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Posted: 15 years ago
Ah...Rev and Nups..i just read everything..and wow..

i was laughing at some of the stuff you two have penned...hilarious both are
no riotous actually...
jhappis for both of you....

ab mein kya kahoon...
Mein aur Nags US mein ...Rev tum India, Nups tum singa and Abs Canada...
kya international sawaari hai....

aaja meri gaadi mein beth jaa...

lets see...me Vroom, you Rev...nUps is the driver...gaadi chalani aati..hai..Abs..engine by virtue of being engg...and Nags...Navigator....

bas to phir...around the world in 80 seconds....ab dilli door nahi....

btw aaj update nahi...

mein ek...baat sunaati hoon...

mere hubby mujhe..New Jersey nahi le jaa rahe...
so i will be home in Boston...writing..all the updates you guys want....so aaj no update...

now why i am not going? becos i will be going on 16th with him....
we have a seva..."krishna" and have a guest bhagwan....Ah guests ke baare me suna hoga...guest bhagwan..is new for you all i am sure...
so it will be tide difficult for me to take care of them both...ie take all their stuff.. and do all the packing and unpacking for 4 days..too much hassle so when i go for 2 weeks...on 16th the guest bhagwan would have gone back to his home...and i will have that much less to take care of...


so with so much...happening..

aaj no update...

this i am saying for the third time....
but phir bhi aaj no update...
you see i wanted to give a gift of an update to you all but..didnt happen...

so aaj no update...
anyway i now sound like a broken record...
so aaj...no..stopping my fingers from typing..
goodnight..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rushtrip

Ah...Rev and Nups..i just read everything..and wow..
even I read it ... tum dono na .... I just loved it gals

i was laughing at some of the stuff you two have penned...hilarious both are
no riotous actually...
jhappis for both of you....

Meri taraf se bhi de doon vru ... it was really funny

ab mein kya kahoon...
Mein aur Nags US mein ...Rev tum India, Nups tum singa and Abs Canada...
kya international sawaari hai....

omg main to teen ko chor kar gayee thi yeh to panch ho gaye....
aaja meri gaadi mein beth jaa...

lets see...me Vroom, you Rev...nUps is the driver...gaadi chalani aati..hai..Abs..engine by virtue of being engg...and Nags...Navigator....
mujhe bhi gadi main baithna hai

bas to phir...around the world in 80 seconds....ab dilli door nahi....

btw aaj update nahi...

mein ek...baat sunaati hoon...

mere hubby mujhe..New Jersey nahi le jaa rahe...
so i will be home in Boston...writing..all the updates you guys want....so aaj no update...

jiju akele ja rahen hai kya.... koyi baat nahin hum hain na tumhare saath

now why i am not going? becos i will be going on 16th with him....
we have a seva..."krishna" and have a guest bhagwan....Ah guests ke baare me suna hoga...guest bhagwan..is new for you all i am sure...

yeh guest bhagwaan kya hai thoda samjha do na... mujhe nahin pata

so it will be tide difficult for me to take care of them both...ie take all their stuff.. and do all the packing and unpacking for 4 days..too much hassle so when i go for 2 weeks...on 16th the guest bhagwan would have gone back to his home...and i will have that much less to take care of...


so with so much...happening..

aaj no update...

this i am saying for the third time....
but phir bhi aaj no update...
you see i wanted to give a gift of an update to you all but..didnt happen...

so aaj no update...
anyway i now sound like a broken record...
so aaj...no..stopping my fingers from typing..
goodnight..

😆broken record 🤣 I am not complaining I understand ... arre yeh kya hua yahan toh itne saare superstars ho gaye hai ... nups aur faz bhi ... wah bhai wah....

isse pehle ki main bhool jaaoon

Happy Friendship Day to all - Abs, Nags, Nups, Rev and our dearest Vru🤗

I know i know main late hoon par kya karoon aaj hi hospital se discharge huyi hoon ... accident ho gaya tha 28th ko... thodi si tuti phuti hoon par theek hoon... is hafte toh ghar se kaam karungi

ghar aate hi maine to padna shuru kar diya and guess what finally I caught up and have read all phew .... 145 pages was a lot to read .... well I read almost all the comments ... let me admit I did skip a few ... but loved all the interactions that u gals have here ...hope I too will be welcomed to the gang

abhi 2 am ho raha hai and I am here ... I missed visiting IF for 4 days ... main toh login karna hi bhool gaye thi ... jab comment karne gayi tab yaad aaya....

