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Riyana

@riyana_05

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Posted: 17 years ago

#2351

Nallu-thats good imagination of Anjali becoming Anniyan...keep up the good work pa...hope to see more 👏

Jas-really enjoyed every bits of it... 😆 Thanks dear... Hehe...language is always problematic...and u made use of it rightly to entertain us..keep it up dear 👏

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sankadevi30

@sankadevi30

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#2352

super jas super.

very different.

i am reading it again & again.

so i am giving u the pattam

intellectual jas😉

waiting for more kalakkals from u.

see roja akka u made us all fall for ur mad gleam & i think it proved worthy.I am sure more friends will come up with more kalakkal soon. so i am giving u the special pattam

Comedy kalakkals maharani 😉

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jasunap

@jasunap

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#2353

thank you every body. i am glad you enjoyed it..

you are right ho...reading it aloud, brings out the puns to more effect!!

and nallu thanks for the new pattam!!!

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jasunap

@jasunap

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#2354

and roja...is a small dedication for you.... hope you like it.....written with apologies to lord tennyson!!!

The Charge of the kalakkal Brigade

FORUM COLLEAGUES, FORUM COLLEAGUES,
FORUM COLLEAGUES, ONWARD!
ALL IN THE VALLEY OF NET
LEAD OUR MAD ROJA GIRL.

"FORWARD, THE WRITE BRIGADE!
CHARGE FOR THE KEYS!" SHE SAID:
IN FRONT OF THE BIG COMPUTER
ORDERED OUR ROJA GIRL.

"FORWARD, THE WRITE BRIGADE!"
WAS SHE AT ALL DISMAYED?
NOT THOUGH THE WRITER KNEW
SOME ONE HAD BLUNDERED:

HERS'S NOT TO MAKE REPLY,
HERS'S NOT TO REASON WHY,
HERS'S BUT TO WRITE OR DIE:
INTO THE VALLEY OF TYPES
RODE OUR FAIR KALAKKAL GIRL .

MINI CK TO RIGHT OF HER,
MAJOR ONES TO LEFT OF HER,
PQS IN FRONT OF HER
VOLLEYED AND THUNDERED;

STORMED AT WITH WORD/ EXCEL,
BOLDLY SHE WROTE AND WELL,
PONDERING NOT HOW TO SPELL,
INTO THE MOUTH OF HELL
LED OUR CRAZY ROJA GIRL.

FLASHED ALL HER ADVICE BARE,
STRAIGHT FROM HER SWIVEL CHAIR,
CONVINCING MAKKAL EVERYWHERE,
CHARGING WITH E-MAIL WHILE
ALL THE FRIENDS WONDERED:

PLUNGED SHE WITH MASTERSTROKES
RIGHT THROUGH CONVENTIONS BROKE;
VIEWBIES AND MODERATORS
REELED FROM THE WILD KEYSTROKES
SHATTERED AND SUNDERED.
THEN SHE WROTE BACK, BUT NOT,
HER OWN NAME HEREUNDER.

MINIONS SHE TRAINED UNDER HER,
TRAINEES SHE KEPT BESIDE HER,
TALENTS BEHIND HER
VOLLEYED AND THUNDERED;
STORMED AT WITH WORD / EXCEL,
WHILE LESSER DIRECTORS FELL,
SHE WHO HAD LOBBIED WELL
CAME WITH SUCH TALES TO TELL
BACK FROM THE MOUTH OF HELL,
MAKKAL WHO LOOKED AT THEM,
GRINNED AS THEY IMAGINED 'EM.

WHEN CAN HER GLORY FADE?
O THOSE GREAT KALAKKALS SHE MADE!
THE ENTIRE WORLD WONDERED.
HONOUR THE CK SHE MADE!
HONOUR THE WRITE BRIGADE,
AND I SIGN OFF NOW HEREUNDER.

Edited by jasunap - 17 years ago

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rojapoooo

@rojapoooo

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#2355

WOOOWWWWW - am not sure if I deserve this but
thanks a lot!!!! Nallu kutty, CK maharani pattam vera ya???? So, oor le ellaraiyum paithiyam mathiri thanakku thane sirichindi alaiya vaicha ipdi oru accolade kidaikkuma????? hmmmmmmmmmm Roja takes position - faces the CK crowd - bows from the hip - thanks profusely.... when she straightens up, there is a small glint of a smile on the corner of her lips which goes unnoticed by the IF ians " wait till u all get to know what I have in mind for the next CK ........."

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Uma

@Fluidd

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#2356

Jas, very nice poet and congrats for the pattam given by Nallu.

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Uma

@Fluidd

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#2357

Roja akka, Nice poem has been dedictaed to you, and you surely deserve this and congrats for the same and puthu pattam given by our great "New kalakkal manni" Nallu.

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Uma

@Fluidd

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#2358

Thanks a lot to all my friends here for tolerating me and my story all these days.

Mikka Nandri.

Thanx Preeti for reading my story and Welcome to CK pages.

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suram

@suram

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#2359

Very nice imagination Fluidd!! 👏 👏 Good Job!!! 😊

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rojapoooo

@rojapoooo

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#2360

well done Fluidd 👏
Since u have dealt with the directors with
an iron hand, I will deal with some characters
in my CK - will post by tonight - Roja has a
mad gleam and her hands are red with......
maruthani ( yesterday, I applied to cool myself -
CR and Thols got on my nerves so much that the
residents of our condo had a free sauna!!!)

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