'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144

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Radhika Shah

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

Great part!!
But you didn't send me a PM...

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#102

just loved it yaar
maan that was horrible to wake someone
poor geet she fall down
wow maan was really apologetic
serve him geet salute kiyta aur sorry bhi bola upeer se the best part wow
manthan was great
good to see these both working together
do continue
dear
bye sumi

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ffkhan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: livelygal

U read all the parts??? yah only the last one??? If all then I amazed at ur speed...and if one the last one...bacchu jaa ke saare padh le...

At first I just read the last Part. Then read all the part.😆😆😉 I also edited my comment.😃

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ffkhan

@ffkhan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

Wow! I read the full part. The part was so long and I read it with so deep concentration. Very nice update!👏👍🏼 Loved Mannet.🤗 Also loved edward-bella & IHLS.

Waiting 4 the next chap.

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billih

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Posted: 15 years ago

#105

its really superb but plase update as soon as possible.

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TheLastCarnival

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Posted: 15 years ago

#106

Hi gals thanks for ur lamba chauda comments....🤣 I am elated!!!!
Hmmm...the next update may take a little time cause I am off to goa...once I reach there I will try to update...till then keep reading and re-reading the parts...🤣🤣🤣

love you all
pallo

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 15 years ago

#107

Amazing.... Really grt going...can't wait....

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Sofna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#108

Pallo. i'm absoloutely lovin yr FF.....thnx 4 pm Plz updte Soon!!!

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Gauri Sharma

@gauri92

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Posted: 15 years ago

#109

eeeeh!!! im so glad that maan felt sorry for what he did....and his efforts to apologize...
i think manthan has spiced up the entire thing now...maan will be so irked with him 'cuz he's attracted to geet....lol....i can't wait for more....

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#110

Pallo, i just read all the parts at one go! I gotta say i'm LOVING this FF SO MUCH!! I'm really hooked onto it!

You write really well..and i love the way Geet is in this FF..I LOVE the relationship between Maan and Geet..Their non-stop bickering and glaring at each other..What a profession for Maan..!! An Air Force pilot..that's hot girl..!! 😉..Geet is so fiesty and full of life! I love her equaton with Dadi Maa...Maneet's encounters are wonderful!

That Gabbar act that Geet did.....🤣...and also her one liners she shots back at Maan! Too good..!! Love it love it love it! Now i see a certain someone coming in between them huh..😉...Liking that idea..!!

Plz do add me to your PM list would love to read this FF of yours! 😃

Amazing stuff girl, you've got a fan here!! 😊

Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago