Maaneet Scenes M&B style! Others added 8/11 - Page 17

Originally posted by: Sigma

well i'm loving ur work rite now, i'm gonna tell one of my mates to check our stories cause i know she will love them too

I know u can write amazing stories without the precaps as u are soo talented and creative so don't doubt urself, your one of best writers i've read on IF 👏

that is heart warming...truly..and yes i was told by some friends..i could be good but never did give a shot.. now that i have..for past two days..i do household chores...my work..in between..the writing i do here..rather than the other way around...
i am hooked... appreciate you vote of confidence..

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Jaldi karo...post karo.....!!!

you know..this date is longest ever.i have never seen, been, heard of date this long..where were guys...in my time...not even..in my dreams..i guess its all mann..now that he has found out he is a romantic...woh..GEet ko chorrna hi nahi..chahta...
hmmmm am stilling contuing....

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Uff....Ufff..Uff...tum bhi CVs ki tarah...jamari jaan lene pe tuli ho!!!! Eaise kaisy bur likh no chor diya......????😡😡😡

frankly speaking..i was lost in the moment..was relishing it and then..my hands...just..stayed..re reading..and i didnt want you to wait too long..so i decided to continue..after i got my senses in place..
oh my god... i am becoming a nut case....here...

pls..save me..from myself...
i am not kidding...

Originally posted by: rushtrip

you know..this date is longest ever.i have never seen, been, heard of date this long..where were guys...in my time...not even..in my dreams..i guess its all mann..now that he has found out he is a romantic...woh..GEet ko chorrna hi nahi..chahta...
hmmmm am stilling contuing....

Vrushali...so I can take it that your Hubby has not taken you on such a long date.....huh.....maybe long drives though??...hmmm say to other states.....romantic no?😆

Originally posted by: rushtrip

frankly speaking..i was lost in the moment..was relishing it and then..my hands...just..stayed..re reading..and i didnt want you to wait too long..so i decided to continue..after i got my senses in place..
oh my god... i am becoming a nut case....here...

pls..save me..from myself...
i am not kidding...

Lol....we are not going to save you....tumhari issi haalt mein humara faayida hain....kum es kum updates to milti rahegi....!!!!😉

Mann just stayed..like that touching her lips... soft supple oh so sweet...
lost in her...eyes..which were closed..now how can someone be lost in closed eyes..but.....
there..he was intoxicated with her...he could not get enough of her...
and it was not as if he wanted to crush her to him, it was a warmth spreading inside him enveloping him... making him want to protect her from everyone...shudders to think..what had happened in hoshiapur..and promises to himself..i will never ever any harm come to her...

God..give me strength...Geet was the only one..who could make him feel this way...weak with strength...this lung filling breath that caught in his throat.... his guts...wrenched..at any thought of her troubles..her tears..even they seem to make a mush of him...

he breathes..Geet....I love you...
dont ever ever leave me ......promise..hamare beech kuch nahi aayege...

But of course....kuch to hona..hai...kuch to aana..hai...kuch already tha...

Geet hugs him back... and they decide to go back home...
Mann drops her to her place and says...
Sleep well my love..i will pick you up to go to office tomorrow....
Geet just smiles raises her hand..at the door...but has a sad look in her eyes..
Oh how am i going to tell mann everything..she wonders as she get ready to go to bed...
as she lies in her bed...wonders..how her life has taken a 180 degree turn.. how..and when did Mann her saviour become her boss and now her...what...? Kaun ho..Mann..aap mere kaun ho?
and falls asleep with this thought....

phew...
that was one tough scene...
i am all mushy inside and i wrote it...

now..i have tougher mountains to climb..how is Geet going to tell Mann?

what should i do guys..pls help...any ideas..
iknow i am way ahead of myself and the serial..but...i donno..something has taken over...i am not me..anymore...sounds corny...
but so true....
i love...this serial...

Mann on the way..home wonders...
did i see a sad look in her eyes...? was there something..that i missed...

she did not say if she felt the same as i do?

OH God! ye larki..to mujhe pagal kar degi...

reaches home...bangs the door shut...enters house
and finds..daadi waiting for him....

Oh no...! what is she doing up so late...

Mann! kahan se aa rahe..ho..mein office phone kiya to security ne kahan tum wahan nahi ho...
called you cell to out of reach tha..
Is everything okay beta?
Haan daadi aap so jao..everything is fine...
mujhe..sona..hai...
goodnight daadi...

Haan Mann ek aur baat...mujhe..Geet pasand...
says that smiles at Mann runs her hand over his head lovingly and says good night beta...
so jaao...

Mann says..Daadi..and she shakes her head and goes towards..her room!

mann now has another mountain to climb tomorrow...
how did daadi know? what?
oh god my head is spinning..he says to himself..goes into his room...and just..falls on the bed....
turns over...with hands behind his head..and starts thinking of the evening that just was...

and falls asleep still clothed with a smile on his face dreaming about Geet....

Originally posted by: rushtrip

phew...
that was one tough scene...
i am all mushy inside and i wrote it...

now..i have tougher mountains to climb..how is Geet going to tell Mann?

what should i do guys..pls help...any ideas..
iknow i am way ahead of myself and the serial..but...i donno..something has taken over...i am not me..anymore...sounds corny...
but so true....
i love...this serial...

That was a very sweet scene...you did great...but i agree....hard times ahead....****Nargis's untalented brain is being taxed to help come up with ideas....give me some time****😕

Originally posted by: rushtrip

Mann on the way..home wonders...
did i see a sad look in her eyes...? was there something..that i missed...

she did not say if she felt the same as i do?

OH God! ye larki..to mujhe pagal kar degi...

reaches home...bangs the door shut...enters house
and finds..daadi waiting for him....

Oh no...! what is she doing up so late...

Mann! kahan se aa rahe..ho..mein office phone kiya to security ne kahan tum wahan nahi ho...
called you cell to out of reach tha..
Is everything okay beta?
Haan daadi aap so jao..everything is fine...
mujhe..sona..hai...
goodnight daadi...

Haan Mann ek aur baat...mujhe..Geet pasand...
says that smiles at Mann runs her hand over his head lovingly and says good night beta...
so jaao...

Mann says..Daadi..and she shakes her head and goes towards..her room!

mann now has another mountain to climb tomorrow...
how did daadi know? what?
oh god my head is spinning..he says to himself..goes into his room...and just..falls on the bed....
turns over...with hands behind his head..and starts thinking of the evening that just was...

and falls asleep still clothed with a smile on his face dreaming about Geet....

i think this is the first anyone will ever call Maan Sing Khurana a BECHARA.....but that is how i feel for him right now....he has no idea the storm that is about to blowinto his life and reek utter havoc!!!!