OSR Samyukta 41-Life afresh at Sawai pg49 - Page 32

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    Dharam becomes alarmed at watching an alteration in his brother's usually vehement outlook, towards the girl. even he notices the difference in veer's behaviour 😆😆. Veer and Shera hastily realize the number of glares that they had casually attracted and bring their short silent interactions to an abrupt end to revert to their original positions, as soon as possible. a bit late for that now, everyone has seen you both staring at each other 😳 Shera comprehends Siya's bewilderment and even before she could be faced with any questions on the matter, calmly dismisses her coy smiles with Veer as mere greetings to a royal acquaintance shera is too clever, but this time it wont work😆. even veer is trying to hid from dharam's glares. 😆 You only evade someone's glares when there is something to hide😆 wow shera singing👏👏👏 and even veer realises how good her singing and voice is recollecting how hostile his reactions were to her songs during their first encounter; the prince stares at the rings on his fingers throughout her musical rendition, smirking at how skilful 'time' could be at changing people's attitudes and outlooks i am glad that veer realises that time changes everyone😊 Struggling to subdue her tears at the significance of 'Kanyadaan'; Pari continues obeying the priest's instructions 😭😭😭 pari must be feeling so upset and happy at the same time👏👏👏. wow dharam comes forward to take the role of the bride's brother 😲, i thought it was going to be veer. it is so nice of dharam and siya both to come to do the rites👏👏.aww 😭 pari and sakshi were hoping veer would come forward😊 Once the seven significant wedding pledges are accomplished; Dhruv finally concludes the imperative rites by applying the 'Sindoor' on Sakshi's forehead and tying the 'Mangalsutra' around her, in harmony with the Vedic chants. 😍 i so want to see the wedding 😍😍😍 While Dharam presents the couple with lovely gifts on behalf of the entire royal group; Siya silently continues to ponder on the simple yet expressive matrimonial customs she had viewed so far, hoping for a similar beautiful destiny with her prince soon. dharam is so nice, 😊 siya is thinking about her marriage with dharam. i think we all are looking forward to their wedding as well😍 However; the cheerful royals remain oblivious to both, the silent Veer's unexplained bliss at having witnessed the wedding of a family that he seemed to increasingly relate to, or the hapless Daksha's endless misery at her recent observations of Veer and Shera. i feel so bad for daksha, no one noticed how upset she is 😭😭. i wish i could go and hug her🤗 Shera ecstatically watches the blissful Sakshi, fervently hoping that the young family would be protected from any of her own disastrous compulsions, planned by Agni. shera really wants to protect this family, why cant agni leave her alone "Do you know that you are one of the most beautiful girls I have ever met... many other men here might have their eyes set upon you... but, I must confess that I am dignified, unlike them..." how dare this guy harass shera 😡😡 Nearly entertained by the man's attempts to woo her; Shera stifles her giggles, as she replies with a hint of cynicism "I sincerely thank you for the complements... but I possess many names and whereabouts... if I start listing them...and the reasons for the same... I might not be able to assist Pari chachi in serving the marriage feast now..." loool shera is not one to get scared, i love the way she finds the man's comments amusing. 😆😆 her answer made me want to she is one clever girl Abruptly ceasing his statements; the man peers blankly into oblivion, as his proud words taper to a surprised stillness, compelling the harassed Shera to swing around curiously. that man should run as veer is not going to be happy with you after the way you have harassed shera. here comes the knight in shinning armour with a temper Her frowns quickly fading away; the blacksmith notes the splendid form of Veer staring at them, with his profoundly intense sentiments, cleverly hidden behind his eyes. she knows that veer is going to beat him 😆 "A while ago... possibly just before you were praising the Arvavarts..." talk about scaring the guy. 😆😆 Overcoming her giggles spurred by the amusingly apparent battle of ego between the two men; Shera instantaneously proceeds to inform the irate prince with subtle expressions that the villager's tales were wholly untrue. looool shera is finding it funny the battle of two ego's funny. 😆 Reading Shera's hidden expressions denying the villager to be any relation of hers; the irked Veer finds his doubts about the man confirmed and treads with unfolded hands towards the commoner, to whisper authoritatively "Do you want to leave or shall I have you arrested for your blatant comments? I am a selfish Aryavart, after all..." veer looks ready for a fight, 😆😆 and love his answer. its like he can do anything he wants 😆 Veer waits for Shera to make conversation by offering gratitude for his help, but on receiving no response from the mystifying girl, feels annoyed at having to swallow his pride and begin his confessions instead "From our last meeting... I... I... have been meaning to thank you... for having saved my life after the battle..." in futile attempt to comfort his ego, he mentally ends his gratitude with a cynical conclusion "But I shall not be fooled...I am still wary of you and your objectives..." i was in fits when i read this, he is waiting for shera to say thank you but alas no such thing happened and he had to make the first move.🤣 A big round of cheer for shera as only she can make veer do that 🤣🤣. wow😍😍😍 he says thank you to her. he can be charming when he wants to be but he still does not trust shera. why does not surprise me? 🤣🤣 Shera flashes him a warm grin, before revealing her feelings in composed fashion "Rajkumar...you have more than made up for it by performing many deeds in my favour..." pausing to observe Veer finally look up to gaze into her eyes; the petite tucks the lock of hair swaying around her temple and pursues with her engaging chatter "and about what just happened...that man was..." 😍 aww even shera is being nice to him. wow veer looks into her eyes and shera gets nervous 😍 Shera was about to jest him yet again; the prince loathes the very likelihood of being teased about his annoyance at the villager's romantic inclinations with her and interrupts curtly "I know... I know... I hope that my irritation with the man did not unsettle you...I tend to lose my patience quickly... anyway, I have to leave now..." He does not like being teased but its ok if he does it to dharam and everyone😆. aww he admits that he looses his temper. i think shera already knows this🤣 Shera chuckles to herself and then nods her head negatively, to correct him "On the contrary, I was about to thank you for your help now too...besides Rajkumar, I agree that I do tease your temper... but, as long as you channel your anger to fight injustices, your anger is justified; is it not..." adding to her justifications, a mischievous notion crosses the amused girl's mind "Furthermore; it is comforting to know that a gentleman with such fiery might and power looks out for me, whenever he can..." its so nice to see them being so nice to each other 😍😍😍, i am glad she says thank you to him and admits that she likes to tease his temper😆. me in dreamland as shera admits to herself that its nice to have a gentleman defend her 😍 His ire gradually disappearing with Shera's vibrant remarks; the debonair Veer endeavours not to appear conscious of her spellbinding beauty, despite the fact that her fascinating manner and giggles were repeatedly drawing him towards her on that eve 😍 love is in the air 😍and i am feeling their sparks from here. If anyone needs to light a match just go near them 😆😆. veer is captivated by her beauty and shera is drawn to him as well. i like how she has forgotten all her worries 😍 Shera poses with him a riddle "By the way Rajkumar Veer, since you just mentioned it, I am curious... why did you say that you were irritated by that man..." loool shera just likes to tease veer and she wants him to admit to her why he got annoyed with that man Able to perceive that the girl was cleverly trying to gather if he held any possible opinions about her; Veer breaks out into a soft smile, as he lies to Shera with a hint of superiority "Irritated with that villager... well... he was condemning the Aryavarts... now all Aryavarts are not malicious, are they? I am an Aryavart too..."Comprehending that he was trying to conceal the true reasons for his angry fit with the youth; the abashed Shera lets out an unconvinced chuckle, as she silently chides him "Just as I thought... you would never overcome your vanity to admit your jealousy..." Veer knows shera too well 😆😆, what games are they playing with each other😆😆. zhotta kahi ka about he was defending aryavarts. but shera is not fool as she knows that he would never admit that he was jealous 😳 Veer finds himself reluctantly blushing for the first time ever, as he mentally battles with reality "I would hardly become jealous over something as unimportant... and even if I ever do so in future, you would be the last person I would or could admit it to..." i have to see veer blush 😆😆, even veer knows that he was jealous but would never admit it to her. its like a battle of wits and ego 👏 Veer discerns the presence of a lone figure standing a short distance away and his high-spirited conversations with Shera begin dwindling, as he slowly detects the gloomy visage of Daksha, goring at their friendly pair. i felt so sad when i read this, daksha must be in so much pain😭 "So... only after two days of my stay at Aryanagar, did you choose to even acknowledge my presence, Rajkumar Veer..." you feel the anger and pain in her voice and veer is so unaware of what she is feeling😭😭😭 "Were those smiles actually intended for me?"Startled by her harshness and confused by the undertone of her implication; the perplexed prince enquires "What do you mean?" 😭she knows the truth and its too sad that veer did not even realise how much daksha loves him😭 i felt like hugging daksha and comforting her when she was telling veer that she is not as pretty as shera but she has always admired him. me was😭😭😭 when she says that she has seen the spark between him and shera 😭 she has accepted the fact that she is not the one veer loves 😭😭 "Daksha, I don't understand what you are implying... I feel that you might be mistaken...are you misreading me, or my intentions?" veer is confused 😭 i do like how veer apologies to daksha and this upset me too much Please do not fret for me...I am not weak hearted... yes, I did come to Aryanagar with many dreams and fantasies swirling in my mind... I might never accept anyone else in my life ever again... but then I shall learn to live with my ill fate too..." left with no other alternative but to accept her defeat gracefully; the girl moderates her tone, as she concludes her tale with a honest wish "I hope that at least you are able to have the pleasure of watching your wishes being fulfilled..." 😭😭😭 she is so brave yet heart broken 😭😭 "Rajkumar Veer... I am not parting on a contemptuous note...besides, if you didn't realize it so long... I have always hoped the best for you..." daksha is so lovely no matter what happens she will always give her best wishes for veer 😭 sombrely "I wish I was not the reason for so much of unhappiness in your life... I don't know of anything to say that could make you feel better now... but would you take my word for it if I... I... said that I sincerely wish you the best..." i feel so sad for daksha and like how veer is being very nice to her and understanding 👏👏👏 how shera is realising how noble and honest dharam against the evil agni and jai thoughts "This kingdom is in such a poor state and the only hope for its revival is the presence of sovereigns like yourself and Rajkumar Veer...if something happened to either of you and I stood back as a quiet spectator, I shall never be able to forgive myself..." yet 👏👏awww shera does not want anything bad to happen to them. 👏
  • wedding "Rajkumar Dharam... before you leave... I have to let you know... I heard of some very unsettling facts... it might just be gossip... but if true, it could also mean that your life is in danger...I know that you have protection with you always, but please be careful of where and how you travel and proceed..." i was surprised 😲😲 and did not expect at all to shera tell dharam to be careful of how they travel. She is brave and me worried to what agni will say if he finds out 😭😭