hey abs main bhi bihar se hoon ... I was born in aurangabad

i know I am not making any sense here ... pata nahin kya kya likhe jaa rahi hoon .... is post ka asar hai nahin toh main toh bas read hi karti hoon comments bahut kam deti hoon aur woh bhi neutral and boring .... toh shayad tum logon ko main yaad hi na hoon ...

anyway lagta hai kucch jyada hi ho gaya ... ab aage chale .. vru u are amazing, outstanding (meri angrezi itni hi hai) writer ... kya baat hai ... the way u explained about the decor and the characters was wow... Nags aur Vicky toh chaa gaye .... nups entry was awesome I loved it to the core ....it was so funny I actually imagined the whole scene with the description that u gave ....

so ab char char... parallel stories chalengi hmmmm ... and they are all so so so romantic .😳... vru I really love the way u write and ur dedication simply marvelous...

accha toh ab main so jati hoon ... bina post padhe neend hi nahin aati kya karen😉

bye friends take care

love
Neha

PS bahut lambi post ho gayi ... realize hi nahin hua

finally I was able to post ... it was not allowing me showing error




Edited by jamoshi2507 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
😭😡😡😡😡😭...
I had typed a long post as usual and when clicked on Post reply.. got an error!! And I had not even copied it to a notepad.. Have to write again... Hai Rabba!!
Ok, here it goes again!! I forgot half of what I had written 😕 - Condensed version
Yea tell him no faida trying to imitate Maan, tum fasne wali nahi ho 😉😉
Looking at ppl into the eye while spking is not buri habit.. It shows ur gutsy and nothing to hide.. So chillax!
My God Dunju always makes me 🤣🤣🤣🤣( I was so upset that I had to retype, I just startd their topic and my laughter is back).. U made my day 😆😆😆
I wanted to write *Hoshiarpur ISHtyle* Harri puttar wala Howler post.. 🥱 head Rev typed it wrong
BTW, gandi galis in multiple languages , what say? Vroom and Abs will help in French, me will help u in getting the words in South Indian languages too 😉, all of u can pitch in with the Hindi( Will take Geet's help 2 ) and of course English hum sab hain nah 😆😆😆
Hum hai nah 😉😉
Me 2.. Thank u for posting about them.. They are tooo hilarious.. Tickle my funny bones always.. On top of that Vroom's Stranger than friction stories are becoming kinda real nah ?/ Shorts, short skirts.. Closeness 😆😆
How dare he even think of throwing u into the sea 😡😡.. Oye (Brij style).. Kothe (Geet style)..
Get a crane 😆😆 and throw him into the sea first and then run fast to ur car 😉..
Does he hurt only u or others too ? Is this dunju a chalta phirta disaster only one in front of u? Intentional hai kya 😲😲
Dont worry about swimming Maan ko bhej denge 😉.. Oops - sorry Abs.. Arjun ko bhej denge 😆
🤗to u too Doll (😲-Did I just call u a doll ?) Nahi not the tamatars !! BTW, pink ur fav color or what ?
@VROOM
Thankooos..
Both me and Nups *BOW* and 🤗 to u toooooooooo!!
Wow, we have a navigator, driver, engineer - take care of the gaadi, radio - Apni toh gaadi chal padi!!!
International galz on desi trip 😆😆( I mean we will visit one of the countries where we reside nah)
Dont worry , update at ur convenience... OOPs.. Abs, Nargis and Nups are throwing tamatars and pumps on me.. I am soooooooo 🤢🤢
So u gonna be alone for 2 weeks?? Yuppieeeee... We will get loads of updates galz 😉😉
So u ll join him on 16th ?? Guests at Boston or in NJ 😕??? Hope NJ, dont want u to be troubled..
we want updates continously 🤔
Also, Abs is not sooooo dignified that we cant loosen up her a little - Proof - She is ready to throw her pumps at us (I wont let u forget 😈).. So Vroom, lets leave the hardware intact and tweak the registry 😉😉😉
(Did was a condensed version- REV tum bhi nah, inne vade vade jhoot 😳😳)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Neha,
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY TO U TOO 😃
welcome to this crazy post!!
U liked our bachkani baatein ?? Thank u!!
🤗 to u tooo!!
Today is an awesome day-- I am laughing soo much cos of u galz and then even getting appreciated for nonsense.. Kya baat hai !!
Even I ddnt understand the guest bhagwan funda 😕
Jump into the bandwagon!!!
Oh god! Whatz wrong?? Like I told before chakkar kya hai.. All are hurting uselves!!
I know how u feel- I have told Vroom that I need dictionary every types she pens something.. My meager English knowledge does not suffice to do justice to her brilliant writing..
U can type looooooong posts, no worries(Look whoz talking).. I can never write less than 5 lines!!!
Even u got an error?? Ok so it was not my poor comp or net (Bahut galiya mili usko!! )...
U 2 in US ?? ( U said 2 AM , for me its 3:30 PM here)...
Ignore typos.. In office- So chori chori chupke chupke post kar rahe hai 😉
Edited by MaaneetDD - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD

