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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Omg Ani this is lit🤣🤣

I can't prevent myself from laughing on reading Sitara's antics 🤪Agastya's suffering from the endless sweet torture created by Sitara 😆

Indeed a great start 👏

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: monalidp

Wow, I wish this happened in the reality 😁 you’ve got imagination 👍🏼👏🏼👏🏼


Tq dear

It will happen if trp soars further. People can't connect reem with him. She's too young. They might bring another FL on board.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Ayushi-

This was awesome 👏


Sitara can only handle a guy like Agastya🤣


Gaun ki chori , beautiful and hot who couldn't speak English and a drama queen would be the best choice for him 😁😁

Aek dum seeda kar degi

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: thunderbird

Nice one 🤣😆

I'm not shipping anyone, who knows who will end up w whom.🤡😕

just watching for zain's acting.


Tq dear 😍😍

I am only on updates till this shadi ka siyappa is over

Hoping a new girl for him. He deserves happiness after going through bitterness in life.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rk26

Hey Anita.


Very nice story, i could imagine everything happening in real. Sitara's name and character seems awesome! 😎


Tq very much for the compliment and liking the character.

Hopefully they bring a new FL for him. A drama queen takkar wali who send him on a roller coaster ride. A mix of comic and suspense. A wonderful entertainment

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Nichuss

to b frank.... i wish some anthr girl come in Agu life


Hoping for the same. I can't connect reem with him. She looks like his younger sister 😁😁

A hot takkar wali required who could teach him a lesson. Turn that lion in him into a mouse

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Sgayuiyer

Omg Ani this is lit🤣🤣

I can't prevent myself from laughing on reading Sitara's antics 🤪Agastya's suffering from the endless sweet torture created by Sitara 😆

Indeed a great start 👏


Tq for enjoying 😍😍

I missed out one plot in the story. Was rushing for time. Am gonna write part two with that plot included.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash


Hoping for the same. I can't connect reem with him. She looks like his younger sister 😁😁

A hot takkar wali required who could teach him a lesson. Turn that lion in him into a mouse


very true


reem not a gud choice.... we need a takkarwali ladki

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part two - Her revelations


The next morning , at a village in the outskirts of Amritsar


He left the hotel early to pay a visit to sitara's residence to obtain details of her whereabouts. Deep inside he wished he would find her there. His pulses raised when his instinct turned out a fact.

She returned to her home after spending a few days in the city upon running away from his mansion. Her memory returned gradually but only partial. She couldn't recall the latest events. She was working in the crop fields when he visited her parents.


Agasthia was amazed when he found out from them about her background. She made sacrifices for the other two sisters. The older one was selfish and only thought of fulfilling her desires. She wanted to be educated and a model. They invested lots of money on her. They were farmers and could not afford to educate all three when the oldest one herself was demanding and too ambitious. Sitara was only nine years old when she gave up her education.so that her parents could sponsor the other two sisters.

Namrata , the oldest wanted to study in an international school and not in a local public punjabi school The fees was really high. Sitara was their second child and she gave way. Even the youngest, simmi also started throwing tantrums that she wanted to join Namrata in the international school

Sitara was the most intelligent among the three and she wanted to become a scientist. She had her own ambitions. Unfortunately destiny was evil to her. She was a good soul but suffered the consequences of being selfless compared to her siblings. They envied her beauty as well. She was a xerox copy of her nani. The oldie was a gorgeous woman.


Sitara was a gem and adored by her parents the most. They were grateful to have a daughter like her. She stopped schooling and helped mr. Ranjit , her father, in the crop fields. She turned a farmer.

He tried to hide his emotions as he recalled making fun of her being an illiterate but couldn't control his tears. She made so many sacrifices and he was not aware He broke down then and there. Mr Ranjit and wife, Harminder were taken by surprise when he narrated the truth. Sitara was his wife.


Just then,

"Bebe, roti dedo. Bhook legi hain"

It was her. She was home from the crop fields. His pulses raised. How to face her? Will she remember me? Dressed in a yellow cotton made salwar kameez , she looked stunning. He couldn't take away his eyes. Her appearance was soothing his vision. She was his sitara, his wife.


She walked into the living room demanding what he was doing at her parents home. She remembered how he tortured her with house chores. She snapped at him that she was no longer his maid and to leave immediately. He couldn't reply. Just kept staring.