A wonderful part,👏👏👏 and what a suspence ending.👏

Edited by divareena - 16 years ago
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OSR Samyukta part 33 – Dharam begins to suspect Shera!

Aryanagar; Orphanage at the village of Sawai

Treading the large expanses of greenery under the dimming rays of the soft twilight yet again; the agitated older prince hurriedly sifts his glances through various groups of marriage guests, as he continues on his hunt for his brother. With every quest to locate Veer's whereabouts amidst the crowds; having returned him only amazed frowns from awed children and excessively generous offers of help from unfamiliar commoners, the overwhelmed Dharam becomes frustrated.

Following many unsuccessful searches of all the sites housing the wedding gathering; the disappointed Dharam lets out a deep sigh, mumbling irately to himself "Getting this entire retinue gathered to start for Aryanagar seems to be more difficult than it used to be organizing children in the Gurukul... I wonder where Veer has disappeared off to yet again..." resuming his tired steps through the open areas around the orphanage, the prince scoffs at his brother "In front of everyone else, Veer acts like he despises the very company of girls... and what do I find here... sometimes he is absorbed in conversations with Daksha... at other times enjoying his moments with Ananya..."

With the name of the petite incidentally reminding him of her recently disclosed information once again; the prince anxiously debates with himself on the authenticity of her warning "I don't understand this young blacksmith...there is always something very strange about her... I cannot believe that she manages to hear all these sorts of information only through palace gossip... why did she seem so disturbed..." aimlessly shifting the overhanging branch of a large tree; Dharam scans for any sign of his sibling in the vicinity, while still mentally occupied in debating on all the plausible reasons for a plot against him "So...someone is planning an attack on me and on Veer... ha! Who could it be other than Agni... Jai chacha... or any of their allies...in fact, this could be a part of the plans that I overheard Agni making...but then...how would Ananya know all this... does she have some connection with the maids that work for Agni...I wish I had more time to question her..."

Smiling warmly at the endearing persona of the young prince standing in front; the realistic Dhruv reveals a rare glimpse of his heartfelt sentiments, as he begins confessing his immense gratitude to both, Veer and his noble associates "I did mention this briefly to the Yuvraj too... how noble are your family indeed... Yuvraj Dharam... Rajkumari Siya... your very self... everyone is indeed remarkably large-hearted...none possessing airs of authority or superiority... this is a completely different picture to what Aryanagar is accustomed to watching for so long...we can now hope for a better future..."

Nodding his head at the humble address; the embarrassed Veer pats the hands of the touched groom in order to ascertain him "You need not have left behind the celebrations just to fulfill these formalities Dhruv Kumar..." pausing his words; Veer shifts his attention towards the tearful mother facing him and speaks up softly "Maaji... please don't fret... I will come back soon... please convey my regards to didi too...the guests would be waiting for you...you both should return to the canopy..."

Eventually inundated by his futile attempts in the hunt for his brother and the puzzling account revealed by Shera; the disturbed prince ceases his pursuit for a short while, silently wondering on how to proceed. Just as he is about to turn around and restart his journey in another direction, the prince comes across a few familiar voices emanating nearby and slowly commences to walk in the direction of the sounds, to investigate them. On finally unveiling the trio of Veer, Dhruv and Pari occupied in hushed conversation at a quiet corner secluded from the wedding bustle; the crown prince becomes baffled by the discovery and gradually halts his steps, a short distance away.

With no time to spare; Dharam begins mulling on the appropriate course of action to interrupt their privacy, when he inadvertently overhears the emotional Pari declare her earnest feelings to Veer, thus letting out many alarming facts unknown to himself.

"No R...Rajkumar Veer, but we had to tell you all this in person... your presence here has given us immense joy... this is the least we could do for someone who has helped the orphanage in so many ways...you helped rid the revolutionaries who used to visit here... you donated money to us... in fact, you are like a saviour to us Rajkumar..."

Momentarily taken aback by the relentless barrage of praise from his affectionate hosts; the bashful Veer corrects her "What I gave you was hardly donation..." he continues spiritedly "Anyway... my group has been awaiting my return for quite a while now... I should leave as soon as possible, or Dharam would lose his temper..."

Pained by Veer's impending departure; Pari is unable to assume a formal stance to respond to the prince's farewell and maintains her silence, as she mentally chides her compulsion of having to let her son go "Why do you have to abandon your family so soon... you are leaving your lone sister's wedding without having even a single meal..."

Perceiving the depth of emotions buried in the eyes of the quiet mother; Veer suddenly undergoes a strange myriad of sentiments and then forcefully subdues his unfamiliar feelings in order to utter a few parting words to Dhruv "Please convey my love to the children... I wish you and Sakshi didi a happily married life..."

Not sure if he had stumbled upon their conversations by chance, or overheard facts that were deliberately meant to be hidden from him; the already troubled Dharam feels even more distressed, as he meditates on the recently revealed truths "What! Revolutionaries used to visit this place? Weren't all people with any knowledge of the revolts or revolutionaries supposed to report in for questioning after the war... so, did Veer intentionally spare this family from interrogations... even if the family may be noble and their intentions honest... even if Veer was only trying to protect this orphanage from the evil forces in the administration, he is not fulfilling his duties as part of the ministry of defence... if anyone found out that he has been shielding an institution that was harbouring revolutionaries, he would be eligible for punishment... and the family too... I need to have a word with him on this..." staggering a few paces backwards from his location; the dispirited prince resumes his walk towards Siya's entourage, constantly delving on the new uncertainties plaguing his thoughts "And Veer has been handing out donations to the orphanage? Where did he get the money from? But... but... why has Veer been hiding all this from me... is it deliberate or has he stopped trusting me?" oblivious of the random salutations being offered by people passing by; Dharam desperately tries to deal with his insecurities "No! Have faith in your brother... I am confident Veer would never do anything wrong... he has been busy with his new responsibilities and hence failed to mention all this... I shall have a chat with him once we return to Aryanagar."

