'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144 - Page 68

awwww that was reli good plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon

hey great part

aww, brij is sooo nice compared to the brij in the show 😃 lol
but omg geet running away to an unknown destination...and maan confused if it was his dream or was it real that geet is gone...
well just hope maan finds her again 😆
do continue soon


Maheen xx

palloji...........at first a big THANK YOU buddy for updating it on my birthday..........though i have read it today morning but i am soooooooooooooo happy dat u have given it a try and finally updated it......

Originally posted by: tes_v1

Oh man!

Pallo, I wish Maan would've stayed and heard their convo. Ah, but then where wud the excitement be that's gonna follow? 😉

Simply awsome, as always! And I can't believe I'm saying this, but I LOVE BRIJ!

That poem was too cute and apt!

Well I am on a campaign to get everyone to love Brij....join us BHOOTNIS!!!!🤣
Neways tia really glad you enjoyed the part....
Love ya
and yah thanks for liking the poem😉
Love ya loads!!!

Originally posted by: pickachu

Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update dear.Plzzz continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.




fatima

Thanks a lot Fatima for commenting and liking my work.
Will update as soon as possible
stay tuned
luv ya

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

amazing update.loved it.
geet bhag gayi,
continue soon.

Bhag gayi....yep...Thanks a lot for liking the part
and thanks for commenting
Love ya

Originally posted by: rusha4003

Good Heavens !!

Awesome part Pallo .....Geet runs away from home ....

Brij is soooooo sweeet ........

And you poem is ... 👍🏼

Awww thanks usha for liking the poem😆
Brij is like jaggery😆
and thanks for commenting
will continue soon
luv ya

Originally posted by: ffkhan

OMG ran away.🤪

yep ran away...🤣
stay tuned Farzu
luv ya

heya it's nice....and the poem was evn nicer !!
😊

Originally posted by: phoenixgirl

woah!!this is what u call unexpected....i mean geet running away???am in shock!!! but loved it neverthless...superb!!
ps:- i hv taken a gprs offer on my mobile to sustain myself...atleast nw i can read the ffs and written updates on the forum...varna mein paagal ho jaaungi...

Shock laga??? mujhe accha laga🤣
Glad that u can catch our FFs now....really sweet f u!
Love ya

Originally posted by: NIDIZ

Pallo awesome part yaar..!!
Ran away..never thought about tat..
Jaldi se post karo next part..n Thnx for the p.m..

Awww..thanks for loving the part
Will update fast dun worry
Love ya

Originally posted by: paaal

OMGGG.. its such an unexpected eppy... Loved the way Geet was hanging out of his window and the peck onn his cheeks 😳 Brij in ur story is soooo sweet. Continue soon dear..

N yeah wonderful poem 👍🏼

Yep the window scene is my fav too...
Thanks for liking it...Love ya payal

Originally posted by: -afsha-

No ways this cant happen

Geet left Delhi delhi chado yaar Geet left Maan n went its impossiple yaar

Plz dnt do this Pallo

Brij was more sweet than Sugar here ill say

Love his concern for Geet

Loved Geet's herogiri of climbing pipe n saying Maan Bye

The peck was jus sweet

Maan is yet to belive whether it was dream or reality😆😆😆

Update soon n longer part plzzzzzzzz

Karna toh padega...
Yep Geet's herogiri rocks big tym!!!
Thanks a lot for loving this part...more shocks cuming downt he pipeline...stay ready!!!😉
Love ya

Originally posted by: kash4ARrocks

absolutely desperate for the next the part😍
it was awesome👍🏼
you write extremely well, good job👏

Thanks yaar for commenting and loving it
I am really glad
luv ya
stay tuned😃

Originally posted by: gauri92

oh...i wonder when geet and maan will meet again...!!! update soon!!!

Oyyeee dono mar nahi gaye hain yaar...they will meet...but not soon enuff😉
Even then I request you to check the other parts and comment😆😆😆
thanks for commenting
love ya

Originally posted by: taskutbimuff

wow .....what a twist...geet ran away??? but y din mann stop her?? n y din she xplain 2 him?? how cud he let her go all alone??? anyways guess i hav 2 wait 4 the next part im way 2 curious...loved brij's soft side 4 geet....thanks 4 the gr8 part...

He just got up...his head was wholly muddled. And she was running late so she never told him the whole bit...neways....he let her go alone kyunki she is the HERO here...sab kuch toh woh karti hain😆😆😆😆
Glad that you liked the part and commented😳
luv ya

Originally posted by: desigurl953

cool di
love it
the purple portion especially
i was really scared that brij will turn and hit her or something although i knew that in ur version he is nice to her
thanks for ur update
can't wait for the next update
how i wish he goes after her and maybe on the way realizes his love for her and then they can marry and u continue the story from there......just my imagination
whatever you do always pleases us fans
ur great and so is ur story
anticipating for the next part ❤️

Baap re baap..mera Brij aise kabhi nahi karega...uski izzat ka sawaal hain...waise woh haath kam aur talwaar zayaada use karta hain🤣
Glad that u enjoyed the update...stay tuned
Luv ya
and thanks for commenting😃

Originally posted by: cute-aly

hey pallo

kya character diya he brij ko

great update yaar
but plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz maneet me judaiiiiiiiiiiii na dalna

Judaai...arre dun worry..ABSENCE MAKES THE HEART GROW FONDER!!!
Thanks a lot for commenting
I love these smileys...make me feel all choochie koo and young🤣
Chalo I am speaking as if I am 70 yrs old...I am 17 still😆
Thanks for commenting
love ya

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

awwww that was reli good plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon

thanks for da pm 😊

Thanks a lot...Will update soon enuff
Glad you liked the part
luv ya