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soumya

@saridena

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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

hey 😊
thks for the pm
nice part
it was cute and funnyall the sms was nice 😃
👏

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Soumya Pradhan

@friendly_Soumya

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

hi juss love ure FF been following it from a little bit of tym now!!! but at first was a silent reader had 2 cover up so many parts u see. n plz add me 2 ure pm list n pm me everytym u update coz I LOVE YOUR FF!!! 😛

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chaiti!

@chaiti!

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Posted: 17 years ago

#53

shit srush!!!! u r back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yay!!!!!!lol ... loved d part was dyin to read it from ages!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! finally!!! neways its dam gud!!!! loved it ... update asap!!! n yea i really miss u alot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭 😭

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vini

@muzic_chick247

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Posted: 17 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: friendly_Soumya
hi juss love ure FF been following it from a little bit of tym now!!! but at first was a silent reader had 2 cover up so many parts u see. n plz add me 2 ure pm list n pm me everytym u update coz I LOVE YOUR FF!!! 😛

hey thankz... im pretty much jobless most of the time... so i dont mind PMing people...will add you too!!! and thankz for the comment!!

love vini

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vini

@muzic_chick247

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Posted: 17 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: chaiti!
shit srush!!!! u r back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yay!!!!!!lol ... loved d part was dyin to read it from ages!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! finally!!! neways its dam gud!!!! loved it ... update asap!!! n yea i really miss u alot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭 😭

hey gurl!!!! miss you too!!! miss blore like shit!!! and ya im back wid ma ff!!! wat happened to urs??? havnt yet put it up?? well HURRRY!!!!

anyway thankz a lot! and plzz come ova! not gonna meet karan w/o you guys!!

love vini!

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shriya

@shriya12

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Posted: 17 years ago

#56

hey ths is not fair...u said u had loads to write n yet u wrote jus one prt..i love the expressions tht u use..plssssss update soooooon...waiting now....

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vini

@muzic_chick247

Inactive

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Posted: 17 years ago

#57

Part 36
At CoffeeCorner:

"hey guys!!" Rids waved as she neared the table where armaan and chirag were seated..

"How were the lectures?? u look sleepy!!" Chirag asked as he ushered her to sit beside him...but rids acted as though she never saw his gestures.. and seated beside armaan.
"ummm no bad.. wat bout you armaan?? rids asked as she tried to judge Armaan's quiet expressions..

"fine"

Just a fine???lagta hai armaan accha mood mein nahi hai...

"armaan??? itni prompt reply??? kya hua?? girfrend se jhagada(fight)???"

instantly armaan and rids looked at one another.. rids the more terrified of the two..

"Armaan???" rids laughed weakly "cant be possible!!"

"nothing chirag.. im fine.."

"c'mon armaan.. kuch t hoga... but i promise.. rids n i will make ur mood better.. ryte rids??"

"haan haan.... kyon nahi.."

He's pissed... par kyon??? ab maine kya kiya?? idea... msg karti hun..

FF:hey armaan? wats up??? devdas kyon banne??

BB: kuch nahi.. mood theek nahi..

FF: achha??? 2 periods pehle to bahoot khush the??"

BB:i told you nothin..

ufff....kuch batata hi nahi!!

FF:armaan??? plz tell me??

"so wat will you have guys??"

"a mochachillo wid ice cream and a lot of chocolate"

"same.. but no ice cream and less chocolate.." armaan replied

"ok.. umm excuse me..waiter..yeah.. ummm one mochachillo wid extra chocolate and icecream.. and one wid less chocolate..no ice cream.. and a frappe" chirag said " and could you hurry it up..??"

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Meanwhile back in the college campus in the basketball auditorium..

"RAHUL!!! " muskaan yelled as she neared to basketball court

"ab maine kya kiya??" missing he shot into the basket .

"bataya kyon nahi??"

"Dekho mujhe nahi pata tha ki u will find them...c'mon every guy has them.. its natural... aur mere pas sirf dus hai.... have you seen how many magzines atul and arman have??? they only gave me.."

"WAT????wat are u talking bout??"muskaan said just as she reached the point where rahul was standing..

"oh... umm nothin... " rahul said nervously.." i umm.. i mean... u were sayin somethin?"

"yea...u never told me bout armaan and rids!!!"

"oh!!" rahul sighs "im sorry sweetheart it was a secret..."

"secret from me??"

"it wasnt my secret..thts wy"

"RAHUL GREWAL.. ur talkin but MY bst frend!!!"

"haaan... par.."

muskaan interupted "its not like i'd say no to it..i would have helped!!"

"haan.. par.."

interupting again "and u should trust me.."

"lekin..."

interuptin for the millionth time " its not like i don like armaan..."

"ho gaya ???"

"kya ho gaya???" muskaan said angrily..