😭😡😡😡😡😭...

I had typed a long post as usual and when clicked on Post reply.. got an error!! And I had not even copied it to a notepad.. Have to write again... Hai Rabba!! same thing happenes to me....itna gussa aata hai...ki kya batao....Angry
Ok, here it goes again!! I forgot half of what I had written 😕 - Condensed version
Yea tell him no faida trying to imitate Maan, tum fasne wali nahi ho 😉😉 or nehi to kya...kaha maan😳 kaha ye..🤢
Looking at ppl into the eye while spking is not buri habit.. It shows ur gutsy and nothing to hide.. So chillax! thnx😳
My God Dunju always makes me 🤣🤣🤣🤣( I was so upset that I had to retype, I just startd their topic and my laughter is back).. U made my day 😆😆😆 my pleasure....😆😆
I wanted to write *Hoshiarpur ISHtyle* Harri puttar wala Howler post.. 🥱 head Rev typed it wrong
BTW, gandi galis in multiple languages , what say? Vroom and Abs will help in French, me will help u in getting the words in South Indian languages too 😉, all of u can pitch in with the Hindi( Will take Geet's help 2 ) and of course English hum sab hain nah 😆😆😆 done....i'll add bengali's as well.....😉
Hum hai nah 😉😉 chalo koi to meri saath...
Me 2.. Thank u for posting about them.. They are tooo hilarious.. Tickle my funny bones always.. On top of that Vroom's Stranger than friction stories are becoming kinda real nah ?/ Shorts, short skirts.. Closeness 😆😆 i'm giving thm awards 4 being so hilarious.....😆😆 yepp..its becoming....😆😆😆
How dare he even think of throwing u into the sea 😡😡.. Oye (Brij style).. Kothe (Geet style)..
Get a crane 😆😆 and throw him into the sea first and then run fast to ur car 😉.. nice idea...
Does he hurt only u or others too ? Is this dunju a chalta phirta disaster only one in front of u? Intentional hai kya 😲😲 pata nehi...mujhe hurt karke time miley to dusriko pohchaye....Angrymujhse dusmani hai.....Angry
Dont worry about swimming Maan ko bhej denge 😉.. Oops - sorry Abs.. Arjun ko bhej denge 😆 chale ga.....
🤗to u too Doll (😲-Did I just call u a doll ?) Nahi not the tamatars !! BTW, pink ur fav color or what ? doll, who me?? 😆 *liked it😉* no, pink is not my fav....my fav is blue.....boring, haina...
@VROOM
Thankooos..
Both me and Nups *BOW* and 🤗 to u toooooooooo!! yupp...& we luv u.....
Wow, we have a navigator, driver, engineer - take care of the gaadi, radio - Apni toh gaadi chal padi!!! driver is ready 4 the drive....😉
International galz on desi trip 😆😆( I mean we will visit one of the countries where we reside nah) wah..rush trip ki desi trip...😉😆😆
Dont worry , update at ur convenience... OOPs.. Abs, Nargis and Nups are throwing tamatars and pumps on me.. I am soooooooo 🤢🤢 agar jyada late kiya toh.....ready 4 these.......
So u gonna be alone for 2 weeks?? Yuppieeeee... We will get loads of updates galz 😉😉 hope so.....kahi jij ki yaad mein kho na jaye.....😆
So u ll join him on 16th ?? Guests at Boston or in NJ 😕??? Hope NJ, dont want u to be troubled..
we want updates continously 🤔
Also, Abs is not sooooo dignified that we cant loosen up her a little - Proof - She is ready to throw her pumps at us (I wont let u forget 😈).. So Vroom, lets leave the hardware intact and tweak the registry 😉😉😉
(Did was a condensed version- REV tum bhi nah, inne vade vade jhoot EmbarrassedEmbarrassed)