Enroute Aryanagar from sawai

Having ridden through numerous lanes of less-acquainted villages for a considerable while; the royal party hasten on their course in absolute silence, from the peripheral village of Sawai, back to the central capital of Aryanagar. Unmindful of curious inhabitants, examining the unusual sight of a small royal gathering passing by their rustic streets; the royal retinue nervously travel along, hoping that their bold venture of abandoning the capital would not have raised an alarm at the palace.

However; unlike his quiet associates; Veer eventually becomes tired of observing increasingly lonely lanes and decides to end the haunting stillness marking their hurried return home, by sharing a few light-hearted observations with Dharam, riding beside "Dharam...look at Bhalla... I have never seen him so calm and content on such tiring long journeys ... having been the only one of us to have sneaked in for the dinner at the wedding, he is looking forward to more delectables at the feast in the capital now too..." watching his generally amiable brother barely respond with a superficial smile; Veer becomes worried and persists hesitantly "What happened Dharam? Why are you so reticent? Are you anxious about being late for the feast? We can quicken the speeds of our horses... and easily sneak in during the feast..." pausing to gasp for breath, the young prince suggests "Shall we ask the charioteer to increase his speed too?"

Flogging the reigns of his speeding horse; the irked Dharam resolutely looks ahead at the forlorn pathways, as he corrects Veer by yelling above the noises of the hooves "No we cannot... the feast was meant to be at night, not midnight... we shall never reach on time!"

On heeding the tone of his reply; though unaware of the genuine reasons for Dharam's anxieties, Veer realizes that the older prince was not in the right state of mind for playful frolic and decides to leave him alone. Just as the young royal turns ahead to silently continue with their hushed advance to the capital, the princes realize their comparatively serene travel come to a sudden end, with an ear-piercing scream, from behind.

Startled by the shrieks; the royals immediately cast glances behind them to catch the menacing presence of six cloaked riders, advancing from the dust storms raised by their horses, towards the Niphaudi princess' chariot. Even before the princes could come to terms with the evolving horrific turn of events; two nimble attackers make headway in the direction of the four guards around the carriage and manage to engage the soldiers in instant horseback combat. Defying any onslaught from the stunned soldiers with astute skill; the two aggressors destroy the might of the proficient Aryanagar sentinel in no time, with merely a few calculated strokes of their weapons.

Within the few moments that the guards are mercilessly crushed; the remaining assailants decide to take instant advantage of the shocked state of the princes. While the princes invest their might in trying to swerve their fleeting horses around, to fight the onslaught; the attackers waste no time in charging forwards and an intense clash ensues between the two oppositions. As three vicious men pounce upon Dharam with deadly weapons, two others drag Veer from his moving horse to the ground. Bruised by the nasty fall and lying in the precarious midst of blinding dust and wild horses stomping around; Veer languishes on the dark soil, struggling to withdraw the sword from his hilt.

Abysmally worried for the safety of his family; the cornered Dharam wrestles to yoke the strength of his will and skill, as he simultaneously balances himself on his steed, extracts his weapon and begins tackling the three men, assaulting him. However, despite Dharam's trials to repel strikes from all directions; the trained horseback warriors succeed in inflicting many superficial injuries on his being, including a deep gash on his left arm. Though striving to disregard the blood drenching his left sleeve; Dharam bawls in agony on heeding his helpless brother's screams, caused by the sadistic men trampling Veer with their horses to thwart any possibility of the prince being able to use his sword.

Observing the fate of his powerful friends; Bhalla forcefully represses his intense terror and gallantly stays with the charioteer in a meek attempt to protect the girls from a single attacker, till he is also rendered defenceless by a few injuries. Watching the horrifying unfolding events from a far corner of their chariot; the shaken Daksha protectively hugs Nanda, to stop her from wailing uncontrollably at the unexpected formidable twist to their destiny. Huddled beside her quivering friends, as she lifelessly surveys the excruciating sight of wounds being wreaked upon her loved ones; the shocked princess mentally implores the Lord for her companions' safety, unaware of her own faint state.

Continuing to brave many painful wounds; the tortured Veer feels guilty on discerning the treacherous situation facing his family and perceives the lack of time available to recoup himself and assist his brother in fighting off the assailants. Grinding his teeth to overcome the throbbing pain in his body; Veer manages to elude a few offensives on him using his agility and finally manages to reach out and grip his sword.

With the setting sun giving eventual way to the tranquil moonlight, destiny gradually begins favouring the noble princes fighting for their loved ones, rather than the malicious rogues meting out the vile attack. While the two brothers relentlessly pursue with their combat; they comprehend the skill that the villains possessed at wielding their respective weapons and realize the depth of thought and plot behind the well-planned attack on them. Wrestling with fatigue; the wounded Dharam dismounts his horse and joins the overwhelmed Veer, as the brothers try to tap their remaining vigour and combat proficiency, to wound their attackers, one by one. While the weary brothers jointly work to defend any further inflictions from their encircling assailants; they gradually accomplish the feat of slaying the dwindling rogues, one after another. No sooner than five of the six criminals are brought to their terrible ends; the enraged princes glare at the sixth lone remaining man and swiftly block his pathway with their swords, hoping to capture him for interrogation. However; unfazed by the dreadful fate of his companions, the man remains well-versed with his orders if the mission did fail and thus ends his life by mortally driving his weapon through his own body.

With no time to stop the unfortunate development; the breathless princes stagger towards the dying man in alarm and eventually accept the unwilling outcome after a short while, before they turn around to face one another. Sympathizing with the other's sorry state for a few moments, the emotional siblings engage in a manly embrace, sharing their relief at the favourable end to their horrid ordeal.

After a short while; Dharam retracts himself to examine his brother's bruised arms and scratched face, simultaneously asking Veer with genuine concern "Veer...are you all right?"

Nodding his head affirmatively in response; the sensitive Veer feels touched by the empathetic expressions of his injured older brother, as he enquires in return "What about you Dharam?"

As soon as Dharam gives Veer a false positive assurance of the state of his health, the troubled princes bring their brotherly moments to an abrupt end in order to investigate the condition of their companions, waiting behind them. Having dismounted the chariot after the turmoil; Bhalla remains absorbed in fussing over his injuries, while the tearful Nanda struggles to reconcile herself with the mishap. Standing silently beside her associates; the saddened Daksha feels more helpless, as she observes the pain that Veer was braving, caused by the torture that had been meted to him.

However, being the most affected of all; Siya stares at the grimacing pain on Dharam's face all along, failing to come to terms with the appalling realization that the recent occurrence had revealed "I cannot bear to see you in such an afflicted state Yuvraj ... those men were looking to take you away...take your life away forever...leading such a protected life in Niphaud, little did I know of the perils behind the life of a monarch... this evening has taught me many lessons... I came across the hardships that common people faced at the wedding ... and now I have faced the harsh reality of the dangers in a ruler's daily life... if and when you go for war... how could I stay calm and just resign myself to my fate, if something were to happen to you...no... no...I cannot..."

Aware of how shaken his girl was, on having witnessed the unacquainted sight of bloodshed, violence and strewn bodies; Dharam valiantly strides up to Siya and tenderly grasps her shoulders to pacify her.

Suddenly unaware if she would have the fortune to cherish his comforting touch in such manner forever; the insecure princes shudders at his grip and retreats a few steps, to question him spiritlessly "Yuvraj...we only got betrothed yesterday... why such an anguishing incident today? They were about to slay you..."

Noticing Siya withdraw from his affectionate hold; the worried Dharam again advances a few steps and enfolds her soft cheeks in his palms, in a bid to assure her "No Siya... everything shall be fine...I am fine... I want you to leave Aryanagar on a happy note tomorrow..."

Indicating to her prince's gashes; warm tears begin streaming from Siya's unconvinced eyes down the prince's palms, as she refutes him "You are not fine Yuvraj... all this is not fine..."

Watching the couple's upsetting exchanges; Veer feels disheartened by how disturbed the cheerful princess had become and attempts to soothe Siya's grief by reminding her of his steadfast support to them "Bhabhi... please do not be so unhappy... you know that as long as I am alive, I would never let any harm come to either of you..."

No sooner than the princess falls silent on attending to Veer's caring words and smiles; the benevolent Dharam adds a further wise phrase of advice, to help Siya rein her fears "Siya all this is a part of life... you should understand that I am only human... I am not invincible......but... but at least in such mishaps, your support in the form of your courage would make me stronger... both, physically and emotionally..."

