i'm a 🤢 dancer....
yep...radio will wait 4 the drive😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -sann-

ab apni mu se khud ki kya tareef karu..vaise tareef karne ki koi bajey v nehi hai.....jo puchna hai pucho....i'll tell....😆

i'm aware of these weird look....😆😆
ya...u better not mention MaAn.....😉
Hmm I should ask u questions?? Interrogation nahi lage ga!!! Ok.. Let me think!! I guess u in India.. What u doing??? And I want to know about this 'Arrogant Jerk'. I think I read in one of the posts that he resembles Maan 😲😲.. So I want More details. I know u hate him.. So pura sehar yahi pe nikaal do 😉
lets borrow chappals, danda's also....😈 he deserves more...arrogant jerk.....tommorow is enemy day...& i'll spend the whole day with him😈😈 akher ek hi to hai meri dusmaan..😈 lets attack 2morow...😆..no, mera i-pod pani mein kho gaya😭😭..he'll hav to pay 4 this😡 well, i did pakao his brain & threw his car's key in the sea...😈😆....mujhse panga.....😆😆 hmmm...maan ka attitude de ta hai....le aayi na aukat pe.....😆
Chappals nahi - Abs ke Heel wale Pumps.. She is ready to chuck them😆😆.. So lets use them.. And Geet's danda!! Idiot! ***Face, how dare he?? Kaha rahta hai?/ Billa aur billi ko bhej dethe hai?? What say?? I ll call him AJ (Arrogant jerk , but cant be used short form for Arjun- so 😕.. Any ideas what to call this Manhoos Chehara ?)
nail broke & i got hurt....my feet is paining like hell....he stepped into my feet while performing.....blood🤢🤢 😭on the stage....bt i didn't stop neither cried...i dont remember whn i cried last time.😕..just finished somehow thn went to sea.....paani mera blood v le gaya.....😭
he is not "my supposed 2 my frnd"...my enemy...
My GOD!! Poor baby!! 😡😡😡😡....... Good u ddnt cry! Dont show weakness in front of this scum!! He stepped on ur foot and ddnt apologize?? And to top that threw away ur IPOD.. Kothe! 🤬🤬🤬🤬.... No tears of fury also ??(...i dont remember whn i cried last time.)
& my new laughing topic is steph & he....😆😆 another coincidence is tht as it was a beach party,steph was wearing skirt as vrus mentioned🤣...& he was wearing male shorts🤣...i was screaming to control myself....bt failed😆😆😆he was maybe teaching her steps CLOSELY...😆😆i told thm ki kisi kone mein jake jo karna hai kare😆😆😆 they were like 😲😕....we argued in this topic..why was i laughing...😆😆 result i lost my i-pod..he lost his car's keys....😡
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣.. Sorry Steph and he just make me laugh soooo much.. Reading this is my halat, I can understand ur situation.. And he got angry cos u were laughing?? Stupid Fool? He has patented Laugh and smile?? Only he has the rights to it.. Tell him India got independence 60 yrs ago and Freedom expression is our basic right.. Go and learn CIVICS before taking panga with u.
Just curious - how did u go to the beach ?? Not with him I hope? And how did he manage to use his car.. and Jappis cos u ddnt cry or anything but took care of him in a very nasty way.. Loved it Nups...BTW, dont leave him till he gets u a brand new IPOD...😳😳😳😳
yep..i dance...& a bathroom singer as well....😳 i'm a 🤢 dancer....
I DONT THINK u a 🤢 dancer.. If u were, u would not be performing in front of a crowd.. I am sure ur an Amazing dancer.. 😊😊
yep...radio will wait 4 the drive😉 - Lets go to US.. Will go with Vroom to Canada 😉😉... Long drive and also we will meet Abs 😆😆(Hope both would not run away seeing this)

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Posted: 15 years ago

Anindo eh ?? Dunju sounds better (But what does it mean 😳😳) ?

I thought u ll like him cos he resembles Maan.. Now I am scared of Tamatar, pumps, chappals, danda.. Please dont!!NAHIIIIIIII

But like Maan inspires irritation and anger in Geet, Dunju inspires hate in u.. Love and hate are 2 sides of a coin I can seee those tamatars and danda flying!! ) Indifference is better, dont u think???.. 😉... Pagal ho jayega wondering what happened to u 😆

Wow tall munda.. Hatta katta nau jawan ?? They drool over him - so Steph is not the only one eh (Just could not resist bringing Steph into the pic😆😆😆)

Sure, give the address - **HARRY POTTER ISHTYLE** Howler post 🤢🤢🤢🤢
He watches Geet ? Dont tell me he is inspired by Maan?? Gosh Dostana 2 ?? Adi has compitetion now 🤣🤣🤣🤣...

