One Shot: Maan and Geet on the dancefloor - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome Ash.. u described their feelings beautifully... waiting for more..
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wow really beutifully written!!! 😊
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awsm, wud u b writin more????
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Beautifully written. I love the imagery you have put through out the story =).
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ash!

This was fabulously written! Beautifully described! Loved every bit of it. Written with a mesmering flow of words. Maaneet were adorable!

Hope you come up with something again, soon!

Tia
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Nicely written ash..... but somehow i tend to compare it with actual scene.... i found that more interesting.....
well ur dance sequence description is almost like the actual dance.....
sorry after being in den n cristicising episodes...i hv become a bit critical.....
but well written.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: deniac

Nicely written ash..... but somehow i tend to compare it with actual scene.... i found that more interesting.....

well ur dance sequence description is almost like the actual dance.....
sorry after being in den n cristicising episodes...i hv become a bit critical.....
but well written.....



No problem darling. BTW wrote this before the actual scene aired.... 😆😆😆
Thank you.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey Ash .... I never read this OS earlier I just got the link from some other FF .... wow it was fantastic 👏..... the description was apt and sensuous at the same time .... I really loved it .🤗... please PM me whenever u write such scenes

thanks in advance
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sweets! This is brilliant and so enticing! Love it!

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