Immensely moved by his intelligent counsel that reflected the extent of his regard for her welfare; Siya finally begins to feel a sense of relief and subconsciously leans her forehead on to his torso, seeking his emotional support. Swiftly perceiving the sensitive nature of the couple's interactions; Veer, Daksha, Nanda and Bhalla proceed to their respective stations to grant the couple a few rare moments of privacy, prior to their return home.

Oblivious to her surroundings, as the elated Siya continues resting on Dharam's chest; she inadvertently listens to the steady pulses of his heart and prays that she should have the fortune of being able to listen to his unfaltering heartbeat in life and spirit, forever. As Dharam responds by wrapping his strong arms around her protectively, Siya's delicate state makes her succumb to the solace of his firm hug, while her femininity unwittingly yields to the feel of his hands on her exposed neck and shoulders.

Feeling uplifted with his emotions being momentarily aroused; Dharam neglects the throbbing pain of his wounds, to whisper a final batch of soft reminders into her ears "Did you forget what your royal priest had said about our relationship... that I shall progress to become a ruler of Aryanagar; while you shall remain beside me all through... that God has willed this relationship and your future lies with Aryanagar, despite anyone's approval or disapproval... everything will be all right Siya... your prayers shall not go unanswered..."

Nodding her head in agreement to his consoling justifications; the pacified girl gradually withdraws from his overpowering presence, to convey her renewed stance "I shall be strong...henceforth... if that is what you want...for your sake...Yuvraj Dharmavardhan..."

Gradually realizing that their frail modes of mind had given way to a brief interval of intimacy; the embarrassed Siya draws herself away from her prince, while Dharam comprehends her reservations and smiles understandingly to mask the abashment.

While still flushed by the thought of their recent affectionate spell; the blushing princess quickly looks around to ensure the whereabouts of the remaining retinue, simultaneously stammering to express her views to Dharam "Yuvraj... how would the three of you travel back on horses ...you have deep gashes... Veer and Bhalram ji are in severe pain... we don't have any medication... this place is deserted...shall I temporarily tend to everyone's injuries till..."

Instantly shaking his head in order to halt her anxious mulling; Dharam advices her calmly "Don't fret about all that... we shall be able to manage... let us start now... I suspect that we would have missed the feast, as it is..." he pauses "Anyway, it is better that none of us inform our families about this attack, lest they consider this an ill omen... myself and Veer shall take care of everything..."

While gently beginning to lead the girl towards her conveyance to help her ascend; Dharam scans the unpleasant scene of the remnant spoils of the attack, reviving a few troubling notions in his mind "I wonder who is behind this attack... these masked men didn't sport any uniform or dress that gave away their whereabouts... who else could it be other than Agni himself... or maybe even Rajkumar Harsh...whoever it was, Ananya was right... it was this attack that she forewarned me about... or could there be another one too..."

Palace of Aryanaagar – Dharam's chamber

Meticulously lit brass lamps suspended from the wooden holders of the mighty walls; barely dispense the gloominess of the large palatial room, or the sombre aura of its inmates. Sporting grave expressions; the monarchs of Aryanagar encircle the elaborate remedial arrangements of exquisite oils, ointments, medicines, fresh cotton bandages, needles and linen, procured for the treatment of the young royals resting on comfortable chaises. While the royal Vaidya endeavours to finish attending to the medical needs of the two injured princes; the profoundly fretful mothers interfere with the inundated physician's duties, repeatedly offering their opinions, assistance and recommendation on the matter. Already having to endure the agony of the physician's therapies and the fatigue of the day's turbulent incidents; the brothers silently groan at the additional harassment of constant admonishments being showered by their enraged family.

With his folded hands and severe expressions reflecting his stern disapproval; Aryavardhan notes the ongoing events unhappily, as he resumes scolding the young royals, in an uneasy tone "I still cannot believe that you both failed to make your presence at the palace or fulfil your obligations, because you spent your entire day attending a Shramik wedding... what is the necessity to attend a Shramik wedding? Do you think it is appropriate for us Aryavarts to be attending a Shramik wedding? Every Aryanagar inhabitant that came for the grand feast today was enquiring about your whereabouts... and we had to lie to them..."

Incidentally catching the strong Veer grimacing at the pain being caused by the treatment to his bruises; the aggrieved Nivritti instantly joins her brother, in censuring the princes "And to add to the insolence, you spent the rest of the evening horse racing and sword fighting... what did you both think... that you are still enjoying your time at the Gurukul... look at the state of the two of you... cuts... slashes... torn clothes... now am I supposed to wail for being cursed with such disobedient sons or thank the Lord that you both did not turn up at the feast in this shoddy manner..."

Even before the stressed Dharam or Veer could utter anything in their favour; the indignant Swathi adds to the series of complaints "And why did you have to involve Siya in all of this... we had to lie to her family about her whereabouts for the entire day..." noticing Dharam groan as the physician secured his mild sutures; the doting mother briefly twitches in anguish at her son's misery and then continues her resentment in milder vein "Dharam... you have no idea of the grief you have given us the entire day...what if they came to know the truth about where their daughter has been to... what if something happened to her... how would we answer the Maharaj and Maharani of Niphaud...what if something happened to you..."

Shaking his head in agreement with his wife's sensible views; the displeased king again speaks up bitterly, not allowing the brothers any opportunity to defend themselves "You both never think twice about putting us to shame, don't you...Dharam you are about to get married in two months...about to ascend the throne in a while... and if this is the responsibility you display, I dread to think of what is to come..."

Detecting the older prince let out a deep defeated sigh in response to his father's endless chiding; Nivritti perceives that the young royals had suffered their fair share of woes for the day and acts on her wave of sympathy, by swerving the topic after a brief pause "Anyway, having enjoyed your day... tell me, whose wedding was it...where was it held..."

Annoyed by the lack of empathy that they had been shown so far; the childlike Veer shows his dejection at the persistent rebukes, by mumbling a grumpy reply "It was a wedding here in Aryanagar, at the capital...the family that saved my life after the war had invited me for the wedding a short while ago...I did not want to disrespect their invitation," terminating his explanation abruptly, the young prince moans aloud, in an effort to evoke some pity "Ma, can I retire for the night? I am tired of my aching body!" angered by the attackers that had brought him to this pitiable state, Veer adds mentally "Besides, tomorrow morning, I have to counsel with Dharam and begin my probe into these attacks."

Feeling suddenly perturbed by Veer's casual revelations; Nivritti scarcely nods her head to consent to her son's pleas, while simultaneously debating about the afflictions swirling in her mind "That family again! Why does that family come back to torment my thoughts over and over... why do they show such special affection to my son, who so willingly reciprocates the same, at every instant... are my fears needless or justified... I have to meet that mother...Pari...soon... in fact, tomorrow..."

Noticing his mother's downcast visage and changed disposition; Veer halts his departure from the chamber and tenderly leans over his mother's shoulder, as he whispers a concerned query in order to pacify her "What happened ma? You suddenly seem lost... was it something I said...are you not happy about me having attended that wedding?"

Her possessiveness and love for her son still whelming her thoughts and being; Nivritti rejects his affectionate gestures by flashing a few dazed glares in his direction, before curtly standing up and leaving the room, thus profoundly baffling Veer with her actions.

Aryanaagar, the capital – The tribal basti

With the darkness of the still midnight highlighting only a few sharp contours of the dusky girl, casually sitting on the chilly floor of her hut; Shera ethereally folds her hands around her knees as she enjoys her temporary solitariness. Relishing the gentle wafting breeze that swayed her open tresses against her dangling ear rings; the girl sweeps her glances outside the crude window to catch the light of the moon that sparsely illuminated the silent basti, lodging her resting tribe. Briefly tasting the flavour of feeling truly high spirited after a long spell of time; Shera still tries to recover from the charm of the marriage and the exhilarating experiences that she had savoured at the occasion.

Though aware that her dire reality never held any possibility or hope of such blissful fantasies for herself; the tranquil girl unselfishly mulls on all the favourable aspects of the wedding that she had just witnessed "I am happy that I at least had the fortune to attend such a beautiful wedding... didi was glowing with happiness... I hope Sakshi didi and jeejaji cherish a happily wedded life forever with the endearing company of the numerous mischievous children at the orphanage... away from all the evil eyes and viciousness here...." resting her cheeks on her knuckles; the petite smiles dreamily to herself, on recollecting the only disheartening aspect of the entire joyous event "I shall miss meeting didi at Aryanagar, now that she will reside at Sawai mostly..."