Its not bad that u dont show emotions in front of ppl.. Nothing wrong with it.. People who dont show emotions easily are very deep..So dont think ur emotionless 😃😃😃

Steph and Dunju ---stunju(Sounds stunted--Oops I thought X-rated) ??🤣

U know to drive a car *Jealous face*..
I can ride a 2 wheeler, I am still learning car driving (Since 2 years ☺️!! )
When u said MRT I was like what is that?? Thought it was public transport system and then checked with Google maiyya..So I was right!!!

He ddnt agree for the lift ?? Thank god! At least he ddnt ruin the ending...
If u hadnt said Steph, he may have gone with her.. U wld have had more reason to chidafy him 😆

Why do u need tamatar when that kotha keeps physically hurting u.. Good u threw away the keys.. Anywayz to kick his 🤬 and then throw him into the SEA??😈😈😈😈

(Badka rahi hoon nah 😆😆😆😈)

Its 3 AM now.. So me going off to sleep...Nahi toh kal office mein 🥱🥱 face Rev
BTW, if u want any more Kharara jawabs, I will be here 😉😉
Edited by MaaneetDD - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD

Anindo eh ?? Dunju sounds better (But what does it mean 😳😳) ? ganda type....

I thought u ll like him cos he resembles Maan.. Now I am scared of Tamatar, pumps, chappals, danda.. Please dont!!NAHIIIIIIII maan to maan hai....uski jasa koi nehi....aur ye dunju meri dimaag itna khata hai ki main iska chehra hi nehi dekhti😕 aur meri ek bohot buri adat hai...i speak to people looking directly into their eyes....😆😆

But like Maan inspires irritation and anger in Geet, Dunju inspires hate in u.. Love and hate are 2 sides of a coin I can seee those tamatars and danda flying!! ) Indifference is better, dont u think???.. 😉... Pagal ho jayega wondering what happened to u 😆 😲😲 ya khuda....ii ka hai...😲😲 *faints thinking about it*

Wow tall munda.. Hatta katta nau jawan ?? They drool over him - so Steph is not the only one eh (Just could not resist bringing Steph into the pic😆😆😆) woh to hai🤢...ya...bt steph is special😉🤣

Sure, give the address - **HARRY POTTER ISHTYLE** Howler post 🤢🤢🤢🤢
He watches Geet ? Dont tell me he is inspired by Maan?? Gosh Dostana 2 ?? Adi has compitetion now 🤣🤣🤣...
poor adi....iski kartuto se to lagta hai ki dekhta hai..& he is REALLY inspired by MaAn.....so, i keep telling him...'stop watching maan..& behaving like 1'😆

Its not bad that u dont show emotions in front of ppl.. Nothing wrong with it.. People who dont show emotions easily are very deep..So dont think ur emotionless 😃😃😃 thnx...kisine to samjha....Embarrassed🤗

Steph and Dunju ---stunju(Sounds stunted--Oops I thought X-rated) ??🤣 lolzz....i'm having a gr8 time here teasing him with her...😆😈

U know to drive a car *Jealous face*..
I can ride a 2 wheeler, I am still learning car driving (Since 2 years ☺️!! )
When u said MRT I was like what is that?? Thought it was public transport system and then checked with Google maiyya..So I was right!!!
yupp....

He ddnt agree for the lift ?? Thank god! At least he ddnt ruin the ending...maan v jata to main lift thodi na deti...😆
If u hadnt said Steph, he may have gone with her.. U wld have had more reason to chidafy him 😆wo to avi b kar rahi hu....(thnx abs)😆😉

Why do u need tamatar when that kotha keeps physically hurting u.. Good u threw away the keys.. Anywayz to kick his 🤬 and then throw him into the SEA??😈😈😈😈 haan yaar so to hai...humesha chot pohochata hai...ye ek chalta phirta deasester hai..😆😆 i wish i could..bt inni bari insaan oopss saitan ko sea mein fekne k liye jyada power lagegi...aur agar isne mujhe phekdi to i'll b dead...cause itni swimming mujhe nehi aata....Ouch

(Badka rahi hoon nah 😆😆😆😈) ahhh...lets threw him ...

Its 3 AM now.. So me going off to sleep...Nahi toh kal office mein 🥱🥱 face Rev
BTW, if u want any more Kharara jawabs, I will be here 😉😉 thnx sweetie..🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
bas ek update ki gujarish...phir hogi (kis cheez??) ki baarish.....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -sann-

bas ek update ki gujarish...phir hogi (kis cheez??) ki baarish.....


Phir Nups ko milegi Arjun ki pappis ki baarish... ok that was lame sorry!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sigma

happy friendship day everyone

abs and maan are officially engaged, congrats
great update as usual
I really liked Adi he seems soo sweet



thanks sigma...

have not come to the thread all day...how absent minded of me...
wish you a very happy friendship's day as well..stay cool

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