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Posted: 15 years ago
Neat u add the bengali too 😆😆.. We will give desi flavor to the culturla munda 😉😉
BTW, u bengali ???
I know, but what award would u give them ? Something that irritates them and 🤣🤣🤣 for us!!
Itni wadiya kudi se dushmani?? Andha hai kya ??? I think God forgot to give this Banda Brains 😆😆
Blue is boring ?? NOOOOOOOOOO. I love blue !! So it cant be boring 😉😉..
Love black too.. So there..It cant get any more boring...
Awesome - liked Rush ki desi trip!!!
BTW, I am 😕.. should i be ready for the tamatar or should Vroom be ready? (Babaji, not me.. Pelase not me).. Now Vroom will like- musibat ke time itni selfish ho gayi 😳😳
Nups, have u noticed that Dunju has given lot of fodder for our conversation and also made others 🤣🤣🤣 cos of our posts!! So a big thanda ICE CUBE down their spines.. So they feel the chill of being such awesome Laughing stocks!! (Zyada ho gaya kya?? 😕)
I hope Steph and Dunju never venture in IF, esp this post!! Nahi toh watt lag jayegi
So how was ur day today?? I hope there were no mishaps today and ur feeling better( I mean ur wounds)...
Waiting for the epi!! Hope they dont delay the dargah scene.. Already over the pics and photos!!
Take care Doll 😉😉...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD

Neat u add the bengali too 😆😆.. We will give desi flavor to the culturla munda 😉😉

BTW, u bengali ??? yes....
I know, but what award would u give them ? Something that irritates them and 🤣🤣🤣 for us!! will give thm something karara...
Itni wadiya kudi se dushmani?? Andha hai kya ??? I think God forgot to give this Banda Brains 😆😆 ya...aur insaniyat v...
Blue is boring ?? NOOOOOOOOOO. I love blue !! So it cant be boring 😉😉..
Love black too.. So there..It cant get any more boring... yep, black & white is also...
Awesome - liked Rush ki desi trip!!! thnx
BTW, I am 😕.. should i be ready for the tamatar or should Vroom be ready? (Babaji, not me.. Pelase not me).. Now Vroom will like- musibat ke time itni selfish ho gayi 😳😳 🤣
Nups, have u noticed that Dunju has given lot of fodder for our conversation and also made others 🤣🤣 cos of our posts!! So a big thanda ICE CUBE down their spines.. So they feel the chill of being such awesome Laughing stocks!! (Zyada ho gaya kya?? 😕) no...kam hua..aur kuch bolo...he deserves more...
I hope Steph and Dunju never venture in IF, esp this post!! Nahi toh watt lag jayegi accha hoga...aajye...i dont care......
So how was ur day today?? I hope there were no mishaps today and ur feeling better( I mean ur wounds)... 1 of the bakwas day 4 me...subha accha tha...exm v accha gaya....there was no mishap today...there was a accident in evening....cut my hand with some metal things...& my hair got fire....
Waiting for the epi!! Hope they dont delay the dargah scene.. Already over the pics and photos!! ya....abb bas isika intezar hai...
Take care Doll 😉😉... i need this....

