Maaneet Scenes M&B style! Others added 8/11 - Page 24

going by ur, amazing stuff, whtevr u write is gonna b awsm, 4 sure.😊

Yaar kya likhthi hain tu...simply superb

Originally posted by: bridgette

Yaar kya likhthi hain tu...simply superb

thank you but philhaal..maneet mujhe jyaada inspire nahi kar rahe..hain...
i am trying to write a scene on maaneet..but..i feed on the serial..and nothing comes up that fires my imagination....
waiting for something to happen...

The accidental truth...

Geet, ran onto the street without looking and almost got struck by a car, She was pulled back by maan and saved.

He roared, Pagal larki! Kya kar rahi thi! And shakes her. Geet in a state of shock, just collapses against him.

He picks her up puts her in the back seat and drives straight to the hospital. There he was relieved to hear from the doctor that Geet and the baby were fine, but she should probably rest for a few days considering the shock she just go.

Geet comes to in a hospital room to find maan sitting staring at her. She whispers, my baby! Putting her hand on the stomach and maan immediately runs up to her, puts his hand on her forehead and says.

You are fine and baby is fine too! Now don't worry, you didn't get hurt, I was waiting for you to regain consciousness. Doctors have said everything is fine, but you need to rest. So I shall now go and finish all the formalities and then will take you home.

As he made to turn, Geet holds his wrist and says'Thank You! You saved my life!

Maan understanding how she feel says, leaning close to her, I am a selfish man Geet! Tum ho to mein hoon, trying to brush the shiver that went through him at the thought of her coming to any harm.

Phir kabhi aisa mat karna. You don't want to marry me! Fine. But take care of yourself. Take care of the baby. You should be more careful. Abhi kuch ho jaata to?

Geet gives a feeble smile and says. Mein aapka ye ahsaan kabhi nahi bhool sakti Maan! aap kyon shaadi karna chahte ho mujhse, ek aisi larki se jo aapko kuch nahi de sakti, Na pyar , na khushi!

Maan says Chup! Putting a finger on her lips. Not a word! You need to rest and we will talk about this later. I don't want you to take any stress..,

After completing the formalities, maan takes Geet home, settles her in her bed, orders Pinky to come home from office gives her some milks and waits for Pinky to turn up before he leaves.

Geet, now feeling whole lot better and thinking about the proposal that Maan had made, still shook her insides. She now thought, she should tell him everything. I will tell him everything. After he hears the whole story she was sure he was not going to want to marry her anyway. She cried again. Pinky came in then says, arre tum ro rahi ho? Comes to her hugs her and says, sab theek ho jaayega'tum theek ho..DD keh rahe the'sab theek hai Geet. Kya hua?

Geet just choked out he asked me to marry him! Pinky gasped what? Wow? You are so lucky. Saari larkiyan office mein'yehi sochti hain ki kabhi maan unki taraf dekh lei you know! Anyway. When is the wedding then.

Geet says wedding? Meine mana kar diya and Pinky screams even louder What? Tu pagal ho gayee hai? Kyon? Kyon?

Geet says mein unse shaadi nahi kar sakti. Ye theek nahi hoga. Unke saath mein aisa nahi kar sakti mein dhoka nahi de sakti.

Just then phone rings and Pinky goes to pick up the phone. Hearing DD on the other end she gasps.

i had written this a few days back but in my usual absent minded ness had forgotten to post..

here you go...
will try and update soon..

nice to read a Maaneet scene from u Vru....don't forget....likhti raho!!

coming back to the scene...loved it.....she didn't catch his "tum ho toh main hoon" but that was a very sweet of him and so true!!

Originally posted by: hapinezz13

nice to read a Maaneet scene from u Vru....don't forget....likhti raho!!

coming back to the scene...loved it.....she didn't catch his "tum ho toh main hoon" but that was a very sweet of him and so true!!

it basically meant that he would not want to live without her...if she had died..life as he knows it would change..but yeah a bit cheesy hindi dialogue may be i should stick to english..as i express best in this language..

Originally posted by: rushtrip

it basically meant that he would not want to live without her...if she had died..life as he knows it would change..but yeah a bit cheesy hindi dialogue may be i should stick to english..as i express best in this language..

arre I meant She as in Geet didn't catch it....it was a sweet dialouge coming from Maan....he rarely says anything half as sweet but if u read his eyes, they say something else altogether!!!

thank god, u wrote something😊,it was vry good, do add me in ur pm list...

Originally posted by: sarita21992

thank god, u wrote something😊,it was vry good, do add me in ur pm list...

thank you i have added you...

ab it seems ye rain sequence inspire karne wala hai..