Her attention slowly swinging towards the pile of blue apparel and jewellery, neatly tucked away at a corner of her rustic shack; the young blacksmith incidentally begins to reminisce her lovely moments with the princess "What an adorable person Rajkumari Siya is... I wish I could have met her again... just to offer her my gratitude... but the entire royal retinue left in such a hurry..." her deliberation on the royal group inadvertently bringing back her seemingly amicable interactions with the young prince at the wedding; the amused Shera giggles delightfully, while speculating on Veer's ever-intriguing attitude "Rajkumar Veer... always the same reserved self... but, he did manage to smile and speak a few words by himself, without being goaded this time... such arrogance and pride hardly allows him to even start a conversation... expressing himself is a distant probability..."

Turning to observe the powerful radiance emitted by a shining piece of long metal steadfastly reclining against a wall of the hut; the girl stares at the weapon gracefully, continuing to admire the flawlessness in the remarkable work of art.


Gently shifting her face in the dim light to mark her reflection in the gleaming blade of the new sword; Shera studies her kohl filled eyes for a short while and then begins speaking to the weapon, with an air of pride "Hmmm I am merely your subject and cannot dare to exhibit vanity in your presence but, your Highness can afford being miserly with your compliments to me... Rajkumar Veer, I know that I looked no less at the wedding... and... am aware that you realized this very fact too..." continuing to gape at her profile in the blade; the petite feels a warm tone ascending the sleek outline of her soft cheek and then begins giggling at her own childish charades. Swiftly proceeding to brush the strong handle of the weapon with her fingers; Shera continues to address the inanimate object dismissively "I can predict that you would be my most difficult customer, but this sword is no ordinary one either... the extent of effort bestowed upon it by an esteemed blacksmith like myself... the exceptional craftsmanship that it now possesses... this would fetch my tribe handsome money in the market..." she pursues with a false bearing of superiority "But, I took pity on you and did this favour in my spare time... a small token of appreciation for having saved my life and for trying to help out my tribe now... hence, I warn you not be so reserved with your praise for this piece of art or I shall stealthily whisk it back from you Rajkumar..." her playful drama of chiding Veer, unexpectedly reminding her of the more feisty unpleasant encounters with the hot-blooded prince during her initial days at Aryanagar; Shera feels repelled about having to face something similar, ever again "I hope I will never have to face you after the day you find out about me... more painful than the punishment I will be subjected to, would be watching how your impression towards me would degrade to one of immense dishonour, despite the truth that I am doing all this out of sheer compulsion ... now that I have warned Yuvraj Dharam of the attack on his life, I have risked myself ... it is only a matter of time, before I shall be caught..."

Her spirits fading on recalling the miserable possibilities that her future held; Shera swings around to stare at the female tribe members peacefully sleeping under the roof of her shadowy hut. Suddenly feeling very unsettled; the girl refuses to permit her frisky hair locks to play with her face anymore and forcefully tucks them behind her ears, as she ponders aloud "What am I doing? My one mistake can mean the death of my entire family…I am a strong person by nature, I should not have warned the prince... but then, how could I allow harm to such noble people... anyway Ananya, strength lies in doing the right, even in adversity...leave the rest to the Lord!"

Abruptly ceasing her speculations on the vicious nature of the 'cycle of destiny; Shera decides to proceed to the water well at the basti and wash her face with few cold splashes of water, before retiring for the night. Just as the lone girl stands up and quietly steps towards the entrance of the hut, she becomes alerted by a muffled sound outside the hut and cautiously advances outdoors, to investigate the source of the noise. No sooner than she detects the presence of a looming shadow; the shocked petite looks up at the increasingly familiar figure, only to dismally realize that the conniving Tasha had been waiting outside, overhearing her private thoughts all along.

Barely able to contain his joy at the priceless newfound knowledge that he had managed to stumble upon; the guileful man peers at the girl's expressions in order to study her well-concealed frustration, as he begins silently revelling at his stroke of fortune "Should I consider myself blessed that on the rare occasion that I pass by the basti at this time of the night, I caught the shrewd Shera enjoying her solitude and toying with her innermost sentiments... blurting out enough damaging information to secure my future leadership with this tribe and much more..." conscious ofall the disheartened notions that could be spinning in the petite's mind; Tasha begins the conversation, by chiding Shera's impudence cynically "I now know of all your doings and yet you calmly stand here, facing me... how bold of you to have actually warned the Yuvraj! Additionally, you lied to the tribe that your friend's wedding yesterday, was at a temple near Aryanagar...when, I actually know of the precise whereabouts of the function..."

Confounded at detecting how relentlessly the vile Tasha had been spying on her all along with the sole purpose of bringing about her downfall; Shera desolately mulls on the consequences when he would sell all the information to Agni. Knowing that her plight held no solution, as Tasha would never be swayed by bribes or threats in his determination to usurp the tribe; the devastated girl realizes that her comparatively carefree life was more short-lived than she thought.

Goring at the rogue all the while; Shera forcibly swallows any of her tears and gradually strengthens herself by wisely learning to accept fate "When I have spent most of my life enduring immorality, for the sake of others... accepting baba's misdeeds...suffering your worthless existence... and now dreading Rajkumar Agni... I refuse to live the final free days of my life bringing harm to the only few selfless souls I know...so do what you may and I shall do what I consider right..." Aware that Tasha was impatiently awaiting a response from her; the girl decides to stay tight-lipped about his questions to prevent revealing anything that would undo her fate any further and instead returns his rude accusations with a nonchalant reply "Tasha, I am curious... once you become successful at all your sordid aims of dismissing me... after you manage to grab the leadership to this small business that you possess neither the skill nor knowledge to run... would your life and time not become meaningless with none else to spy or plot against..."

Though enraged by her sarcastic statements; even the spiteful Tasha is forced to marvel at Shera's rebellious audacity for a brief while, before extracting his revenge by revealing freshly distressing information that she was deliberately kept unaware of "I don't know if your baba ever informed you Shera... but, Sardar had started looking out for grooms for you, a short while ago ...apparently, he has fixed your alliance with a prospective groom... the family had come home this morning to seal the proposal... Sardar is elated since they do not expect much money, gifts or goods..." he pauses mockingly "Do not fret, the man is handsome... in fact, more well-to-do than us... hardly 38 years of age... and only possesses two wives..."

Noticing her stunned expressions; Tasha rejoices at his successful venture of having shocked the strong girl once again and deliberately ridicules her bleak future, before leaving the basti for the night "I sincerely pray that you enjoy happiness in your newly wedded life with this man... but, how would you juggle your affairs with this new man's family alongside Rajkumari Agni's demands to conspire against the Yuvraj, Rajkumar Veer and everyone else... that shall indeed be a sight to watch... besides, I am not sure your new husband would be entirely happy, if he knew of how many men you continue to be associated with..."

Palace of Aryanaagar – The palace gardens

His early morning weaponry exercises discontinued; the feisty prince steps out of the extensive practise tent, mentally prioritizing various official matters for the day, as he simultaneously mulls on his unresolved concerns over the previous night's attack. Having unwillingly discontinued his favourite sword sessions to tend to a Shramik anticipating his audience for a substantial while now; Veer treads through the the well manicured pathways, enjoying the beautiful aura of dawn. Wiping the refreshing scented sandalwood water dripping down his chiselled face and arms with a stray cloth; Veer crosses the lush palace groves in order to reach the community lawn, where he had ordered the Shramik to await his presence. Arriving at the archways of the empty garden; the prince abruptly halts his steps, on discerning the presence of the enthralling Shramik girl inside, gracefully sitting atop a large ornamental stone. Observing the lovely Shera tinkering with the crevices of the rock that she was poising on; Veer smirks playfully at her trivial pastime, as his troubling thoughts subconsciously diminish, a subtle difference from how her very presence invariably used to annoy him.

On hearing the familiar voice of the prince discharge the sentinel guarding the arc entrances; the petite withdraws from her trivial pastime and stands up to face the prince courteously. As the familiar duo cease their early awkward silence by initiating their interactions with a short bout of formal smiles, Veer incidentally observes Shera holding on to a long narrow jute cloth, wrapped in the form of a sleek parcel.

