Agantuk: The Idol of GKD (EDITED updt pg5) may 15 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rehana86

awww Hema and Reva Di....that's really very sweet of you.....will do so, lemme get over with my exams ....my last exam is on 29th april ....

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Definately Rehana dear. All d best in yr exams gal.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh!!!!!awesome yaar.....just loved it..!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thats so nice of you rehana&best of luck for your exams yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
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The Magical Moment
Those weird chattering of people clicked his mind when he decided to check on the scenario himself... looking down at the crowd, his eyes scanned through the space until it caught the sight of her... Oh Damn! She was in trouble... definitely not acceptable when she looked up at him all confused with a very little unknown ray of hope...and he decided to make his presence with the interruption...
Coming down the slanted hill, he was stopped by Mahamayi, who shared her disappointment to his presence...whereas, he kept his gaze at the woman without any expression, like hell he gives a damn to wut she thinks about his interference, 'gimme a break, woman'... the moment Mahamayi announced about Pakhi failing in her purity test, his intense gaze gradually moved away to catch the sight of her and remained still until he was instructed to leave the place ...and there comes his famous smirk, this time dedicated to MahaMayi, 'keep dreaming woman! as if I care... just get outta my way'...passing across her way, he walked towards the bride, who was in the custody of two followers of MahaMayi...he yanked off their holds from her and grabbed her wrist yet again without her consent, 'Buzz off people, SHE belongs to ME only'...
She watched him as he escorted her to his direction when MahaMayi interrupted & started her argument saying the girl was proved to be 'indecent'... "who proved it?" Damn it! He demanded to know who got the guts to prove that She was NOT Pure...he was NOT convinced with the nonsense explanation and he walked towards one of the followers to make him go through the purity test...ALL done!!... Feel it dude!!...
when the follower being a man could not tolerate the pain then how cud they bloody expect the girl to go through all this? Point to be noted! And his mom finally decided to interfere but in vain as he refused to let this bullsh*t take place in the name of religion. But Alas! now it was the turn of the villagers to disapporve his interference. He was surprised to realize how these people can be so cruel to their own daughters?
Consequence! Yes! He did not prefer the consequence of this whole fake purity test. It was supposed to be a special day for the girl when she should be happily sent to her in-laws BUT no! they were talking about sending her to the path of death for something she was NOT worth of...at least to him, she was NOT worth of death but l-o-v-e...
This is exactly when he felt as if someone has just squished his heart as soon as MahaMayi announced that the girl's supposed-to-be groom was responsible for her state...he was Shocked! Hurt! ...and helplessly watched them taking her away from him... it pained him to see her in that state when he made up his mind to screw the damn world & follow his heart...
Turning her around, he applied the symbol of his desire or was it love? ...whatever it was, He was in heaven with true satisfaction...'All you Losers, Go to HELL...now, SHE is Traditionally, Religiously & Officially MINE...Dare to touch her, you're dead!'...
He felt lucky as those innocent eyes were directed towards him... I promise to love you till eternity ... There! Done with the first out of seven wedding promises... his eyes spoke up for himself as he watched her observing the red symbol scattered in her fingers...she was puzzled! ...
Finally, it was time to fight for his wife.... the moment MahaMayi informed DD-Bhai about the "anarth" taking place, he retorted back, "why? you decided that no one will marry this girl. But, Guess what, darling? I just proudly DID because I do carry a brain UNLIKE you guys. I do NOT give a damn about whether she is pure or not" ...She is Priceless for me!...
It was enough for DD-Bhai to tolerate watching his own son hell adament in destroying his creation of "religeous tradition"..."Tradition? My Bloody Foot! the word is HYPOCRISY! Damnit! Because NO tradition allows to play with someone's life, but these brainless creatures send the innocent girls to the path of death in the name of bloody 'religeous tradition' ... and trust me! I will NOT let this happen to her...because now she is MY wife...& I will NOT let my wife follow such baseless crap, which I don't believe in, period!"...
There she goes again with her 'inauspicious crap'!...sing a new song, would ya!...People!! just shut her up!!... your MahaMayi is getting on my nerves now...& tell you, do not make me volunteer or else I swear, you all will regret for the rest of your lives...
"I disapprove his decision" announced MahaMayi...She WHAT?!?!?...Oye! Hello! Look here!! Excuse Me?!?! Who the HECK are you to butt in??...It's my life for heaven's sake...argh! one more word! you are officially dead!... "... and this girl will go to Narak Ki Dwar..." she concluded... THAT'S IT!!..."...she is going NOWHERE...get that straight, woman!..." and he was shut by his mom, the first lady ruled his heart...
"Fine!...if it's all about culture, I'm in...your culture tells you to send an unchaste girl to Narak Ki Dwar and my culture allows a wife to spend the rest of her life with her husband...for your kind information, I'm her husband now...our marriage allows us to stay together for eternity...How can my wife go to Narak Ki Dwar without her husband?? ... RIGHT MahaMayi?!?!" he reasoned his points... NO way I'm losing her again...
Finally, the order was passed! "...send them BOTH to Narak Ki Dwar...period!.." commanded DD-Bhai... and he smirked!...BINGO! Guess what? I'm NOT surprised dad...once again you failed to be a 'father'...
Another outstanding piece of work done by the GKD team...thanks :)
Edited by Rehana86 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rehana...waiting for the to be continued part :)...don't need to say again that u r a gifted writer and the analysis was so perfect that it felt like u hv actually read all his(Agantuk's) mind...
My god, love this character!!! our 'THE AGANTUK'!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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The first part lacked the attitude from Agantuk was simply sweet but the second part gave the full dose of it... "The Agantuk" who is dashing, fearless, passionate, n the list simply goes on... 👏 I m practically drooling over...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks Reva & Melli di... well i did edit some portion from the earliar version ... n yes! we love our THE Agantuk...
man! I still can't get over the article of "lip-lock" 😍...i'm officially doomed! ☺️
Edited by Rehana86 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey rehana di here"BIG HUG" from a fan who is completely obsessed by heavenly pair(AganKhi) thank u for such a sweet analysis of our "the agantuk".
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rehana86

thanks Reva & Melli di... well i did edit some portion from the earliar version ... n yes! we love our THE Agantuk...

man! I still can't get over the article of "lip-lock" 😍...i'm officially doomed! ☺️

If ur officially doomed by just reading it, imagine urself if they actually screened it... Maybe the CV's chose not to show it for the betterment of all the crazy Agankhians like us... Halat karab hogeya...☺️
Then most of us will not be able to concentrate on anything else...☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: rev4eva

If ur officially doomed by just reading it, imagine urself if they actually screened it... Maybe the CV's chose not to show it for the betterment of all the crazy Agankhians like us... Halat karab hogeya...☺️
Then most of us will not be able to concentrate on anything else...☺️

DIII...it's NOT the CVs BUT the channel who did naa-insafi with us 😭...speaking of halat, it's going from burey se kharab, kharab se battar 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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