srry....yaar, i'm feeling damn 🤢....actually wht happened is tht our batch went to a small chember 4 practical exm...it got fire..its true...😭 everyone is wounded bt not tht serious....i'm furious on everybody....my mom didn't come to see me....😡 & tht dunju pushed me so hard....😡 tht my hand got injured...😭 isse to B se gali dena chahiye....bt i dressed his wound...😲 doctor hu vai...thts my duty.....i'm sitting somewhere else...wont go to home today....phone is switched off....hand is bleeding..had to cut my hair😭😭....avi ward pe ja rahi hu....GEET ki time aungi...pray 4 me....😭

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Posted: 15 years ago
@Neha...

welcome to the club ...yaar...gaadi mein bahut jagah..hai..more the merrier.this party will be and yes..long post is what we want...

ab mein itna saara jawab mein nahi likhoongi now...bahut kuch karna hai..par just to explain about

guest bhagwan....
i have a krishna murti whose seva i do everyday...from giving him bath to bhog twice a day, fruits and milk twice a day... and i have a friend who had demise in their family so they cannot do seva for the said number of days and have to london for the rites and all..so i have their murti so i have to do the same for him...dress him up, put nice jewellry, apply ittar, chandan..no flowers here..but in India we do the whole thing...aarti and all..

so it will be a bit cumbersome to pack and unpack all the stuff required for both the gods...so there..i am going to stay back this week...and once the friend is back on 4th...i will have a little reprieve..it is a work and one has to do with dedication....hope that explains..the process...

btw...thanks for liking my writing...

welcome aboard....
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ Rev...detailed reply later...

for now..go with the registry detail changes....sounds like a plan....and we dont want Abs to restore everything..so...ensure...that it is hack proof...

Abs..mein...palang ke neeche..chupkar type kar rahi..hoon...to not get hit by the blessed..no...the cursed..pumps...

duck...
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Posted: 15 years ago
The word that I learnt in bengali is Bosho ( I hope I wrote it right). I have a bengali friend. We went to Calcutta (her home town) and whenever we went to her relatives house.. 1st thing I heard was Bosho... So learnt the meaning.. And Balo bashee ( I learnt so that I could say the dishes are very tasty)... Mishty, rashgulla and Maachi.. Yummmmmmmm... I want to go back!! amazing food there...
I ll think of something very nice for them. Dont worry 😈
White is my hubby's fav color.. I dont like this color cos of the washing!! Itni mushkil hai maintian karna ( See how lazy I am!! )🤔
U dont care ? Then even I dont care..... 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 I am imaging their expressions and hasi nahi rukh rahi hai.. My hubby is watching news 🥱 (YAWN) and asking me to keep quiet...
Came home early from work to watch Geet. Have to go back at 11 again cos of some meeting 😡
My god ! U burnt ur hair and that idiot hurt ur hand again 😡😡.. IS bandhe ka problem kya hai?? Everyday he hurts u!!! Before we go on that long drive Nups, have a hop stop at singapore.. Both of us will 🤬........
Auntyji may not have realized the seriousness. Must have thought its a small mishap and that ur anxious.. Dont worry..when she knows what actually happened she will shower u with sooo much concern!!!
BTW, why did Dunju push u? Was he trying to play hero to a dasmel who was NOT in distress??
Did he hurt the same hand again??
Dont tell me he is a doc too 😲😲.. Aajkal kaise doctors hai!! Instead of being the ilaaj he is the bimaari..
See even if u hate him, u took care of his hand.. True proffessionalism👏👏.. UR A DOLL...
Ru forgetful like me ??? Ddnt carry the charger?? (I do that often enuff )...😳
I thought u wanted shorter hair ???😕😕.. I hope u went to parlor to cut ur hair!!
Remember the words,, This too shall pass!!!
Life is like sunsire - different hues- just like the differrent shades of our life (Itni bekaar writing!!)
Ok me going to prepare dinner.. Hopefully ll catch u a little later(whenever u free)..
BTW, check this post
Its funny, hopefully the epi and the post ll bring a huge 😃 on ur face!! And please dont forget to eat ur dinner and take care of the bleeding hand 😊

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