Majestically striding a few paces into the green grass; the radiant Veer casually probes into the reason for her unexpected presence at the palace "Here? At this time of the morning? Is there a problem?"

Briefly grinning at the loftiness hidden in the prince's amiable manner of enquiry; Shera elucidates earnestly "I apologize for the disturbance... but, I learnt that you would not be arriving at the court or any of the formal meeting areas, till later this evening... hence I had to request for this audience..."

His curiosity spurred by her answer; the handsome royal shrugs his shoulders and persists with the subject "And what matter is of such urgency that you could not even wait till this evening..."

Maintaining her composed bearing, even while revealing elusive hints of her dismal future; the magnanimous girl responds to him "Actually the matter is not very urgent Rajkumar... it is only that I might be running out of... I mean that I might not have the time..."

Ciao 😳
Edited by lashy - 16 years ago
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Hi lashy ,

nice one dear.

so sad for shera that i stopped reading for a while.his baba is a devil i was gonna use some very bad cursing word considering Ur condition it should be very bad influence on baby too so i restricted myself.

talking about the baby is he/she had come already come.

congrats if the happy occasion had arrived and give my love to baby.

waiting eagerly for your ncoming part.

will dreading for shera's future. but i have faith that veer will save her.
so much happened in one single part.

oh god sia was really sweet on both occasions be it with shera or with dharam she was really nice.
as far as dharam is concerened he is the ultimate yuvraj any kingdom can ever have.
i sincerely hope that both the brothers talk to each other and clear all misunderstandings also dharam is not taking shera's advice lightly and not even considering her in negative light is something really reaspectable of him.

bhalla is really adorable and i don't like nivriti being too possessive . but alas she is a mother.others were also good do continue dear.

bye sumi
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lovely update lashy!!!jus loved the last 2 parts, absolutely fantastastic!!im speechless n i dunno wat 2 say abt tis beautiful classic!!i feel so bad 4 shera, shes trapped so badly tta she has no way out bt definately veer will take her out of this mess, veer n sheras interactions r so lovely, so cute n so matured!im in luv wid tis couple n hopefully veer will soon realize shera worth in his life, im waitg 4 tat part 2 cme!dharam n sia so reserved n such a beautiful couple!i jus luv sias love, care n affection, she is such a sweethart n dharm is so lucky 2 hve her!!!pls im waitg 4 the nxt part
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Hey lashy...ur expecting a baby?????? woowww congrats dear!!!
what month is it?????

great part...I loved all the action and all he drama. At first I thought it was that harsh guy...trying to abdicate siya but then it just turned out to be agni's people after the two brothers. It is good that you are creating some reasonable differences between the two brothers because resovling these differences and learning to take into account th other's POV, is what will help them mature and will bring them even more closer. and strengthen their bond.

I liked how you should shera maintaining her eccentricity even amidst all her great problems and catch-22 situation.
I hope veer and her convo is positive and she manages to convince the prince of her honesty...atleast somehwat.

Waiting to hear more and congrats once again!
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hey lashy dear is thre a gud news??im sorry i was unaware of it!congrats dear n we r waitg 2 hear frm u!
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Wow 👏 another wonderful part full of spectacular, thrilling, suspense, romance and sadness 🤗
what i loved :
    "In front of everyone else, Veer acts like he despises the very company of girls... and what do I find here... sometimes he is absorbed in conversations with Daksha... at other times enjoying his moments with Ananya..." loool veer has changed from staying away from girls t o being surrounded by them 😆😆 I don't understand this young blacksmith...there is always something very strange about her... I cannot believe that she manages to hear all these sorts of information only through palace gossip... why did she seem so disturbed..." dharam she is trying to help you. i really hope that when the truth comes out, you and veer help shera and not be harsh on her
"So...someone is planning an attack on me and on Veer... ha! Who could it be other than Agni... Jai chacha... or any of their allies...in fact, this could be a part of the plans that I overheard Agni making...but then...how would Ananya know all this... does she have some connection with the maids that work for Agni...I wish I had more time to question her..." good dharam is having doubts that it could be agni or someone else planning their downfall👏👏 "No R...Rajkumar Veer, but we had to tell you all this in person... your presence here has given us immense joy... this is the least we could do for someone who has helped the orphanage in so many ways...you helped rid the revolutionaries who used to visit here... you donated money to us... in fact, you are like a saviour to us Rajkumar..." i was like 😲😲 when i read that dharam heard this and thought he is going to get a wrong idea when he hears this. I just hope the plan agni and jai have made for veer never happens. "Why do you have to abandon your family so soon... you are leaving your lone sister's wedding without having even a single meal..." it was sad that veer could not stay for dinner on his sisters wedding day. "What! Revolutionaries used to visit this place? Weren't all people with any knowledge of the revolts or revolutionaries supposed to report in for questioning after the war... so, did Veer intentionally spare this family from interrogations... even if the family may be noble and their intentions honest... even if Veer was only trying to protect this orphanage from the evil forces in the administration, he is not fulfilling his duties as part of the ministry of defence... if anyone found out that he has been shielding an institution that was harbouring revolutionaries, he would be eligible for punishment... and the family too... I need to have a word with him on this..." I was like oh no, dharam is going to suspect veer then got happy when I read that he is going to talk to veer first without jumping to conclusion 😊 This shows that dharam trusts veer and has faith in him 👏👏 loool veer teasing bhalla because he is fed up the quite lanes and the silence 😆. bechara bhalla, he has not even said anything.😆 watching his generally amiable brother barely respond with a superficial smile; Veer becomes worried and persists hesitantly "What happened Dharam? Why are you so reticent? Are you anxious about being late for the feast? We can quicken the speeds of our horses... and easily sneak in during the feast..." pausing to gasp for breath, the young prince suggests "Shall we ask the charioteer to increase his speed too?" oh no, dharam's silence is scary, he is probably thinking that i need to speak to veer and veer is not sure why dharam is behaving different My god Startled by the shrieks; the royals immediately cast glances behind them to catch the menacing presence of six cloaked riders, advancing from the dust storms raised by their horses, towards the Niphaudi princess' chariot i was totally not expecting this to happen 😭. Though striving to disregard the blood drenching his left sleeve; Dharam bawls in agony on heeding his helpless brother's screams, caused by the sadistic men trampling Veer with their horses to thwart any possibility of the prince being able to use his sword. i was like ouch dharam is hurt😭 i love how you describe the fight between the attackers and dharam and veer 👏 👏 fought so many together 👏 Bhalla forcefully represses his intense terror and gallantly stays with the charioteer in a meek attempt to protect the girls from a single attacker, till he is also rendered defenceless by a few injuries. awww bhalla is so sweet he is protecting siya, daksha and nanda 👏👏👏 the shaken Daksha protectively hugs Nanda, to stop her from wailing uncontrollably at the unexpected formidable twist to their destiny. Huddled beside her quivering friends, as she lifelessly surveys the excruciating sight of wounds being wreaked upon her loved ones; the shocked princess mentally implores the Lord for her companions' safety, unaware of her own faint state. daksha is so sweet,🤗🤗🤗 she must be scared herself but is giving support to nanda. I can imagine how shocked siya must be seeing this 😭 and she is more worried about dharam, veer and her friends. 😭 daksha in pain at seeing how hurt veer is 😭😭 I cannot bear to see you in such an afflicted state Yuvraj ... those men were looking to take you away...take your life away forever...leading such a protected life in Niphaud, little did I know of the perils behind the life of a monarch... this evening has taught me many lessons... I came across the hardships that common people faced at the wedding ... and now I have faced the harsh reality of the dangers in a ruler's daily life... if and when you go for war... how could I stay calm and just resign myself to my fate, if something were to happen to you...no... no...I cannot..." Siya is shocked and upset at seeing dharam hurt, she never expected that as a princess she would have to accept dharam going to war and getting injured. 😭😭 It is really hard accepting this 😭 i like how dharam is trying to calm and reassure siya that he is fine 🤗 "Bhabhi... please do not be so unhappy... you know that as long as I am alive, I would never let any harm come to either of you..." so sweet even veer is trying to make siya smile 😊 Siya all this is a part of life... you should understand that I am only human... I am not invincible......but... but at least in such mishaps, your support in the form of your courage would make me stronger... both, physically and emotionally..." what dharam says is true but it will take time for siya to understand and accept this. I know she will always support dharam no matter what happens.🤗 Siya finally begins to feel a sense of relief and subconsciously leans her forehead on to his torso, seeking his emotional support. Swiftly perceiving the sensitive nature of the couple's interactions; Veer, Daksha, Nanda and Bhalla proceed to their respective stations to grant the couple a few rare moments of privacy, prior to their return home. wow they hug so romantic and why are the others standing there. 😆 phew they all left siya and dharam to some time alone Siya continues resting on Dharam's chest; she inadvertently listens to the steady pulses of his heart and prays that she should have the fortune of being able to listen to his unfaltering heartbeat in life and spirit, forever. As Dharam responds by wrapping his strong arms around her protectively, Siya's delicate state makes her succumb to the solace of his firm hug, while her femininity unwittingly yields to the feel of his hands on her exposed neck and shoulders. awww so romantic siya listening to dharam's heartbeat to reassure herself that he is fine 😍 . i love this scene and how dharam hugs her back in a protective manner and to reassure her. ; the pacified girl gradually withdraws from his overpowering presence, to convey her renewed stance "I shall be strong...henceforth... if that is what you want...for your sake...Yuvraj Dharmavardhan..." me in dreamland here, it is such a beautiful scene where they both are trying to reassure each other and 👏 i know siya is strong but it is a shock to witness your loved one get hurt and realise that as a prince and a king this will happen quite often😭
"I wonder who is behind this attack... these masked men didn't sport any uniform or dress that gave away their whereabouts... who else could it be other than Agni himself... or maybe even Rajkumar Harsh...whoever it was, Ananya was right... it was this attack that she forewarned me about... or could there be another one too..."I am glad that dharam is thinking about the people who can be behind the attack and he is taking notice of ananya's words 👏
"I still cannot believe that you both failed to make your presence at the palace or fulfil your obligations, because you spent your entire day attending a Shramik wedding... what is the necessity to attend a Shramik wedding? Do you think it is appropriate for us Aryavarts to be attending a Shramik wedding? Every Aryanagar inhabitant that came for the grand feast today was enquiring about your whereabouts... and we had to lie to them..." loooooool I can imagine the kings anger, he is shocked that they missed their own feast.😆
Veer grimacing at the pain being caused by the treatment to his bruises; the aggrieved Nivritti instantly joins her brother, in censuring the princes "And to add to the insolence, you spent the rest of the evening horse racing and sword fighting... what did you both think... that you are still enjoying your time at the Gurukul... look at the state of the two of you... cuts... slashes... torn clothes... now am I supposed to wail for being cursed with such disobedient sons or thank the Lord that you both did not turn up at the feast in this shoddy manner..." lool as well as feeling the pain of the bruises veer is getting proper told off by nivritti. 😆I don't know what is more pained about the bruiser or the telling off. I love the dialogue by nivritti that she is not sure if she is supposed to cry that her sons don't listen to her or be happy that they did not cause more problems by turning up at the wedding looking like a mess. 😆
  • Even before the stressed Dharam or Veer could utter anything in their favour; the indignant Swathi adds to the series of complaints "And why did you have to involve Siya in all of this... we had to lie to her family about her whereabouts for the entire day..." noticing Dharam groan as the physician secured his mild sutures; the doting mother briefly twitches in anguish at her son's misery and then continues her resentment in milder vein awww swati feels dharam's pain. I like how both sons are not having a chance to say a word. Iool they are getting blamed for involving siya but it was siya who also wanted to go 👏
  • will come back with more comments soon 🤗

