'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144

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sweet_charmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#741

aww i'm glad my super long comments make you smiley smiley 😊😊 haha thatz the least you deserve for writng such an awesome and lovable fanfic.. i mean i seriously love it ❤️.. haah its just too funny!!

hehehe.. soo the whole chapal shot in the facce thing.... jst amazing.. lolz im wondering if you got inspiration from the hilarious george bush chapal incident hahahaha🤣🤣... lmao im thinkin of practicing my own chapal shots... who knowz where it might come handy.. lolz... and maan on the top of bus..ahaha that is awsome.. lolz maan is even quicker than i had anticipated.. lmao i was thinking it'll take a few days or so for maan to realize how empty life is without geet... but here hez already right behind .. only after a few minutes... ohh he'll be such a good hubby!!! haha by the way i just loved this line by maan, "Geet, Main tumse pyaar nahi karta...toh yeh toh nahi hua ki I don't care for you." i love his honesty!! 😳😳😳

lmao u kow wat else i love maan reading twilight hahaha.. i can jst imagine maan getting angry at the book for being soo unrealistic... maan: "edwards glow in the sun.. oh god.. wat are these crazy girls thinking.. wats so good bout a glowin in the sun man" hahaha.. 🤣🤣

ohhh geet and maan sleepin next to each other and all tht blushing is jst awww!!! haha maan is totally enjoyin this blushin geet.. maybe a little bit too mch ehh 😉😉 .. got geet annoyed ... lolz loved their nokh jhoks.. hahaha and i love their come backs and nicknames for each other haha ...

and the kiss oh god.. maan is so adorable .. geet punches him and he like a big surprising flirt tells her "Agar Pyaar dikhana tha toh aise dikhaati..." Maan recovered from the punch and pulled her close sealing her cheek with a burning kiss. Geet stood there numbed to the toe-nail." --->oh my god that has to be my most favourite part of the update.. its soo unexpected comin from Maan.. i'm totally enjoyin readn this new more carefree maan... but second most favourite part would definitely be the a pair of kurta and pyjama...XL size, baby pink in colour with cartoon flowers!!!!! waiting for maan hahahaha.. lmao i wonder if he'll wear it or not.. ahah geet got such a good revenge.. girl power yay!!! muahaha lolz

Can't wait to read more!!! 😊😊😊😊😊

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BgblZoolander69

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Posted: 15 years ago

#742

wow really good FF. Can you add me to your PM list? Thank you. 👏

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#743

i love this maan and geet
you are awesome...

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morlen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#744

OMG pink colour on maan i cant wait for the next part

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Jhankaar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#745

Wow.....
Fantastic update...

Pyaar to kiya Geet ne aur Side-Effects jhelne pad rahe hai Maan ko.... As always, it's too funny.

And for Geet, hats off to you lady..you are tooooooooo good

And Thanx Pallo, for your description about Maan & Geet.

BTW, I wanted to tell you, that while writing my FF other day, I just burst out laughing when I wrote Superman, coz I was instantly reminded of your Chaddhi In and Chaddhi Out reference.

Seriously I will Say:👏👍🏼👏

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Downhill

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Posted: 15 years ago

#746

wonderful chemistry, sharp dialogues, out of the world humour.............superb..................pallo u r just toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good in writing to be true.......................👏👏👏👏👏

bootilicious update.............hehehe😃😃😃

reva😳

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TheLastCarnival

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Posted: 15 years ago

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TheLastCarnival

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Posted: 15 years ago

#748

I'll be back with individual replies to your lovely comments....LAST time I tried replying back by commenting one all in one single post and I had to keep on breaking my head...So ONE at a time I guess...Can't handle too many🤣

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TheLastCarnival

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Posted: 15 years ago

#749

Originally posted by: Armu4eva
Great upate pallo...the bit wit maan..sitting pretty atop a bus is just..super truper....😛 Luvd how Geet too decided to accompany him...

n OMG..........that proximity bit.. loz poor Geet....turning into a blushing tomatoe....thanks to Maans.touch..n i luvd how Maan burst her bubble by saying..that it was my KEY n not.... ahem ahem...🤣

Lolz... luv it when Maneet........r fighting it out....rocking ending..👏👏👏

His face lost its colour and his eyes were on the verge of going blind with shock.

On the hanger hook was a pair of kurta and pyjama...XL size, baby pink in colour with cartoon flowers!!!!!

Great update dear....waiting eagerly for the next...😍

Thanks yaar....I was wondering how you ppl wud react to see Maan sitting atop the bus🤣🤣

And that Key bit...hhhmmm....wrote it after seeing Maan in the shower episode on Utube!!!😉

Glad you enjoyed the update...
Love ya Tanu.....

And you are picking up geet's speed...that was like the fastest long comment I got😆

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TheLastCarnival

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Posted: 15 years ago

#750

Originally posted by: AKANargis
Great update...very funny!!!😆

Glad it made you laugh!!!
I was thinking maybe it may seem senseless....😆😆😆
But you ppl rock...you can dig out sense even in my nonsense🤣
Luv ya loads

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