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Posted: 15 years ago
Pinky for once forgets to eat the fruit she had in her hand...a banana!

Geet walking towards them is blushing at the scene Mann and Pinky make with Mann holding flowers and PInky banana...

well
Mann holds out his arm to Geet after saying good byes to PInky and the flowers finding home in a vase, outside Geet's door...
Geet looks at it and say..ye kya kar rahe hain?

Jab date pe jaate hein to aisa karte hain...
Geet goes achcha and also makes her elbow stick out the way Mann did..Mann shaking his head and smiling..tumhein bahut kuch sikhana hai..
takes her hand and wraps it in the crook of his arm and then starts going towards his car...
He opens the door for her, sits her in helps with the duppatta that was hanging out...an eyelock moment there...before he goes to his side of the car... feeling Geets eyes following him all the time..
he enters buckles his belt and says...apni seat belt bandh lo...
Geet fumbles with it and Mann leans over to help her...hand brushes and touches her as he draws the belt across her torso....snaps the buckle in and snaps out of his trance. starts the car and moves out of the curb.
Geet asks where are we going?
Mann...you relax sit back and enjoy the ride...
Geet says par aap ko kuch baat karni thi...
Mann looks at her for a sec..and says..not now...let me drive...now..
once we reach...there..we shall talk...

Mann has organised a tete a tete for them at a romantic resort which has man made lake and boating facility..
a table has been set for them on the promanade on the shore...
cool breeze floating in...and... teasing Geet's open hair..
Once seated...at a candle lit table with a single pink rose in a vase.. i think for some reason Geet is not into red roses....
that matches her outfit... and the candles bring out the sparkles in her borrowed diamond studs and pendant. Bless Pinky...

Mann knew Geet is seedhi saadhi kurri...so the fare is simple yet scrumptious meal...
Mann has already given orders for privacy...Geet is fascinated with the place and darting her eyes around the place and says..kitni sunder jagah hai..na...
mann is staring at her and say..yeah...lekin tumse nahin...and that gets him full attention from Geet.

Geet now starts what she had been wanting to say all day and Mann had not given her that opportunity..
Sir i mean Mann...kyon aap aisa kar rahe ho..ye theek nahi..hai...
mein subah se aapse baat karna chahti thi..after you know..the..you know...the ...file room. you..know...
Mann gives a small smile..and says putting his one hand on geet's fingers and absently playing with them tilts his head looks deeply into her eyes and say kya theek nahi hai...tum aur mein? kyon...mujhmein kuch kharabi and makes to look at his clothes and turn his face this and that for Geet to see..
Geet smiles and say..nahi aisa nahi..mein aap...ye theek nahi hai..
you dont know anything about me...
mein...
Mann..mein tumhein jaanta hoon... tum kaun ho kahan se ho...kaisi ho..sab jaanta hoon....dont forget i was the one who helped you with your family....tumhein mein bachchya hai..tumhare bhai se...so i cant be that bad...
Geet is shaking her head..nahin nahin...aap nahin samajh..rahe..
Mann now..having enough...gets up and pulls her out of her chair... with the hand he was holding and say...
chup no arguing..not tonight.tonight..is for..us....just..feel..the air...the music...
she says..music...?
Mann says...Geet...tumhein kuch bhi nahi aata...!
suno...he puts his hand near her ears and her hand on his heart..and says...dhak dhak..dhak dhak....do you hear that?...hear the rhythm, hear the music..suno..dil kya keh raha hai...
aaj sirf tum ho aur mein hoon..aur..yeh..fizaa... bas...no past no future just this moment..right now right here...
Feel the music in our hearts Geet...and feel..it beat for each other...
i have been wanting to not hear it..lekin..tumhari saadgi..tumhari...sundarta...tumhara bholapan..all have conspired to make me fall for you...and yes...i can say..this to you tonight...
tum mujhe..bahut pasand..ho...
Geet is dumbstruck.... and gaping.. Mann says Mooh band karo..and come close i want to dance with you..and does an impromptu slow dance with Geet cheek to cheek with his arms around her waist and her arms he drapes around his neck...
Just be in this moment Geet...
Geet wanting to say something looks at him and gets lost in his eyes..and feel of him... all forgotten...everything but here and now...


to be continued...