"i mean... im sorry jaan... batana chahiye tha.." rhul said instantly fearing tht she would lose her temper again..

"i dont care.. im pissed"

"sorry baba.."

"sorry shorry.. nahi manne wali hu....u dont even trust me???bye bye!!" muskaan said as she was about to leave.. but rahul caught hold of her hand..

"sorry princess.. sorry..." rahul said holding one of his ears...

"sorry ke bacche.. HUT!! mujhe jaane do!!"

"please muskaan... kuch bhi karne ke liye tyaar hu.."

"anythin???" muskaan said suddenly brightening up

"what?? why are u smiling so much??? oh no... "

"OH YES!!! abbe come ehre.." muskaan said puling him closer .. she whispered in his ears

"no way!!.. no way!!"

"theek hai.. to phir buh bye... oh haan.. sahil mujhe bula raha hai.." muskaan winked..

"accha achha... theek hai... ill do it.. kab karna hai??"

"good boy!!"

"tum meri gf ho ya hitler ki behen?"
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Bck at coffeecorner..

"hey guys.. i just got a msg from preeti.. i gotta go.. need to return some book of hers.. but u guys have fun.. bye " chirag said as he was getting up.

"Bye.. " rids said as she watched him go.. and then turned to armaan.. who was staring ryte bck at her..

suddenly.. "come wid me.." Armaan said holding her hand and gettin up..

"par kaha..??" even though she knew,judging by his expressions.. he wouldnt tell her.

Armaan took rids to a room near the auditorium..which to riddhima seemed like a room which was probably used to store unused or old sports gear.

armaan swung her around and cornered her to the wall..

"armaan??? kuch bataoge??" watching an expressionless face come closer and closer to her own..

he tightened his grip around her wait and moved her hair away from her face, kissing her very passionately on her cheeks..holding her higher and burrying his face in her neck..

"armaan>??? kuch bolt-" rids started just to be silenced by his lips..
Rids could tht soemthin was wrong wid armaan... he kissed her a bit more aggressively than he would normally..and each time she made a move.. he would just tighten his grip..
Finally rids pulled away..

"armaan?? sach sach batao.. " this time she used a more serious tone.. deos he know????

Fianlly raan gave in "Rids i cant.. im not gonna keep this a secret any more.."

"wat??? armaan?? u cant....its been just a day... u promised.."

"i no... but now i cant.."

"nahi armaan... please..." rids sai raising her voice involantarily..

Armaan losened his grip.. and stepped back.. shocked from ehr sudden out burst..

"rids... how long do you think this is goin to last a secret??" raising his voice just the same " and for pete's sake.. chirag is flirting wid you.. he has a crush on you.. hes asking you on dates in front of me! and i cant stand it... telling all the boys ht u could have a chance wid him!!!! "

"i know!!! he told me.." rids blurted out

"HE WHAT????????" Armaan crossed his hands..

it no use..." armaan he told me.. 2 days ago..."

"and you?? and you... you couldnt tell me??"

"armaa.. i said no... and i told him tht i didnt like him... i thought he got the message.. so i thought u didnt have to know..

"then why the hell is he still flirting wid you??!!??u could have told him tht u loved me.."

"i dont wanna hurt him armaan!!"

"so this is why u wanted to keep 'us' a secret??/ THIS is ur reason??"

"Armaan please.. socho... what if u liked.. or loved a person and then u come to know tht she loved someone else.. and tht u had to see them everyday wid soemone else?"

"imagine if u fell IN love wid someone.. and had to watch some other girl flirt wid her everyday in front of ur own eyes... wat o u say to dat??"

Rids couldnt reply.. maybe it was the way he said it or the way he looked at her.. tht made i impossible for her to open her mouth..

"I thought so.... ur telling him first thing tomorrow...and if he tries to flirt wid you again... ill show him wat pain really feels like..!!"

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Edited by muzic_chick247 - 17 years ago

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charminggenie

@charminggenie

Stunner

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Posted: 17 years ago

#58

muzic_chick247
this as 22222222 intense part,d way he grabbed her n kissed her ,itwas 2222 passionate n hawt,i luv RM romance,i kinda agree wid Armi that Ridz care 4 Chirag but not vat Armi goin thru 😳 ,hope d mess get solved soon ,really adore each word u write 😳 ,outstandin is a smaller word 👏

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deepali

@deepali.patel

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#59

wow yaar totally awesome i can't get it i mean why is ridz always hiding anyways it was awesome plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon it was wonderful you're an awesome writer plzzz continue soon 😳

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vini

@muzic_chick247

Inactive

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Posted: 17 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: deepali.patel
wow yaar totally awesome i can't get it i mean why is ridz always hiding anyways it was awesome plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon it was wonderful you're an awesome writer plzzz continue soon 😳

thankz deepali.... and will continue tom as well fo shure!!!!

love vini