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Posted: 17 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: charminggenie

muzic_chick247
this as 22222222 intense part,d way he grabbed her n kissed her ,itwas 2222 passionate n hawt,i luv RM romance,i kinda agree wid Armi that Ridz care 4 Chirag but not vat Armi goin thru 😳 ,hope d mess get solved soon ,really adore each word u write 😳 ,outstandin is a smaller word 👏

*phew..* thought u wouldnt like it coz it was a bit intense.. but i ddi it for a reason ..... thankz a lot for the compliments!! really keeps me goin.....

love vini

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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
i completely luv the armaan of ur story n ridz is typically herself...if not dmg ur stories make us feel good.......
gidha thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
Hi Music Chick
Great update....luved the jelously...please bring sum romance between the 2 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
uffff!! tht was sooooo short!!

bt enuf 2 leave a mark!!i like Az style..eheheh!he cudnt tke chirag flirtin wit ridz n 2 get over tht ahahha he mkez out wit ehr...almost!!lol

soooo funny bt vry cute!! 😉

yaar!tke yut time..bt wen u do update plzzz mke it long...!!!

no PM again!:D nevermind!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
heyyy
omg....was soooo guuud...
bechara arman...can imagine how he feeels...ridz shud tell every1 now...lol
but amaazinnng parrt....verryy welll written!! luuuved itt!! 😊 the way he kissed herr 😳 😳 lool!! 😊
keeep it upp!!
thnks for the pmm
luvss aashna
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
hey yaar,its gr8 part....
so,sumone is jealous...lolzzzz...bt i luvd armaan's jealousy 😳 😳
D way he kissd her ,trying not to leave her incase sum1 else can take hs ridz away 4m him ,is toooooo cute n sweet 😳 😳 😳 .....

luvd dis part.....

continue soon......
thanx 4 d pm...

luv
*vini*
Edited by coolvini4u - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
heyyy...
it was an awsumee part!!!
jus luved the armaankissed her!!
they shoud confesss soooon!!
please....!!
lol please pm me next time u updadteee!!
u rite awsumeee!!
luv revna
xx
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
Hey Vini...
First of all a loads of thanx for ur PM...
I couldnt comment on last 2 parts, as i never realized dat u hv already posted dem... 😕

Anywayz... I m gonna read each part right away & post comments seperately for both of them... 😊

- Sheetal
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69

heyy vini

omg loved the last part....
hahha...rahul and muskaan scene was sooo funny...buh i agree wiv him...who is she hitlers sister 😆 😆

buh Armi and ridz scene was hawwwt until both of them spoke up...hehe
buh ryt now i dont know who's side to tke..
ridz or armi?
because dey both hav dere own reason and somehow it connect to wat we all feel in real life..

buh hunnn plzzzzzzzzz continu soon
and how cumz u onli update once a weeek?
plzzz continu tomorrow if possible...

anywez
thnx 4 da pm
cant w8 4 da next part..

luv ya,
ridz,
.x. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
heyyyyyyyy
wow!!!
nyc part 👏 👏
soooo romantic!!!
awwwww armans geting jelos
gud! 😆
thx so much 4 da pm
cont soon
TC
.xkrinzx.

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