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Posted: 15 years ago
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scene starts from where maan and geet fall down from the table and while saving geet, maan fractures his elbow..
dadi -- geet it is all bcos of u, so u have to take care of maan now
maan stares --daadi leaves..
later
maan having lunch at office.refusing any help from geet.😡
geet- -aapki shirt ko bhi bhook lagi hai kya ?? 😆giggles
maan--kya meri shirt?? oh !...*food all over*..
takes off his shirt with difficulty and orders geet to fetch another shirt frm the cupboard.tells someone on phone that he will be there for the meeting in 5 minutes.
tries to put on the shirt but can't button it upđŸ˜Č😆
geet-- starts buttoning up
maan--main kar raha hiin na!!
geet meeting 5 min mein hai 5 dino mein nahin.
maan -- đŸ€Șstare..again
geet's fingers brushes his skin while buttoning up ..and MAAN shifts restlessly...
geet--*still at the shirt*--sir papers ready hai, aap bhi ready ho gaye hai.... chale kya.?
maan*feels the need to distance himself from geet or...or..u know* u don't need to come for the meeting tell sasha she will join me.
geet-- feels bit let down
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munshiji -- yeh tender immediately sign karke bhejna hai..singapore ka project hai
geet-- main abhi le jaati hoon sign karwaane ke liye
munshiji-- nahin nai tum bhi kar sakti hon sign to , sir ko kya disturb karna..
geet-- koi problem to nahin hogi na.
munshiji-- are na..na..kar do sign
munshiji later meets dadi and tells her kaam ho gaya😉dono ki mili bhagat hai maneet ko paas laane ki😆
next day
maan--punching the chair with one hand *still thinking of the button thingi blushin and cursing at the same time😆*..the other one is still broken😆(registry wala scene)
munshiji--gets a call from singapore that he has got the tender now they have to come for the formalities
munshiji-- sir badhai ho singapore ka project hume mil gaya hai ab bus aap dono ko jana hai.
maan-- *lost in buttons * suddenly thinks..aap dono.. aur kaun jaaa raha hai mere saath.
munshiji-- woh geet hai na usne sign kiye they papers par to uske bina to kaam ho hi nahin sakta..
maan-- to usse sign karwaye hi kyon aap mere paas papers laa sakte they na.
munshiji--agar mere bus mein hota to main aapko kabhi bhi geet ke saath jane ko nahi kahta par aap meeting mein busy they aur dadi bhi nahin mili nahin to unke sign hi karwa lets..
maan--still punching the chair ...hits the chair very hard
munshiji --aap kya kar rahe hai mujhe dar lag raha hai.. vishwaas kijiye agar koi aur rasta hota to main geet ko sign karne ko bilku nahin kahta...
maan-- kab jana hai??
munshiji-- kal subah 5 baje ki flight hai.
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picture abhi baaki hai ..😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i cudn't write well this time..not very happy but i promise tomorrow will be better

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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely work. i loved it :) waitin eagerly for more:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMGG all of these are awesome! Mindblowing! Specially the previously used dialogues one...Superb! 👏

Loved this one also. The Shrt Button Scene...Uff 😳 If this actually happened! 😳 *Sighs* 😍

Alysha 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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chullbulli yaar this is awesome luv it, bichare munnshiji lol, lol will be waiting for the next one 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I am so loving this! Ek haath to toot hi gaya hai.....dusra bhi todne ki firaq mein hai.....so that Geet uska aur bhi khayal rakhe and aise moments aate rahe......lolz.....Maan is very chaloo......apni feelings ka gussa Munshiji aur Geet pe nikalta rehta hai.....nikhatoo kahin ka! Can't wait to read the next part......continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: chullbulli

i cudn't write well this time..not very happy but i promise tomorrow will be better



All of your posts are hilarious! Even at work, I end up cracking up! 😊

Splendid work, eagerly looking forward to the continuation!
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