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Posted: 3 years ago
#31

Awesome n beautifully written

Sitaraa kya mast bajaoing agastya😆

Def good one n enjoyed reading

Loved it❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Rk26

This is so amazing Anita! Very intriguing story you wrote❤️


Tq for reading dear😍😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Nichuss

nice ending....


wish Agu baby get his sitara on Fana


Tq dear

Agu baby is bound to play hide and seek between ishu and paki baby😁😁

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Posted: 3 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: thunderbird

Omg 😆🤣

Sitaraaa 😩🤣


Sitara suits agasu baby types of gentleman 😁😁. By the way do u understood Punjabi??

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Posted: 3 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: -Ayushi-


Good to see the human side of Agastya ❤️

Pakhi bani stalker 😆


Tables should be turned. He should fall for another woman. Pakhi feels the pinch and stalks him. Trp will defo increase

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Posted: 3 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Sgayuiyer

Both chapters were amazing Ani short and sweet😳

Omg Sitara passport is rejected 🤣chodo London/England nahi toh celebrate Honey moon in swis 🤪

Nice chapters 👏


Tq dear 😍😍

Actually i forgot to write. It should be London, paris and Switzerland ka package. Usually these three venues comes together in Europe packages. I just mentioned London.


Sitara is shown as a kaand master. A reincarnation of imlie

The actress whom i feel can play Sitara's role is drashti dhammi. She's a typical indian beauty. The desi look like a village girl. She look nice with every actor whether young or old. She's got this baby face. A fine actress. She suits all types of roles. She will defo look good with zain. Despite her age, she looks young ( baby face).


Btw , i wanted to know if u guys understand Punjabi coz that part where she abused the gore , i didn't give the English translation. I wrote it in simple Punjabi. Now am thinking, shall i add a translation there. Perhaps other members might find it difficult to understand. 🤔🤔

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Posted: 3 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Sgayuiyer

Both chapters were amazing Ani short and sweet😳

Omg Sitara passport is rejected 🤣chodo London/England nahi toh celebrate Honey moon in swis 🤪

Nice chapters 👏


Tq dear 😍😍

Actually i forgot to write. It should be London, paris and Switzerland ka package. Usually these three venues comes together in Europe packages. I just mentioned London.


Sitara is shown as a kaand master. A reincarnation of imlie

The actress whom i feel can play Sitara's role is drashti dhammi. She's a typical indian beauty. The desi look like a village girl. She look nice with every actor whether young or old. She's got this baby face. A fine actress. She suits all types of roles. She will defo look good with zain. Despite her age, she looks young ( baby face).


Btw , i wanted to know if u guys understand Punjabi coz that part where she abused the gore , i didn't give the English translation. I wrote it in simple Punjabi. Now am thinking, shall i add a translation there. Perhaps other members might find it difficult to understand. 🤔🤔

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Posted: 3 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Aniash


Tq dear 😍😍

Actually i forgot to write. It should be London, paris and Switzerland ka package. Usually these three venues comes together in Europe packages. I just mentioned London.


Sitara is shown as a kaand master. A reincarnation of imlie

The actress whom i feel can play Sitara's role is drashti dhammi. She's a typical indian beauty. The desi look like a village girl. She look nice with every actor whether young or old. She's got this baby face. A fine actress. She suits all types of roles. She will defo look good with zain. Despite her age, she looks young ( baby face).


Btw , i wanted to know if u guys understand Punjabi coz that part where she abused the gore , i didn't give the English translation. I wrote it in simple Punjabi. Now am thinking, shall i add a translation there. Perhaps other members might find it difficult to understand. 🤔🤔

I understood what Sitara said. Still I think you should add translation there. Btw, how do you know the language? Is Punjabi your mother tongue?

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Posted: 3 years ago
#39

Minhasmansi

Oh kudiye,

Ki haal chaal tera.

I don't know if u are following this immj3 ka show but i tag u here

U might like this one. Dialogues in punjabi ( some)

Kudi ( heroin) is from Amritsar.

Isliye tenu tag kita

Earlier i mentioned to u i am from Malaysia.

Mother is from punjab.

Jagraon, Ludhiana

Taiyon Punjabi chengi terah aundi.

When u get time can read.

I give summary incase u not following the show, then u can understand the fiction.

Zain imam ( Agasthia) loves pakhi( reem sheikh) but she loves ishaan ( the other ML). Agasthia pakki are childhood friends. But she only treats him as a best friend.

He stalks her. Obsessed and then does kaand to keep pakhi away from ishaan.

Unki marriage break karne ki koshish karta hain

In the show, he manages to hurt ishaan and pakhi key uper leg geya ilzam .

Now not sure if he would marry her. Show toh bekar hain. I am only on updates now till marriage siyapa is over


I wrote a twist. something different

Ishaan suspects Agasthia likes pakhi. He knows he will do kaand on their marriage day so he plans another girl as the dulhan. He knew Agasthia would try to take his place as the groom .

Toh Agasthia ishaan ko kidnap karke khud mandap per beth jata hain thinking he is marrying pakhi but bride swap hota hain. Pakhi ki jegah koyi aur ledki beth jati hain jisko ishaan ney hire kiya hota hain pehle sey

Agasthia ki shadi paki ki jegah ho jati hain kisi aur ladki key sath. In my fiction she is named sitara.

If u have time can read and give ur reviews.


Ash, Eliza, and marathi aap teno ko bhi idhar tag kiya. When get time can read.

Deepika, are u following immj3, tenu vi idhar tag kita.


I squeeze some time here and there. There are three parts only. Part one pg one. Part two and three on pg four.

Pls enjoy and give ur reviews

Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Shirsha

I understood what Sitara said. Still I think you should add translation there. Btw, how do you know the language? Is Punjabi your mother tongue?


Tq for ur review. Later will add translation.

My dad is indian born in Malaysia mother from punjab, India

I am a punjabi brahmin. Hindu Punjabi from punjab. Ancestors from there

Based in Ludhiana.

Mother tongue is hindi and Punjabi

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