Sagar Kinare (AK, AR) Note, pg 22 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi shalini jus read ur intro n am completely hooked ya ... infact cant wait 2 read more !!!! n since u r vacationing right now am sure u will be incorporating a few of ur personal experiences in dis FF !!!! update soon n yeah do PM me wen u do
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
nice part...👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 do continue soon.. 🙂
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Posted: 17 years ago
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tht ws so sweet....plz pm whn u upb8...if possble
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow...awesome conectp...am alredi in love wid ur story...loved both ar n akz romance....cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww lovely short story; looking forward to it; a little different from the usual falling in love processes. you've started from honeymoons, I'm really forward to it, lovely part shalini
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: meow23

gr888888888888888888888 concept.............
waitngg 2 read more


Thanks meow23! [Err...name please if you don't mind. You can understand I feel a little weird calling you by your username😆]



Originally posted by: sweet_mittal

hey dear it was awesome part loved both of them;s cute part

Thanks hun!😳

i am lil sad that u putting other ff on hold but after i read ur note about this short i was like yes i can read some love romance until tehn

Yah, I figured the trade-off wasn't too bad😆 Good to see you here!
pleaseeeeeeeee make angad and kripa honeymoon with more romantic part u know what i mean haha

Don't worry, both couples are married so I won't hesitate with more romance😉

love ya enjoy ur vacation

Thanks Mittal! I'm having a great time!😃

mittal




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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome
so cute
plz continue soon
plz pm me the next part
❤️Heli
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey Shalini...i am def going to read this one as it has both AK and AR 😊
Wonderful start....u write like an experienced gal now...married couples and their nok jhonk....
The beach is definitley very inspiring place for a lot of fan fics (I can say that with experience lolz)😳
is this going to be a comedy of errors too?? with 2 couples in the same hotel celebraying their honeymoons?
Look forward to next part👏👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: khnk_rox

i loooooooooooooved it.. mogambo thoda thoda khush ho gaya hai..
wat to do.. itna romantic part tha.. but u kanjooooos..

Look who's being kanjoos, only thoda thoda khush?😆

itna chota sa.. taking a beach vacation madam.. then writing a super romantic fic abt it as well.. god.. i'm so jealous.. lucky u!!!!

See I'm sharing it with you through the story, so nice of me na?😃 And to let you know it wasn't planned (at least not by me), I was kidnapped, forced to pack and shoved in the car while I was half asleep 4 am in the morning. My kidnapper even worked this trip out with my boss, and I didn't know! Imagine my surprise!😛


next part soon..

Yes, these updates will be quick I have a two week deadline from Gabbar afterall for Valentines😆


i hope this is a purely romantic fic..

A lot of romance but not purely


n i guess AK AR r in the same hotel/resort.. will soon meet become good friends..

yes yes😳

n theere will be nok jhok teasing type stuff also..

that's a guarantee with me😉

i can hardly wait for the next part.. aur madam abhi chain se so rahi hongi.. next part sooooooooon..


Hey, I stayed up to write for u😛Yes next update soon, first let me go do things, then I will come back and write about them😆

u also hv to make for the temp absence of valentines.. post some pics of the beachside resort.. it will give a very realistic feel to the fic.. oh maybe u can add the beach pics of AK.. dont think AR have any beachy scenes.. just a random thot..

You know even I was thinking the same thing but I didn't want to make it uneven with AR since I don't think they have any beach shots, but will definitely put up something...


but update soon

Jo hukum sarkar!

**Actually I think I might be able to update before noon tomorrow (US time) so check once before you go to bed.

Edited by sweetmagic4u - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: deeya123

great start

Thanks Deeya! 😳

waitin to read more ... and have a great and fun filled rocking vacations

Aw, thanks for your wishes, I'm having a great time!😃



Originally posted by: vanessarulz

awesum

Thanks!😳

dfo cont soon wow ridz armaan married to say AK AND AR ARE my fav couple

Mine too😃

plz do cont soon and PM me if possible

I will surely😊


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