Her mom then ushered her towards the kitchen and stated he was a guest Be nice to him, just have ur lunch and return to work. She left as soon as she finished her meal . She eyed him closely as she walked away towards the front porch. He ignored her hard stare, feeling embarrassed after all that he put her through.

He returned to the hotel hoping her parents would persuade her to return with him to his city.


She couldn't believe her ears that very nite when Harminder exposed the bitter truth of her marriage with Agasthia. She refused to accept him as a husband recalling how he tortured her. Her mother stated that he loved her and would take care of her well. They live in a village. Soon people would start talking. Please return to ur husband. He can provide u a better life than we could. Enough of sacrifices. U deserve to be with a man who loves u dearly. He came all the way looking for u. He is a true lover.


She had no choice but to obey her parents as she had been doing throughout the years.


The next morning.

He was at her doorstep with a bouquet of red roses , ready to propose her. Harminder rang him the previous nite itself that sitara was willing to return with him. He was excited. Couldn't control his raging fantasies. Just need to get into her soonest possible. Suhaag raat key ladoo in his heart. He was clad in a white shirt and blue jeans, shaved his beard as well. A makeover to please her.

Ranjit and his wife took off to their crop fields so the lovebirds could be all alone and clear up the air between them. Simmi was still at her friend's place past three days attending a social event. .


She received the flowers without a smile. His pulses raised. Looks like she's still upset. He decided to confess then and there. Perhaps that would enlighten her mood. As she placed the bouquet of roses on the dining table, she almost tripped when she turned . He was kneeling rite behind her. She was shocked


"Main tumse pyar karta hun, Sitara. Tu mere dil ka tara hain. Asmaan ka aek pyara sa tara jo rab ney meri jholi mey dal diya". He stopped but actually wanted to say more. His inner voice urged him.

Say na . Tu bedi hot legdi. Aja soniye abhi key abhi bed key uper jump marte hain . Teri gori chamdi ka sevad chakney ka dil karta hain. Bolde, marjaniye suhagraat menalete hain. Abhitak pending mey chal rehi hain. Shadi ko do mehiney ho geye.


Desperation knocking at his door. He struggled hard to control his unfinished speech. Fortunately, It was not necessary as she silently walked away towards the kitchen . No reaction. He was disappointed. She definitely doesn't love me. He had to work real hard to win her love. A great challenge ahead but he would not stop. He wanted to spend his life with her at any cost.


They returned the very next day. Grandma was glad to meet her DIL . He was surprised to see Pakhi at his door step as they were about to have lunch. She ran towards him and hugged him tightly. Sitara didn't know how to react. Pakhi loves Agasthia. Should she remain being his wife or unite him with his best friend.


She consulted him after Pakhi left . He was furious. No one should come between us. I don't love Pakhi . U know that. U said it today. Do not repeat it again.


Pakhi was in a dilemma when her best friend told her off that what he felt for her was mere obsession. Nothing more. Sitara was his true love. Pakhi swore to herself that she would create a rift between Agasthia and his wife. She started stalking him. She was obsessed. She wanted him at any cost. How could he think of another woman ? That was ridiculous.

Ishaan was furious as Pakhi drifted away. He vowed to kill Agasthia . He took away his love. He stalked pakhi and Agasthia.


Meanwhile Agasthia was trying to woo his lovely wife who was keeping a distance from him torturing his male hormones.

Dil ka ladoo ( suhagraat) was still pending. He planned a honeymoon package to London.


Part three - Honeymoon in London.


It eventually turned out as a business trip as the meeting for a new deal was to be closed in the City. He was annoyed. It was the client's decision. Arey honeymoon menana chahta hun yeh angrez kebab mey haddi kyun ben rehe hain. He was frustrated


Sitara was reluctant for the trip. She knew her husband was keen to jump into her . The lust filled monster. That's what she named him. Hawaz ka shaitan. She kept her distance from him as much as she could. Unfortunately Dadi persuaded her. Give him a chance. He is a good man.

Ok , only for u dadi, i will go with him With a heavy heart she packed her bags. Honeymoon , my foot. U wait and see u rasc** , i am going to make it a horrible trip for u.


Pakhi was devastated when she found out about the honeymoon trip. She decided to tag along to stalk them. This was the best opportunity to harm Sitara. Remove her from Agasthia's life. Ishaan followed. He had his own plans to murder Agasthia.


