AR FF: Defeated In Love pt17 pg1 10/09 - Page 57

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: yachna

hey taira wowwwwwwwwww yaar 2prts grt yaar jst caught wthur 2 prts nd ow yaar it ws brilliant.........superb........amzng yaar ridz dnt wntd 2 go wth him bt she also came wowww yaar nd ridz didn't lkd it at all d way he ws ignorng her omg yaar nd ar ws soooooo jealous tht samay hd puttd his arm around her wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww jst lvd tht yaar................seriously it ws soooooooooooooo gud ar dncng wth nothr grl nd priya whtevr she had tears she thought tht may b ehe lvs her bt nt ............nd ar ws cryng awwwwwwwwwwwwww nd ridz anger meltd wowww grt nd its his mom bdy awwwwwwwwwwwww tabhi itna i realy enjoyd myslf yaar i lvd..............
cont soooooooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna

Thanks a lot
Okay u the only person i guess who liked Armi ignoring Ridzie
and to be hones i love jealousy tracks totallyyyyy
Am glad that u enjoyed reading the part.
Thanks again
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi

amzin prt taira! i loved it! thx 4 d pm! cntd sn!

Originally posted by: saira_1

both parts were awesome👏

thnx for the pm😳

Originally posted by: nyla_193

aaawwwwwwwww that was such a cute part
poor armaan is missin his mum
loved this part it was soo sweet n i loved reading it
cont soon
thnx for the pm
👏

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: meow23

2 many carachters introduced..luvd d makeover of priya.. gud 2 c ridz havng an enemy..
d prt was mindblowing... n brilliant.. luvd d way u tackled d emotions... d ending was superb!!!!!!
thnxx 4 d pm.. update soon

The characters all have a role to play which you'll see soon
Ya Ridz too has an enemy
Glad u liked it
Keep reading

Originally posted by: samijan

wow. gr8 part. continue soon!!!!

Originally posted by: saira_1

both parts were awesome👏

thnx for the pm😳

Originally posted by: nyla_193

aaawwwwwwwww that was such a cute part
poor armaan is missin his mum
loved this part it was soo sweet n i loved reading it
cont soon
thnx for the pm
👏

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hearme21

Oooooh, so the games begin. Armaan is giver Ridz the cold shoulder and shes totally affected. Looks like Ridzi is losing her touch. Priya is so stupid, she is more in awe of Armaan than in love with him. I hope she gets over this obsession.
Poor Armaan is missing his mom. In that terrace scene he seems to be the sweet chap he was when Ridzi visited him, I hope hes not pretending. I dont think he will, not where his mom is concerned.

Ya the game has indeed begun and Ridz was bound to be effected......from getting all his attention she suddenly ends up beings ignored....something she is soo not used to.....lol
Lets see what Armi does with Priya
No he is not pretending he is indeed missing his mom......and u are right he won't play games where his mom is concerned.
Thanks a lot for commenting
Glad you liked it
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey tiara
thanks for the pms sweety
awesome twosome dear
lovely parts
that party thrown by armi was only for his mom's b'day or something else???
but i guess now the story is getting even more interesting
superb yaar
i like the way ridz is getting jealous hehehe
update soon

Thanks a lot
You'll know everything soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_JAY_FAN

oh part 8B was fabulous!

Plz update and plz PM me if u can

Originally posted by: afreen_syed

luved it 😊

was mazin n splendid 👏
thnx a ton 4 pm n do update soon plz
luv
afreen

Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr

wow yaar very nice part

pata nahi yeh priya ka kya chakkar hai mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai
but its toooo too gud
thanx for PM's

Originally posted by: rajeev_crazy

nice update, continue soon, will be waiting for ur next update

Originally posted by: *|maha|*

hi taira. 8b was sure a prt filled wid fun. plzz continue soon & thnx for the pm. maha x

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Awesome!

Cant wait for more


Pls pm

Thanks a lot guys
M Glad u all liked it
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: er.Sheetal

Hi Taira... Thanx a loads for the PM...

Hmm so Armaan asked Priya for the date... I hope Priya realizes it ASAP that she is JUST INFACTUATED by Armaan...😵
Riddhima is definitely TRUE friend... she is ready to do anything for her friends... But at the same time i loved her attitude... She is a very confident & smart girl... 👍🏼 Armaan is really smitten by her... & i m sure Priya's fear of Armaan falling for Riddhima surely gonna become a BIG reality...
ok... now i know Priya should be better paired with Amar... But wats dis "Claire" thing... Armaan i guess is gonna play JEALOUSY game... Very Impressive...😉
But i loved the last part where Armaan was standing on the terrace...😊 thought i cant see tears in Armaan's eyes,😕 but still i think it was the hightlight of the episode, coz it could be a key to a new start of his relationship with Riddhima...😳
I will be waiting for your next update...
Love
- Sheetal

Thanks a bunch Sheetal for your comment
Well let's see wen she gets her sense back becoz even i don't know wat i want her to be feeling- infactutated or genuinely in love.
You'll know about that soon coz m going to update the part in which his feelings will be shown and yes Ridz sure is a true friend
Hmmm........i love jealousy tracks and wud love to include one here........so lets see....
Priya with Amar---will think about it
Tears and beer don't always lead to good things.......lol
Keep reading
thanks again
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part

poor armaan hope ridz comforts him

Originally posted by: Rejected

great part loved it continue soon

Thanks

Originally posted by: forevercharmed

awesome part!!! 👏 please continue soon! 😳

Avanti

Thanks avanti

Originally posted by: cool_pisces

Hey there, loved all the parts of ur fanfic, i really like this new avatar of riddhima as a cool, confident supermodel. She is just as smart as armaan. Hope u continue soon.

Thanks

Thanks alot
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

Wow tiara, I guess it was our lucky day, we got to experience a double dhamaka😆. I loved the two parts👏. Must say your confident ridz just blows my mind in each and every part⭐️. And I'm soo happy priya got amar, I hope she'll fall for him and not be a bump in Armaan and ridz's relationship. Aww poor Armaan, he must be feeling so lonely now😭, but I hope he doesn't get drunk and make any mistake😲.

Thanks a lot
Am glad u liking the new Ridz avtar
Priya and Amar---well lets see
Ya he is feeling lonely and about the drunk thing .......well thats just bound to happen...
Keep reading
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: armaanaddict

aww!!! it was his mom's birthday..!! she should have hugged him at least..!

loved the party scene.. to say the least..! everything was awesome.. and the little AR scene in their was cute!!

i hope priya and amar start to have something in between each other.. so she's out of the way for AR..

hmm.. wonder what armaan's trying to do getting riddhima's rival into the party..

i hope riddhima sees past his casanova image.. and sees the softie in him..!

great update! thanks for the pm and continue soon!!

You really think after all the rude and cold shoulder he gave her she'll hug him.......lol
Am glad u liked the party scene because i totally loved writing that part
Priya and Amar- everyone has the suggestion....lol
Lets see wat trick Armaan is planning to pull with the whole rival thing........i haven't thought much about that yet
Keep reading

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