    Edited by divareena - 16 years ago
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    just aweosome part jaan..... :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-*
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    Comments for part 32[/glow]::::

    just loved the whole descreption of wedding preparation..... detailed..!!!!!!!!!!!! claps****
    woww..so royal family finally aa rahi hai wedding ke liye... n pari didnt know abt this...ohh poor mom... uski khushi ka to koi thikaana hi nahi rahega na veer ko sakshi ke marriage mai dekhkar....!!
    so finally the royal family is arrived.. pari is sooooo happy... awwww.. she has to..afterall her son arrived for his sis marriage... :)
    sia is sooooo sweet... n she enjoyed the whole simple wedding...... preparation n all folk rituals... :)..she is really very lovely girl with kind heart... :D
    ohhh so she went to sakshi...where shera is there too... hmmm... n she noticed shera as because of her stunning beaty...wowwwwwwwwwww......Anu is really very beautiful..how can veer escape from her beaty?? ;) 8)
    Sia helped shera to get ready for wedding...sooo sweet....both future sis in law practising to involve with each other.... ;) :) ;D... wowwww....
    wow so sia ne finally anu ko saja diya...n she is looking soo pretty.... so sweet of u sia... :-* :-*
    wooooooo.... veer saw her n her beauty..... :o :o :o :o...he ws stunned... hahaaa..chup chup ke.... ;) ;)...but daksha also noticed it....poor dakshu... :-\..but achha hi hai use pata chal jaaye to.... :-\
    ye kya?? veer anu..ye kya hoying tum dono ke bich.... dhire dhire mushkuraana.....what is this??? ???...maamla kya hai jee?? ;D ;) ;)... ahaahhaha..dharam n sia both noticed the eyelocking of veer n anu....woww..abb mazaa aayega...lets see dharam kaise veer tease karta hai abb..... 8) 8) 8)
    Anu sang a folk song...wowww.. sab quality hai anu main... gr8888888....
    loved the scene when dharam did brother parts ritual for sakshi' marriage... gud going dharam...
    aahaaaaaaaa... here arrives my fav scene in the whole part... ;D :D :-*
    some local villager trying to flirt with anu n its also in present of veer...ha use pata nahi tha ki veer hai waha par... warna.. ;D
    veer came there n wooooooooooooo.... kya ans diye uss villager ko.... gr88888888888888.... he ws jealous..jealous...jealous... hehehheh...veer n anu both know the truth..but will never accept.... ;D ;D
    anu bhi kuchh kamnahi hai..she always want to love veers taang khinchai.. n veer woh bhi aise aasani se thode haath mein aayega...kuchh kam badmaash thoda hai.... 8) 8) ;)
    shera indirectly bol hi diya ki veer ws always there for her whenver she needed... blushing***... ;) ;D
    n veer also blushed...wooo..he blushed.... i cant believe..he blushed.. :o ;D ;D ;D....gr888888888888888888888888888888888
    it ws a superb convo betwn them..... :) ;D :D
    awwww poor daksha.... use pata chala gaya wht is the truth.... ha ye baat alag hai ki abhi hamaare hero heroine ko properly nahi pata.. :P
    but its gud for daksha only... now she wont be come in between their way... :)
    ohh so finally Anu ne apni jaan khatre main rakh hi di..... n dharam ko warn kiya...poor girl ..she will have to pay for it for sure.. :'( :-\
    dharam ws searching for veer...n ye kya ??? he heard convo betwn veer n pari...shoot.... wrong timing..........now he thinks that veer hides something fom him ..noooooooo...misunderstanding..ye to JV n agni ke plan ko support karega.... noooo dharam pls dont think that...plss noooo....
    so finally they started their journey to aryanagar.... :) :)

