'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144

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Sonali92

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

wow... i just love geets character.. she's soooo sweet and funny.. pls write more i amwaiting for the next part... and maan is going to be jealous...i read it so many times... thx a looooot

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sourmisery

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

OMG! This is so good! Amazingly written. Such new and fresh character of Geet. She really is a "ladhakoo". Loved each chapter of it yaar! Hey, do PM me when the next chapter is uploaded. will eagerly wait for it.

Once again, Amazing writing dear!

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TrueMuskaan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Geet is hilarious!!! i think the best best part was when Maan said sorry and geet replied saying

'"Tum behre ho kya??? Suna nahi? I said it's okay. Ab baar baar sorry bolkar mere kaano ko punishment mat do. Waise bhi tum koi Enrique nahi ho jo main tumhari awaaz sun ne ke liye tadapoo....."

I loved that part!!

hope you update soon!!

love,

kally

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Antares

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

I am in love with your FF! Geet is so lively and chirpy here......love her like this.....and even Maan is a bit different....as in he plays pranks and all.....oh, and Iove the way they talk to each other.....their words dipped in sarcasm.....lolz.....it's so much fun reading your FF! She made him salute her.....lolz.....serves him right! A new entry.....Manthan....hmm.....seems we are gonna get to see a jealous Maan in the future.......it's gonna be interesting if I have got it right.....lolz......it was a wonderful part.....do continue soon!

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Safina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

wow what an update!!!

cheers for the pm!!

do continue soon

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raziya56

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

loved it...geet is so cute and maan haye he is so mischeivous!

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Harpreet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#97

i LOVED LOVED LOVED it!!! the duo are greattt! i loved the writing and geet's outburst during the meeting to her friend (hopefully nothing more😉) was hilarous!! thanks for the pm!

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kuntal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#98

Your FF is too good yaar. there is a flow in it which i love i so want to see

Geet and Maan like handling things very well and showing their worth to the stiff neck board of directors and ya I just hope this guy is some cousin of Geet.....😕 lekin dont hesitate to grill Maan.... hamare geet ke dewano ki kami nahin😆

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iceprincess101

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Posted: 15 years ago

#99

This is awesome part....I love the way u added I hate love stories and twilight......hope manthan plays cuipid....anyways thnx for pm and update soon....