Sagar Kinare (AK, AR) Note, pg 22

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Sagar Kinare...By the Sea


Hi! For those that don't know me, my name is Shalini. I was inspired to write a short story by my own vacation on the beach. It can be such a romantic place! So here it is, please do leave comments/suggestions or press the thank-you button🥰


PS: For my current readers, I am putting Valentines on pause. I can't do Switzerland snow scenes and sun'n' sand scenes at the same time😜, and I really wanted to start this one. I will continue that one soon too, till then please enjoy this short story.

Chapter 1: Page 1

Chapter 2: Page 6

Chapter 3: Page 10

Chapter 4: Page 16

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Chapter 1:

Armaan opened the door with a flourish, "Welcome, Mrs. Riddhima Malik, to your honeymoon suite!"

It was an elegant yet tastefully decorated room with light blue and yellow tones to bring the festive atmosphere of the beach inside to the seaside room. The oakwood furniture complimented the oak frames of the various watercolors hung around the room, some of sunsets, others sailboats and such.

Riddhima smiled and started going into the room, but Armaan wouldn't budge from the doorway. He leaned towards her so that she trapped between the door's ceramic frame and her husband's muscular one.

"Armaaan!" She said softly, "Let's go inside at least. Tum yahan corridor mei hi shuru ho gaye."

His blue eyes twinkled micheveously, "Mrs. Malik, you should know that you have married a very disciplinary man. I don't believe in wasting any time."


"Oh, " said Riddhima looping her arms around his neck, "Then, what's next on your agenda sir." She knew Armaan wouldn't let her go easily.

"Hmm," he cocked his head to the side and looked up as if he was pondering the answer to her question, "Well, first thing's first. The proper welcoming rituals must be done for the bride."

"But I've already done the rice-tipping and the kumkum footprints. Aur kya karna hei?"

"Don't worry sweetheart, you don't have to to anything. It's something I have to do." The mischief in his eyes spread to his smile as his dimples deepened. With that he suddenly bent down and swiftly picked his gorgeous wife in his arms, "Carry the bride over the threshold...Armaan style!" And he did just that, swooping down on her pink petals, welcoming his new bride with a to-die-for lip-lock. She moaned and encircled her hands around his neck as he shut the door behind them with a kick of his foot.


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Kripa reached into her purse to pull out their door card (the electronic sort of key). It was a large Gucci handbag so she had to dig in the bottom to find it, she was trying to hold one of the handles of the purse while resting the bottom against her upraised knee so that she could see inside it properly.

"Madam, allow me." Angad held open the bag.

"What a darling hubby," Kripa smiled and pinched his cheek affectionately as she easily reached inside and found the key.

Angad pretended to heave a sigh, "Hubby ka dusra naam ghulam hota hei madam. I just signed myself up for a lifetime of servitude." He suddenly grinned, "But since the contract is new let's lay down the ground rules first, this ghulam does not work for free."

"Acha, tho ka payment chahiye," Kripa asked, pulling on a innocent face.

Angad leaned against the doorway to their hotel room, wrapping his free arm around her petite waist and pulling her closer. "I think you know what I want" he whispered huskily.

Kripa leaned in towards him, his eyes closed in anticipation.

She rolled her tongue inside her cheek and smiled naughtily. She slipped her arm around his waist and swiped the key on the electronic lock behind him. The door swung open to the inside making Angad topple to the floor of their room.

"Kripa ki bachi!" But he wasn't one to accept defeat so easily, he did the old "reach out for help and pull the person's offering hand, making them fall trick." Kripa fell on top of him, her softness pressed against the muscular slabs of his chest, her hair strewn over his face.

"Hmm," he mumbled against her silky fragrant hair, "You should know madam, that if provoked this slave will not hesitate to rebel." With that rolled over so that he was on top of her. He leaned in to take her lips in a drugging kiss while her hands went around his neck surrendering to his sweet rebellion.

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meow23 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr888888888888888888888 concept.............
waitngg 2 read more
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey dear it was awesome part loved both of them;s cute part
i am lil sad that u putting other ff on hold but after i read ur note about this short i was like yes i can read some love romance until tehn
pleaseeeeeeeee make angad and kripa honeymoon with more romantic part u know what i mean haha
love ya enjoy ur vacation
mittal
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i loooooooooooooved it.. mogambo thoda thoda khush ho gaya hai.. wat to do.. itna romantic part tha.. but u kanjooooos.. itna chota sa.. taking a beach vacation madam.. then writing a super romantic fic abt it as well.. god.. i'm so jealous.. lucky u!!!! next part soon.. i hope this is a purely romantic fic.. n i guess AK AR r in the same hotel/resort.. will soon meet become good friends.. n theere will be nok jhok teasing type stuff also.. i can hardly wait for the next part.. aur madam abhi chain se so rahi hongi.. next part sooooooooon.. u also hv to make for the temp absence of valentines.. post some pics of the beachside resort.. it will give a very realistic feel to the fic.. oh maybe u can add the beach pics of AK.. dont think AR have any beachy scenes.. just a random thot.. but update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great start
waitin to read more ... and have a great and fun filled rocking vacations
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesum dfo cont soon wow ridz armaan married to say AK AND AR ARE my fav couple plz do cont soon and PM me if possible
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oooo Shalini, that was awesome :P... I love your writing style... got me hooked the first time when I started reading Valentines... but since I never saw KYPH... I got all confused as to who Zaib was lool... but then I figured he was Angads twin. I need to read it from the beginning when I get time :D... but this one.. I'm totally hooked! Can't wait for more!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey,
nice concept hon i just luved it do cont soon and pm me
luv ya
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wow an
amazign concept
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
and could u pm me the next part
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very nce cncpt

lkin 4wrd t readin mre
updte sooon =D

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