As soon as they reached the hotel in London, he took off for his business meeting in another hotel suite reminding his wife not to leave the venue till he returned as she couldn't speak English and would get herself into trouble if she is lost in the city. He ordered indian meals and snacks for her. Eat and stroll around in the hotel area. Don't go outside.


Two hours passed and she was bored to death. His phone was switched off. What shall i do?? A sudden thought came into her mind. Adventure time. This is the chance to take a revenge on the gore( British). Hell, they took charge on my country for a century and tortured my country men . Hail india. A sudden patriotic urge ran into her boiling blood. Revenge. Yes, revenge. In goron ki aisi ki taisi.


She booked a cab to Buckingham Palace. The taxi driver was an Indian. Fortunately, he understood her language. "Vo rani( the Queen) ko milney jana hain". He obeyed but was puzzled. She wanted to meet the Queen. Was this woman real?


The guards at the palace didn't permit an entry. She was annoyed. How to take a revenge. She was determined to teach the gore a lesson. Then an idea struck her mind.


A few minutes later , at a dine in , on the streets of London.


She pretended as a customer and ordered two dishes from the menu. She couldn't understand what was written. It was in English. She thought real hard to take an action and finally saw the opportunity when a policeman walked into the restaurant to have his lunch. She rushed forward and grabbed his revolver pointing at him and others in the dine in. All gore sitting. There was one Pakistani old guy and an indian teenager present. She spoke to them in punjabi and they understood instantly, obeying her instructions.

"Yena goriyan de phette chukne haigey. Tusi chup chap niklo. ( I want to teach these angrez a lesson, u leave quietly).

The Pakistani then replied and blessed her in urdu.." Hum bhi apke sath hain, mohatarma, Allah ap key uper apni rehem benaye rekhe".


There were thirty individuals in the restaurant. She abused them in punjabi..

Tusi sade desh utey haramzadon inney saal raaj kita. Dub janiyon tohanu nerek dey vich jegah nehin milegi. Tohadi rani bhi gel gel key maregi. Khasmanukhaniyon, tusi sada inna khoon chusa saliyon, kuttey di maut milegi. Sada taj mahal da kohinoor chura key kamino apney desh da pound bedhaya hua teh sade rupiah di koyi kimat nehin. Sade desh toh chori karke malamaal ben geye teh haramzadon sanu tevar dikandey. Tohadi maa ney tohanu dudh di jegah ghai da gobar kilaya . Tusi sarey gore chor aek number dey.


They couldn't understand a single word but didn't argue. She had a revolver and looked dangerous. She locked the door of the dine in and ushered them( the guests and workers) to stand at a corner. Then she instructed them to sing india's national anthem. After that hail. Vande Ma Taram


He was annoyed when he found out from the reception that she booked a cab to the Buckingham Palace. What is she upto?? This woman just can't listen. He could smell trouble. His instincts about her were always right. He received a phone call from the police station. Ur wife is arrested for hijacking a restaurant . He rushed to the station and found her sitting in the lock up.


She ignored his furious glance. He requested the officers to release her but they stated she risked the lives of thirty individuals for her patriotic mission . Sorry, pls arrange a lawyer. He argued fiercely and was thrown in the same cell. Honeymoon in the prison . The next morning, his lawyer helped in the bail process. Fortunately, she was not charged but no entry to England in future was stamped on her passport. . They were dropped at their hotel.

A shocking revelation. An explosion took place at the venue(his room) the previous nite when he and his wife were at the police station. Cause of explosion was being investigated. All their belongings burnt in the fire. Fortunately only two luggage bags filled with clothes. No valuables.

The authorities suspected a foul play.


He knew who it was. It could be ishaan. Damn. How dare he?? They could have died in the room but thankfully they spent the nite in the prison. If sitara didn't perform her stunt , they would have been dead. He realised that she was his shield..


Minutes later, he received a phone call from his grandma. He hid the details from her stating the trip was good. She replied happily.

"I showed ur kundali to a pandit. Guess what?? The woman who enters ur life as ur wife will be ur saviour removing all obstacles that comes into ur way. Sitara is ur lucky charm".


The end


Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Susmitasumi96

This is so good!🤣🤭❤


Part two and three on pg 4 with climax

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