    lovely lovely lovely part jaan......awesome... just luved each n every single scene..... PERFECT...!!!!!!!!!!!! ... i dont know how many times i have read this part... :P :P ;D
    inn dino main bhi u have put sooo much efforts writing story only for us..
    Thanks a lot sweety..hugs********muaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... love yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa soo much shrads meri jaan..
    but but me gussa bhi hu..u know why... ??? ??? >:(
    n dont worry...i will wait for ur come back.... :) :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-*
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    nice, cant write a big comment but anyways, very nice so cont. soon and plzz PM me wen u cont.
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    hi me back with more comments 🤗
    what i loved :
      swati feels dharam's pain even though she is telling him off 😆 😭 king telling dharam off that he is not being very responsible but at the same time he was worried about their safety.👏👏 the minute veer said that the wedding was of sakshi you can feel the shock and tension in nivritti 😲😲😲 pity "Ma, can I retire for the night? I am tired of my aching body!" angered by the attackers that had brought him to this pitiable state aww veer is in pain but i bet he would like to beat the attackers again and again for injuring him😆 "That family again! Why does that family come back to torment my thoughts over and over... why do they show such special affection to my son, who so willingly reciprocates the same, at every instant... are my fears needless or justified... I have to meet that mother...Pari...soon... in fact, tomorrow..." me was 😲😲 and worried when i read, i wonder what nivritti will do or say to pari. This is like her worst fear coming true. she is worried as to what will happen once veer finds out the truth and will he leave her and go back to pari. 😭 Even veer noticed the tension and change in nivritti 😲 Relishing the gentle wafting breeze that swayed her open tresses against her dangling ear rings; if only veer could see shera now he would be mesmerised 😍 I hope Sakshi didi and jeejaji cherish a happily wedded life forever with the endearing company of the numerous mischievous children at the orphanage... away from all the evil eyes and viciousness here...." resting her cheeks on her knuckles; the petite smiles dreamily to herself, on recollecting the only disheartening aspect of the entire joyous event "I shall miss meeting didi at Aryanagar, now that she will reside at Sawai mostly..." i like seeing shera happy, she is so lovely , awww she will miss sakshi🤗🤗🤗 "What an adorable person Rajkumari Siya is... I wish I could have met her again... just to offer her my gratitude... but the entire royal retinue left in such a hurry..."me cant wait for shera and siya to meet and have fun 😊. Together they can run rings round dharam and veer.😆😆😆 Theirs will be a strong friendship bond😊 Rajkumar Veer... always the same reserved self... but, he did manage to smile and speak a few words by himself, without being goaded this time... such arrogance and pride hardly allows him to even start a conversation... expressing himself is a distant probability..." 🤣 at least he smiled this time at shera instead of glaring at her. shera is so right about veer's arrogance but dont worry i am sure you will be able to match his every mood 😆 love shera's picture she looks so beautiful😊 aww she has made a sword for him. 😍he better keep it safe with him and look after it "Hmmm I am merely your subject and cannot dare to exhibit vanity in your presence but, your Highness can afford being miserly with your compliments to me... Rajkumar Veer, I know that I looked no less at the wedding... and... am aware that you realized this very fact too..." continuing to gape at her profile in the blade; the petite feels a warm tone ascending the sleek outline of her soft cheek and then begins giggling at her own childish charades. 🤣she's got you there veer, you are so stingy with your comments but not your anger or arrogance, they come in abundance.🤣🤣 you cannot hide your feelings from shera, she knows you too well😆😆. she knows that you found her attractive.😳😳 Swiftly proceeding to brush the strong handle of the weapon with her fingers; Shera continues to address the inanimate object dismissively "I can predict that you would be my most difficult customer, but this sword is no ordinary one either... the extent of effort bestowed upon it by an esteemed blacksmith like myself... the exceptional craftsmanship that it now possesses... this would fetch my tribe handsome money in the market..." lool 🤣🤣shera knows you too well, aww she has put so much hard work into making this sword and she is so modest about her skill as well.🤣 If she had sold this sword, it would bring a lot of money for her tribe but for you she is giving it free 😊 But, I took pity on you and did this favour in my spare time... a small token of appreciation for having saved my life and for trying to help out my tribe now... hence, I warn you not be so reserved with your praise for this piece of art or I shall stealthily whisk it back from you Rajkumar..." her playful drama of chiding Veer, unexpectedly reminding her of the more feisty unpleasant encounters with the hot-blooded prince during her initial days at Aryanagar; awww, she wants to thank you and veer better not be stingy with your praise as shera has made the sword with all her love and hard work. Be prepared for shera's smart remarks if you are stingy with your comments 😆😆😆 "I hope I will never have to face you after the day you find out about me... more painful than the punishment I will be subjected to, would be watching how your impression towards me would degrade to one of immense dishonour, despite the truth that I am doing all this out of sheer compulsion ... now that I have warned Yuvraj Dharam of the attack on his life, I have risked myself ... it is only a matter of time, before I shall be caught..." aww shera is so worried about what you will think of her once you find out the truth. Me too hope that veer is not to harsh on shera as she is risking everything by informing dharam to be careful. She is not even worried about her own life.😭 me want veer to come and save her😊 "What am I doing? My one mistake can mean the death of my entire family'I am a strong person by nature, I should not have warned the prince... but then, how could I allow harm to such noble people... anyway Ananya, strength lies in doing the right, even in adversity...leave the rest to the Lord!" you can feel her dilemma and pain as she is worried about her tribe's security but at the same time she wants to protect dharam and veer know that she know how good for the people and the kingdom.😭 No sooner than she detects the presence of a looming shadow; the shocked petite looks up at the increasingly familiar figure, only to dismally realize that the conniving Tasha had been waiting outside, overhearing her private thoughts all along. Oh no, I was shocked when I read this, 😲😲😲 he heard everything and he is going to use this against shera for his own means. evil sick guy😡😡 I now know of all your doings and yet you calmly stand here, facing me... how bold of you to have actually warned the Yuvraj! Additionally, you lied to the tribe that your friend's wedding yesterday, was at a temple near Aryanagar...when, I actually know of the precise whereabouts of the function..." me 😭, this guy is going to cause a big problem for shera and will tell agni everything.😭 even shera knows this 😭😭 Shera forcibly swallows any of her tears and gradually strengthens herself by wisely learning to accept fate "When I have spent most of my life enduring immorality, for the sake of others... accepting baba's misdeeds...suffering your worthless existence... and now dreading Rajkumar Agni... I refuse to live the final free days of my life bringing harm to the only few selfless souls I know...so do what you may and I shall do what I consider right..." i love her strength and courage that she has suffered so much and is going to do what is right 👏👏👏 but me 😭😭 because she said that she is not going to bring harm to anyone in her final free days😭😭 "Tasha, I am curious... once you become successful at all your sordid aims of dismissing me... after you manage to grab the leadership to this small business that you possess neither the skill nor knowledge to run... would your life and time not become meaningless with none else to spy or plot against..." good answer 👏👏👏 tasha just likes to cause trouble for everyone, who will he spy on afterwards. i really hate this guy for making my shera cry 😭😭😭 "I don't know if your baba ever informed you Shera... but, Sardar had started looking out for grooms for you, a short while ago ...apparently, he has fixed your alliance with a prospective groom... the family had come home this morning to seal the proposal... Sardar is elated since they do not expect much money, gifts or goods..." he pauses mockingly "Do not fret, the man is handsome... in fact, more well-to-do than us... hardly 38 years of age... and only possesses two wives..." uffff😡this baba, how could he do this to shera. its sick that he is going to marry her off to a man with two wives😡😡😡 "I sincerely pray that you enjoy happiness in your newly wedded life with this man... but, how would you juggle your affairs with this new man's family alongside Rajkumari Agni's demands to conspire against the Yuvraj, Rajkumar Veer and everyone else... that shall indeed be a sight to watch... besides, I am not sure your new husband would be entirely happy, if he knew of how many men you continue to be associated with..." I was 😡😡😡 so angry when i read this, how dare tasha say this to shera😡 Arriving at the archways of the empty garden; the prince abruptly halts his steps, on discerning the presence of the enthralling Shramik girl inside, gracefully sitting atop a large ornamental stone. veer stops thinking am i really seeing ananya or just his imagination. 😆😆but she really is there😆 aww me so happy that he is pleased to see her.😳 He has changed so much and you can tell how he looks forward to seeing shera or smiles 😆 i love the picture of them together😍 Shera elucidates earnestly "I apologize for the disturbance... but, I learnt that you would not be arriving at the court or any of the formal meeting areas, till later this evening... hence I had to request for this audience..." awww you can request for his audience any time and i am sure that veer does not mind at all. 😍😍😍he just wont admit the fact to himself😆 the handsome royal shrugs his shoulders and persists with the subject "And what matter is of such urgency that you could not even wait till this evening..."uff veer you ask too much questions, just enjoy spending time with shera 😳. She has made a beautiful sword for you which she has got with her to give to you😊
    • "Actually the matter is not very urgent Rajkumar... it is only that I might be running out of... I mean that I might not have the time..." 😕😲 me worried what will happen next

    a wonderful part , beautiful 🤗 filled with suspense, love, bravery and understanding. i am looking forward to the next part to know what nivritti is going to say to pari and what will happen to shera 😭

    lots of hugs to you 🤗
    Edited by divareena - 16 years ago

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