One Shot: Maan and Geet on the dancefloor

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

awesome Ash.. u described their feelings beautifully... waiting for more..

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Hiba

@Hiba282

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

wow really beutifully written!!! 😊

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

awsm, wud u b writin more????

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@contingency

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Beautifully written. I love the imagery you have put through out the story =).

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Tia

@tes_v1

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Ash!

This was fabulously written! Beautifully described! Loved every bit of it. Written with a mesmering flow of words. Maaneet were adorable!

Hope you come up with something again, soon!

Tia

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vivacious_gurl

@vivacious_gurl

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Nicely written ash..... but somehow i tend to compare it with actual scene.... i found that more interesting.....

well ur dance sequence description is almost like the actual dance.....

sorry after being in den n cristicising episodes...i hv become a bit critical.....

but well written.....

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ash08

@ash08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: deniac
Nicely written ash..... but somehow i tend to compare it with actual scene.... i found that more interesting.....
well ur dance sequence description is almost like the actual dance.....

sorry after being in den n cristicising episodes...i hv become a bit critical.....

but well written.....

No problem darling. BTW wrote this before the actual scene aired.... 😆😆😆
Thank you.

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Neha

@jamoshi2507

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

hey Ash .... I never read this OS earlier I just got the link from some other FF .... wow it was fantastic 👏..... the description was apt and sensuous at the same time .... I really loved it .🤗... please PM me whenever u write such scenes

thanks in advance
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