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Posted: 15 years ago
omg rushtrip, ur spoiling us with all these amazing scenes, love ur style of writing
looking forward to 2m's episode and more scenes from u hopefully
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sigma

omg rushtrip, ur spoiling us with all these amazing scenes, love ur style of writing

looking forward to 2m's episode and more scenes from u hopefully



i am an inspired soul these past two day due to the deadly precap..so..i hope...i can write the way i do...some more...

it has been a heady experience..to write and be appreciated by you folks...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -AsMa04

OMGOMGOMG!
LOL this is worst than the precap .. that was amazing i hope something like that happens but its a chance he might ask for a dance seems like an impossible thing BUT she looks so darn beautiful he might be blinded by her beauty .. OMFG i cant wait for tomm episode.

hey love your siggy can i use it😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wha wha....such a sweet update.....aur yeh Munda Maan inta romantic kabse hogaya....???😆 Like Geet...I am lost in the moment right now...Maan has talked me into getting lost in him too.....bye...me going back to being lost ****sigh**** Nargis is now out of commission!!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Edited by AKANargis - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rushtrip



i am an inspired soul these past two day due to the deadly precap..so..i hope...i can write the way i do...some more...

it has been a heady experience..to write and be appreciated by you folks...

well i'm loving ur work rite now, i'm gonna tell one of my mates to check our stories cause i know she will love them too
I know u can write amazing stories without the precaps as u are soo talented and creative so don't doubt urself, your one of best writers i've read on IF 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
Geet wanting to say something about her past...pulls back a bit...from the embraces and starts to say something
when Mann says...shhh!...putting his finger on her lips... just...shhhhh!... hold me..Geet....let me have a fill of you ...tum hamesha...hi bolti for once...be quiet...

Geet..then starts to have tears streaming down her cheeks...
Mann...softly says..shhh...Geet ab kyon ro rahi ho....what happened....
Geet says...kisine mujhse aise baatein nahi ki hai....
aur ab tak aap bhi mujhe daante hi the....woh..isiliye...sobbing..woh...isiliye...
Oh...Geet...meri chooye mooye si...larki..what am i going to do with you?

Chalo..aansoon ponch lo..and wipes the tears from cheek with his thumbs and kuch kha lo...tumhein bhook lagi hogi...
Geet nods...pouting...and they both have their dinner... with smoldering yet concerned looks from mann and Geet with shy mushy feeling...
Mann and geet finish their dinner and Mann says...aur bethna hai ya ghar chalna hai..
Geet say..nahi bethna..hai...
i want to walk on the lake shore...
Mann takes her hand..and walks with her..to the sand..Geet after a while... takes off her sandals holds them in the other and in total peaceful silence they walk on the shore...with cool breeze filling their senses and blowing their hair...
after walking for sometime... Mann halts turns Geet towards him and says...
Can i kiss you?
Geet shyly looks down at the feet digging into sand...and nods..
Mann puts a finger under her chin and says...Geet i think i am falling in love with you..and kisses..her lightly at first..on her lips...

to be continued...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Uff....Ufff..Uff...tum bhi CVs ki tarah...jamari jaan lene pe tuli ho!!!! Eaise kaisy bur likh no chor diya......????😡😡😡
Edited by AKANargis - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
😲

i didn't know u still continued

omg now i will have to quickly read and catch up and then leave a nice comment....u have to tell me these things yaar 😆😆😆

good good ek acha distraction and acha writing read karnay ko to mile ga....at least my mind will stop wandering for a while



Edited by mysterygurl1427 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Jaldi karo...post karo.....!!!
Edited by AKANargis - 15 years ago

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